[Report This]Date: December 26 2019 8:52 AM Title: July 14, 2011
One of the best stories I have ever read. It was simply... magnificent.
Date: November 01 2012 8:29 AM Title: July 14, 2011
Awesome style. Keep up your good work!
Date: November 14 2011 3:16 PM Title: July 14, 2011
glad to help; my personal fav foodplay (i guess this is a word now, isn't it?) of yours was the ice cream scene from family bondings, so i daresay there wasn't a whole lot of adjustment called for on your part. i actually did write a semi-lengthy voyeur/unaware story a while back, but have never posted it. i might at some point, though
[Report This]Date: November 13 2011 9:02 PM Title: July 14, 2011
I forgot to put a rating on my last review. I know you like your stars!
Author's Response:
Yep, I do! Lol.
Date: November 13 2011 8:37 PM Title: August 25, 2011 - Part Two
As is usually the case, your description of Ryan's plight is purely awesome. I enjoyed the way that he identified with his non-human companions inside Noelle's mouth. Very well-played.
Perhaps since Ryan's escape and subsequent sentencing to "bra duty" came at the very end of this chapter, the next chapter can be a sensual description of his predicament there.
Author's Response:
I figure that in near-death situations, you do whatever you have to do to survive. Identifying them as being in a similar situation, but helpless, empowers the character so that he feels like he could possibly survive this, because he is NOT helpless, like they are. Plus, I just like the idea of lots of living, or non-living things being swallowed at the same time. I dunno, maybe it's weird kink. *shrug* Thanks for your review, as always!
Date: November 07 2011 3:35 PM Title: August 25, 2011
good work. i always enjoy well-written foodplay (is that a word? who cares, i'm making it one) scenes, which this happens to be one of. very fun.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I will say that some of your foodplay scenes are my favorite that I've read, even for being non-micro or voyeur, and that I may have adjusted my approach a bit because of some of your work. Now, if I could get YOU to do a micro or voyeur story, I could die a happy man. Lol. Your reviews are always anticipated and welcome!
[Report This]Date: November 07 2011 12:46 AM Title: August 25, 2011
Magnificent chapter! Absolutely stunning. I cannot wait for the next part of this so I can see what happens to Ryan. I enjoy messy food scenes like this a lot. Very humiliating. Well done!
[Report This]Date: November 02 2011 11:34 PM Title: July 14, 2011
Forgot the rating...heh
Date: November 02 2011 11:33 PM Title: August 20, 2011
Really great to see you writing again. This is very different, but it's cool to see you stretching your legs in the genre, so to speak. Again, you do a great job with description. I gotta say though, I am looking forward to you continuing your other stories. Keep it up! You have anxious readers.
Author's Response:
Itr's good to be back, and writing again. Glad to see that I am not totally crashing and burning in this genre, since I normally write in the micro/voyeur genre. I do plan to get back to the other stories at some point, hopefully sooner than later. Thanks for your kind words, and great rating!
[Report This]Date: November 02 2011 11:09 AM Title: July 14, 2011
This Story was pure brilliance! It captures the life of a shrunken man who doesnt know his place in life as his beautiful owners property. he loves her but isnt sure of the relationship between them and is really confused. I loved it because I myself would love to be in his position and would find it hard to find my place as a giant girls plaything, wanting to be her slave, but also treated like a real human being and loved sometimes. Keep up the excellent work and I hope to see more work from you like this in either a sequel or a new story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I've really trying to create a realistic perspective on this whole idea. I've followed you for a while now, as well (I assume you are also the Mr.E on writing.com), and always enjoy reading your work, so hearing confirmation of a job well done from you is inspiring. Thanks again, and I'll do my best to keep it up.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2011 11:31 PM Title: July 14, 2011
I forgot to add a rating with my last post.
Date: November 01 2011 11:31 PM Title: August 11, 2011
Wow. Just wow. I am loving this story. Your writing is incredible and with every additional chapter you raise the bar to new heights. Even in Noelle's cruelty she is sensual and the writing stirs the imagination. Ryan is one lucky guy!
Author's Response:
Once again, I appreciated your review and your rating! I'm trying to do something a little different than my normal work. But I'll agree, Ryan is very lucky!
[Report This]Date: November 01 2011 6:04 PM Title: July 14, 2011
good work, i was glad to be greeted with a quality story on the most recent list after my extended absence around the site. i enjoy reading how you play with sentence types, lengths, and phrasings. it's a little english-geeky of me, probably, to enjoy those things, but the variety really does benefit the story. keep it up.
Author's Response:
Hearing those kinds of words in a forum like this is certainly out of the ordinary, but I dunno if I would call you a geek, lol. But thank you anyway, hearing from you is always great. I wish I could say that there was some formula that I use, but I honestly just write the same way that I think, which means I probably don't make much sense when I speak, haha. Can't wait to see you writing more often again.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2011 12:18 PM Title: July 14, 2011
As is usually the case with your stories, this is very sensual and appealing to read. I have enjoyed it tremendously. I look forward to future chapters and finding out where this will go.
Please continue!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've been gone lately, but I'm back, hopefully. I've seen that you've been writing a lot, and hope to get to read some of it and tell you what I think. Thanks for your review!