[Report This]Date: March 04 2022 10:21 PM Title: Mom's snack.
This was excellent. I love that there was a giant that actually cared for them and the fact that, unlike most stories, you didn't feel the need to kill him off. My only complaint is Jake was away from Nique for at least a day and it feels like it ended abruptly.
Date: August 21 2017 1:57 AM Title: The Relatives
Looking forward to the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: January 04 2015 11:01 PM Title: The Relatives
hope more to come!!
[Report This]Date: June 23 2014 10:38 AM Title: Mom's snack.
great story. I love your work man.
Date: March 14 2014 4:03 PM Title: The Relatives
Amazing I really hope you'll write a sequel involving his cousins and aunts but I really want to see more unaware
Date: January 30 2014 9:07 PM Title: The Relatives
Are you please going to finish this?
[Report This]Date: December 14 2013 6:06 PM Title: Mom's snack.
OMG!!! Please keep this story going strong!
[Report This]Date: June 19 2013 3:17 PM Title: Mom's snack.
Great chapter and sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. Like the four chapters I missed. I wonder how Jake's mother will get back at her sister. I also hope you plan on working on the other un finished stories. You have a lot of talent.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing and yeah I plan on getting to all of them, just kinda tough to add to all of em'
[Report This]Date: June 16 2013 5:21 PM Title: Mom's snack.
About time someone hit that bitch. Cant wait for the future chapters.
[Report This]Date: June 09 2013 7:54 AM Title: Amanda's dark side.
Totally loved the last chapter. I hope you will stay it by the vore ending. I loved the idea of one unaware, the other aware about Jack's fate. And How his aunt would feed him to his mother, who wouldn't even know about it. Maybe you could write out the ironic/sarcastic event even more, including digestion, how the two woman would talk and at the same time Jake would book a one way trip through mom's bowls. Make include some more jokes by his aunt to his mother, who wouldn't know the irony of it. I also liked how his aunt got wet while watching him being devoured unknowingly.
[Report This]Date: June 07 2013 2:07 PM Title: Escape!
R.I.P., Jake. :-(
Date: June 07 2013 11:02 AM Title: Escape!
Looks like it is heading towards a "Honey I Shrunk the Kid" moment
[Report This]Date: June 07 2013 2:28 AM Title: The Relatives
Looking forward to a potential vore scene.
Date: June 06 2013 8:43 PM Title: The Relatives
please keep it going I am enjoying the story so far! I wonder if he will be discovered :o!
Date: June 01 2013 2:44 AM Title: Not again...
Was likein where the story was going honestly not into matt doing crap to him. Also honestly not into Jake shrinking again. Why not him growing back finally. Or something? Getting revenge all all those who took advantage of him while small.
Date: January 28 2013 3:16 PM Title: Master and Bug
Love the story, hope you keep writing.
Date: December 09 2012 1:46 PM Title: The Relatives
Love it, when is the next chapter?
Date: August 02 2012 1:55 PM Title: Master and Bug
The preceding endorsement was brought to you by Shameless Cross-Plugs For GTS-Loving Men. ;-)
[Report This]Date: August 02 2012 1:49 PM Title: Master and Bug
Ugh!!!! The last time I read about a shrunken guy captured by a male giant was in SORENTOPIA (see either "Old Archive" or Littlefan Productions). And, the latter turned out to be a two-timer, who gave the former away, as a love token, to his unsuspecting other girlfriend!
