[Report This]Date: May 12 2023 8:25 PM Title: Kidnapping Part 2 : Morning.
James' ex is a FREAKING PSYCHO BISH! GOOD LORD, SHE NEEDS JESUS IN HER LIFE! Also, really great story. I loved it a lot. Please continue to make more amazing content like this in the future.
[Report This]Date: May 09 2023 5:11 PM Title: Kidnapping Part 2 : Morning.
James' ex is a FREAKING PSYCHO BISH! GOOD LORD, SHE NEEDS JESUS IN HER LIFE! Also, really great story. I loved it a lot. Please continue to make more amazing content like this in the future.
[Report This]Date: October 04 2022 1:33 PM Title: Kidnapping Part 2 : Morning.
You got the emotions perfectly, and I hope you make more stories like this
[Report This]Date: July 14 2015 11:01 PM Title: Sarah's Final Thoughts.
Beautiful story. Sarah's problem is that she couldn't stop the torture. She had a right to some revenge, but than goes overboard. Her carelessness put her brother in danger and ultimately his demise. She learned her lesson in a terrible hard way.
Seeing her brother's face in fear before he explodes. Knowing it was her fault and that she tortured him before that event. Her relationship with her parents not as good as before, because I can't them see loving her a much as before. That's a lot of pain.
Hopefully her son doesn't go the same way as James. She already failed as a sister. She better try not to fail as a mother as well.
[Report This]Date: June 30 2015 10:19 PM Title: It Begins
Sheesh...
It was a great story, but talk about a cruel and ironic twist of fate that the cure for it comes out right after he dies...
Good stuff, just wish it wasn't such a downer of an ending (but I understand why you chose to go that route).
Date: March 08 2013 6:46 PM Title: The Goddess Du Desir Part 2
was reading this story and got to chapter 12 and its missing is there any way to get it back in there ?
Author's Response:
Fixed it. The Chapter is back, don't know how it got deleted.
[Report This]Date: May 20 2012 5:29 PM Title: It Begins
Loved the story! But you should write more stories, involving a dad and daughter or something like that.
Author's Response:
I've actually been thinking about that, but I just can't get the spark to write it, mainly because I don't know where I'd want the story to go, what all I want to have happen in it, but that's for the support.
[Report This]Date: May 10 2012 4:36 PM Title: Sarah's Final Thoughts.
Amazing story! Loved every single chapter. However, I do have one critism. In the last chapter it's 10 years later yet she has a teenage son... What's up with that? Other than that, awesome story and I'll be looking out for that "shitty sequel" :P
Author's Response:
She had him at a younge age, and thanks, as for "shitty sequel" XD I do not believe in shitty sequels, I just believe that the directors/authors that make the sequels are either different, or outta their minds.
Date: February 29 2012 2:59 PM Title: Sarah's Final Thoughts.
very sweet, certainly helps one understand the tragedy of the previous chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. ^_^
[Report This]Date: February 27 2012 11:18 AM Title: Sarah's Final Thoughts.
Loved this ending. Was beautifully written. And it kinda brought back some memories from when I was a child. Thank you.
Aaron
Hope that you do indeed write a sequeal or a similar story.
Author's Response:
Oh wow, I'm kinda touched to read that, I'm very glad that you enjoyed it, and I'm glad that it was able to touch you in some way. ^_^ The goal of any good author is to write a story that will not only draw the readers in, but help bring something that they can related to in some way.
Date: February 22 2012 3:50 PM Title: Kidnapping Part 2 : Morning.
daaaw, i was just starting to really get into this sstory, oh well :(
Author's Response:
Sorry, lol I'm glad that you liked it as much as you have.
Date: February 22 2012 8:37 AM Title: Kidnapping Part 2 : Morning.
Noooooooooooo. :'( Poor Sarah...
Author's Response:
Yeah, not exactly something that she's going to move on from easily.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2012 10:23 PM Title: Kidnapped Part 1
love the story so far. cant wait to read what happens next
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you like it I should have the next chapter out soon.
[Report This]Date: December 17 2011 6:45 AM Title: It Begins
I would really like to see an incest chapter between James and his mom. If you're not comfortable with that kind of thing though then don't worry bout it ;) great story! Look forward to your next chapter
Date: November 22 2011 4:51 PM Title: The Goddess Du Desir Part 2
:-(
Author's Response:
Hey I got that tag there for a reason.
[Report This]Date: November 22 2011 2:01 PM Title: The Goddess Du Desir Part 2
Well, at least it's not incest.
Author's Response:
Yet.
[Report This]Date: November 21 2011 8:52 PM Title: The Goddess Du Desir Part 2
Great Chapter. Looks like James in in for a great time!
Author's Response:
I know right?
[Report This]Date: November 01 2011 2:59 PM Title: The Goddess Du Desir
To quote the legendary Mr. G: "More of a treat than a trick."
Bravo (and thanks)!
Author's Response:
Haha, I'm glad you like the story.
[Report This]Date: October 31 2011 12:34 PM Title: The Goddess Du Desir
Awesome chapter. I kinda forgot about this story. Hope to see more. Can't wait to see what happens next between these two.
Aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad to see you found it again. ^_^
[Report This]Date: October 30 2011 12:51 PM Title: The Goddess Du Desir
Woah! Great chapter! Cant wait to read what happens next. Looks like James is in for a wild ride.