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Reviewer: Jamilton Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2014 2:37 PM Title: Shrunk!!

I thought it was ok but in your next part maybe add in more different types of punishment

Reviewer: Jamilton Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2014 2:37 PM Title: Shrunk!!

I thought it was ok but in your next part maybe add in more different types of punishment

Reviewer: Jamilton Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2014 2:37 PM Title: Shrunk!!

I thought it was ok but in your next part maybe add in more different types of punishment

Reviewer: GGMY Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2011 6:33 AM Title: Shrunk!!

Not a bad story for a start....well good try.......but i assume that english is not your first language......LOLZ!

 

 

sorry english is not my 1st language too.....LOLZ!!

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