[Report This]Date: May 20 2013 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Monday
Great to see it back.
[Report This]Date: May 20 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Saturday Party Time
There are so many problems with the characters and their actions that I am unable to even count them all - their behaviour is completely ridiculous for the situation, she can easily overpower him in so many ways - and yet asks to "kiss her feet"? He is at least reasonable at the beginning and obeys while trying to convince her with reason - but call her names later? What the heck?
Their discussions then become just silly - I don't know how a teenager would behave with such power, but the world would look much differently now if it was like that.
Now, I can understand your apparent desire to make the story more cruel later, but she could have simply shown that from the start - but she seemed simply not to care about him at all (or am I wrong about it), but now just behaves unreliably.
I am finished with the story after this chapter, since I cannot find any hope for the next ones. Sorry...
[Report This]Date: May 19 2013 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Monday
Great update. Love your writing style. An I can't wait till Amanda comes home on Wednesday.
aaron
[Report This]Date: May 19 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Monday
As they used to say in those carnival bell-ringing attractions: "Close, but no cigar."
[Report This]Date: January 03 2013 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sunday Night
Whew! Talk about blowing hot and cold.
[Report This]Date: December 30 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sunday Night
GREAT to see this updated.
Hope there is more.
[Report This]Date: December 29 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sunday Night
This story is just fantastic an I'm so glad to see it again. But dang if Samantha is 5'10" how tall is Alexia 6'2", cause that's sexy as hell. Also love the pace of this story. Love all the dialog too, as well as the fact that the giant girls aren't mean or vicious. They just seem to treat him good if they are treated as such... That being said I kinda think that Alexia's reaction was right on the money at the end of ch. 7. an I can't wait to see where it goes from there.
aaron
ps I enjoyed the foot/toe scenes an hope that would be some kind of toenail painting. But I really hope that his boss finds him, but that is still a long way off.
[Report This]Date: December 29 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Favor
Good story. But at the end of chapter 7 you went from I to you perspective.
[Report This]Date: September 04 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Sunday Afternoon
Great story. Can't wait to see what Amanda's reaction will be to the fact that Samantha's 'baby-sitter' is missing when she gets back. I would've loved to see how Amanda would react to him being tiny. Btw I really like the fact that the two girls are tall.
aaron
Ps is her name Alexis or Alexia? An what color are her toenails?
[Report This]Date: September 04 2012 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Sunday Afternoon
As usual, giantess cheaters _do_ prosper.
[Report This]Date: September 03 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Sunday Afternoon
I remember this!
Welcome back.
[Report This]Date: June 26 2012 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunday Morning
Necro-bump.
[Report This]Date: September 05 2011 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunday Morning
Ha! The description of that eyeglass case reminded me of those old Popeye cartoons where he briefly gets trapped inside an exaggerated giant clam. But, somehow, I don't think any amount of spinach is to going break this particular spell.
Count me in for chapter six!
[Report This]Date: August 29 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Saturday Party Time
Loving this story so far. I love how Samantha is treating the guy.
Dave
[Report This]Date: August 29 2011 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Saturday Party Time
He's "shoe" in trouble, now. ;-)
Date: August 26 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Favor
Pretty good. But I'm waiting to see some action before i give a rating.
Dave
[Report This]Date: August 25 2011 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Saturday Shopping
I think he's right. Samantha is the type of spoiled brat who won't keep any promise she feels is personally inconvenient to her. I think she's going to show-off her new toy to Alexis (or is it "Alexia?") before they even leave that store!
[Report This]Date: August 23 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Favor
Heh! I have a nephew who will be two years-old, next spring. And, I have a feeling he'll only be half the trouble for his parents that a 17 year-old daughter might be!
;-)
[Report This]Date: August 23 2011 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Friday and Samantha
If she talked to her own mother like that, Amanda would no doubt take the Bill Cosby approach and show her whose name is on the bills each month.
Whereupon, Samantha would then--equally doutlessly--shrink her!
Date: August 22 2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Friday and Samantha
Lots of potential here! I enjoy the plot building, but I hope to see you incorporate some of the themes you added in the next chapter. I'll give you a rating then. :)