Date: March 12 2024 7:54 PM Title: Introduction
13 years ago... Are you still sitting here or what?
[Report This]Date: December 17 2011 8:01 AM Title: The battle begins
CHEEZO youre back XD, im happy to see you again, its sad to hear that the ending is near, (TT_TT), well any story most have an ending right! lol, will you keep on writing? I'm realy happy to be a fan of your stories XD, if you are going to end this soon, can I make a request?, its up to you if you want to do it or not, but i feel like i want to ask you and see what will happen ^^'...
my request is, I love One Piece and I want to see someone get trapped in a girl's anus for life(i.e, ass slave) (I prefer Nami).
I am not sure about how you want the story to go and how it will end, I am just a reader, and all I can do right now is write a siggustion, its all up to you, ^^''
I really enjoy your story and I HOPE that is not your last one.
bye
Author's Response: Lol it's good to be back I probably wont have the ass slave thing as my plan is to end the story with them travellIng to the new world and everything going back to normal. But that's not for certain yet ;)
[Report This]Date: November 23 2011 3:46 AM Title: Kaya has some fun
as good as always ^^ it so sad to here that i won't see any new chapters soon, but you have to do your best, good luck and i hope all the best for you ^^
I'll be waiting for your return ^^
C ya!!
[Report This]Date: November 12 2011 4:19 PM Title: Marguerite joins the fun and the strawhats attack!
are you giving up on the story TT_TT it is the best story i ever read so PLEASE!! don't end it here TT_TT im always checking for any updates
take care and good luck with whatever your doing XD
Author's Response:
Yeah sorry I'm not posting chapters at the moment. I've got exams till the end of January. After I'm done I'll definately get back to writing this story. Hopefully it will be worth the wait.
[Report This]Date: October 25 2011 5:23 AM Title: Marguerite joins the fun and the strawhats attack!
awesome return XD, the part where boa left Marguerite in her pussy was hot!
"Won't be posting chapters daily anymore", lol was it that hard? XD but youve done a great job, keep writing until the end XD
Author's Response:
I wouldn't say it was "hard" just that I don't wanna get writers block anymore lol.
[Report This]Date: October 17 2011 10:43 PM Title: The beginning of Luffy's adventure
lol enjoy your break ^^ I'll miss you XDDD
btw, what is "writer block"? I hear it a lot from writers :/
anyways, have fun & see you later XD
Author's Response: Writers block is when you can't think of what to write, or even if you can, you can't think of a good way to put it. It's also when you can't think of a beginning middle or end or maybe all three. I hope that explained it well for you.
[Report This]Date: October 17 2011 5:31 PM Title: Fun with Nami and Vivi
I didn't want chopper to join the fun, too. but it was clever idea to take him out and make him end the story XD.
LOL four perspectives!! that must be tough doing it XD I can't imagine all the dirty things they'll do to them in the next chapter *nose bleed + pervert smile*
i think you might be tired, from your last chapter it didn't looked like you put to much thinking in it, so take a rest you don't need to post a chapter every day, you've done a really good job so far ^^
Author's Response: Yeah I wasn't happy with that one too. Like I said, I hav. Writers block so I do need to take a break. I'll try to make a good comeback with the next chapter
[Report This]Date: October 16 2011 3:15 PM Title: Inside Hancock
awesome chapter I never get bored from reading it XD
LOL im glad we share similar thoughts, and I totally agree with you about shrinking margurite, to be Boa's gaintess pet, there are to many hot girls here, and its hard to think of which girl will have a shrunken girl, ><"
I think Nami can shrink Vivi or Vivi shrink Nami since they were close freinds in Arabasta, lol
are you planning on making chopper gets another girl instead of help? XD
I can't wait for your next chapter XD good luck!!!
Author's Response: Yeah I'm thinking about doing Nami and Vivi later on. Also, I'm not gonna give Chopper GTS cuz tbh I'm not into that sort of thing. He's a kid so it's just not my thing. I hope u understand. Also, I want the story to end (eventually) with them finally sailing off to the new world and the only way to have that happen is to have someone save the day. In this case, that person is Chopper. But don't worry that's a long way down the road.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2011 6:45 AM Title: Hope for the strawhats?
5 GTSs!!! and & shrunken men and raccoon XD, this story is the best thing happened in mylife, thank you god!! and thank you Cheezo, you are the best!!
have you thought about 1 GTS with all the shrunken pets? or one GTSs with a shrunken GTSs who might have a nother shrunken GTSs/pets? just passing on some [maybe] uniqe ideas XDDD
I am 100% loving your story and 24/7 watching you XDD
GOOD LUCK!!!
Author's Response:
Wow, you read my mind. That's exactly what I was planning on doing in a few chapters time. I'll leave it up to you. Hancock will be the main giantess, who do you want to be the shrunken gts and which strawhat should it happen to? Also it will eventually get to a point where they're all sharing the strawhats so I might do a chapter with one gts having all the boys.
[Report This]Date: October 15 2011 7:15 PM Title: A new world for the strawhats
sorry i forgot to rate your story XD
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks for the rating dude. I'm glad you like the story so much :) I'll try to keep you entertained.
Date: October 15 2011 7:10 PM Title: A new world for the strawhats
*nose bleed* I cant take this!! that was too hot to imagine
Date: October 15 2011 5:46 AM Title: The curse affects the rest of the strawhats
good chapter, its good to put some realistic events here and there, lol, its better to slow down a little bit. this chapter could be the introduction of strewhat crew being shrunk
I don't like it voyuer, so I would suggest that Nami and Robin discovers them in the next chapter.
its just my opinion if you have planned on what to write next, i recommend you to stick with it XD then take seggustions XDD i don't want you to get confused
kaya would be a realy awesome gentle and playful gaintess, XD ussop is a lucky bastrd -_-"
right now, all what I can say, is GOOD JOB!! im not exprete in writing but i really love your story, PLEASE KEEP ON GOING !!! XDD
Date: October 14 2011 3:57 PM Title: 12 hours underfoot
I really loled at jango XDDDDD
Author's Response: Lol. Glad you like it. I thought I'd do the Jango bit because that's what always happened in the show. Also I'm seriously thinking of taking up your suggestion and bringing kaya into the story. I'll probably have a shrunken Usopp for that part. Thoughts?
Date: October 14 2011 3:26 PM Title: 12 hours underfoot
AWESOME CHAPTER!! and thump up for the ass part XD
your doing an awesome job, i wish you all the best, cant wait for the next chapters XDDD
Date: October 14 2011 3:40 AM Title: The culprit is revealed!
ok, first, good story, seriously i liked it, im not native english and im not a good writer even in my own language, but i'll tell you my feelings,
to be honest, the story felt boring at the beginning, im not sure way, but it gave me this feeling, however, on the last chapter, the story sucked me in! and i was disappointed to see there was no new more chapters XD
I think its because of the change in events!
anyway, if you haven't planned what to write in the next chapters, I personally love to see " Nami, Boa, Vivi and Kaya doing Butt play, Anal insertion, Vagina insertion and S&M, to shrunken people"
good luck with the story, and keep it up, XD one piece is my FAV show!! so please do'nt give up on writing XDD
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it! I can see what you mean about the first few chapters. To be honest I'm disappointed in them myself. I plan to rewrite them when I finish the story. I have some idea where the story is going at the moment but it's not written in stone. As for the butt insertion and everything you mentioned, I'm not sure if I should do that because I think it would be too out of character for them. However, I might consider them doing it to other shrunken men, not Luffy. I'm also thinking of having the rest of the strawhat boys shrink. Thoughts?
Date: October 12 2011 11:52 PM Title: The beginning of Luffy's adventure
I didn't think that you break any rules. I'm also kinda new to this website and I thought that all stories were suppose to be original and not from movies or tv shows. If I knew that you can do that, I would post my stories that I have that use character from the the disney game "Kingdom Hearts" by now
Date: October 12 2011 9:01 PM Title: The beginning of Luffy's adventure
How were you able to go around the rules and post this story on this website?
Author's Response: I didn't break any rules, I said in the summary that the copyright wasn't mine and gave the story an appropriate rating. So what rules did I go around exactly? I'm new so I'm not familiar so please tell me so I can fix it. Thanks.