Reviews For Soccer Mom's Snack
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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2023 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great erotic story. Love the knowing-your-prey and teenage angst angles. Short and sweet.

Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2011 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story is ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!

Well done.

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 08 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very appealing set-up up, and it's well written to boot.  Your dialogue gets a tiny bit sketchy in a couple spots that pulled me out of the fiction just a bit, but it's only slight.  Well done.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 07 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm not into butt or toilet myself, but even having said that, this story really was terrific for me. The use of the full lipped giantess in her 40s was great, hopefully unmarried at the time of her encounter with Sean.

Great descriptions of the lead-up to the shrinking and also of the time in her mouth. Good dialogue to let Sean know what was coming too.

Keep writing. You're good at it.

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