[Report This]Date: August 16 2011 9:33 PM Title: Sarah's Thoughts Part 2
Brilliant. Glad your keeping the loving sister and the horny girl aspect going. Greqt mix :P
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: August 16 2011 7:30 PM Title: Sarah's Thoughts Part 2
Awesome story so far. Cant wait til the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you, and I'll try to have another one by this weekend, depends on if I'm working overtime.
[Report This]Date: July 31 2011 9:39 PM Title: It Begins
real nice keep it up
Date: July 31 2011 6:30 PM Title: It Begins
Excellent chapter, he keeps getting smaller and will soon be able to fit in her socks.
Date: July 23 2011 2:28 PM Title: No more school and no more books....
all what i can say right now is, can you please write the next chapter asap ><!!
Author's Response:
Haha. XD I'm gonna wait a little bit to add another chapter since I did a double this week.
[Report This]Date: July 23 2011 11:48 AM Title: It Begins
I like this story and think that, if you really stick with it and take time to build up tension and the forth-coming intereactions between the brother and sister, that this could become a nice little classic. I think the diary stuff is absolutely a good thing to use here, as it gives us the sister's perspective. I think giving us some humiliating scenes each time he hits a new low in terms of height is key. We all know that he'll eventually end up at an inch and likely be degraded beyond belief at her feet, but leading up to that stuff is important to. You have talent, so please keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the view, yours is by far the most helpful as far as giving me your thoughts to help improve the story, I will take your advice and I'll use it.
[Report This]Date: July 23 2011 1:46 AM Title: No more school and no more books....
Good Stuff. Like the fact that she wants to take advantage but also considers his feelings. Keep that up
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you like it, and I will.
[Report This]Date: July 23 2011 12:42 AM Title: It Begins
PLEASE MAKE HIM HAVE IN A CHEER LEADER PARTY!
Author's Response:
I think not.
[Report This]Date: July 22 2011 10:15 PM Title: No more school and no more books....
Keep up the great story, man. This just keeps getting better. Love the direction you're going with it.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it, and thank you for the review, these are what keep me writing.
Date: July 22 2011 5:04 AM Title: Sarah's Thoughts.
please make him shrink mooore >< i want to see him in her ASS ><
but great story!!! keep it up XD
Author's Response:
Haha I wrote that last bit for you, ;) I figured you'd like that little after thought of her wanting to put him up her ass.
[Report This]Date: July 22 2011 1:53 AM Title: Sarah's Thoughts.
10. Please keep it up
Author's Response:
Thank you, and I plan on it.
Date: July 22 2011 1:53 AM Title: Sarah's Thoughts.
10. Please keep it up
Date: July 21 2011 11:07 PM Title: It Begins
Really enjoying the story so far. I hope he does end up in her socks. She should wear him in them to school all day.
Date: July 21 2011 8:07 PM Title: Sarah's Thoughts.
FINISH IT!
incredible!
make him at least 5 inches..maybe smaller!
i want to know what her reaction is
but at the final seen. dont do diary!
Author's Response:
Haha, I'm not giving away how small I intend to make him, but I will say this, the story isn't finished yet, I've still got a fair few more chapters left to write.
Date: July 21 2011 7:04 PM Title: It Begins
I love the story. The only part I don't like is the wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work can't wait till he is really small and for the sister to start doing the things she is thinking about.
Author's Response:
Haha, I'm glad you're enjoying the story thank you for your support.
[Report This]Date: July 21 2011 4:03 PM Title: Sarah's Thoughts.
I liked the diary motif. Lends the story an air of verisimilitude (a word that the legendary Carl Reiner once wanted to "stamp out;" lol!).
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you like the story, and I can't see why he'd want it stamped out, but I guess in a sense I do, because it means to give a work of fiction truth when there isn't any truth in fiction.
[Report This]Date: July 15 2011 4:32 AM Title: Visiting the Doctor.
Good stuff, please update it soon, can't wait for the action :D
“Who said anything about me shitting on you? Though if you would like me to, I'd be more than happy to oblige you,” she said giggling.
Really looking forward to that :D
Author's Response:
Hahaha, I take it you're a toilet fan, well I'll be putting some of that into the story later on.
Date: July 14 2011 12:53 AM Title: It Begins
hey more of this would be awesome and add some cleavage to the storie like when he shrinks fully
Author's Response:
Haha, I plan to do more than that when he's fully shrunk.
[Report This]Date: July 10 2011 2:05 PM Title: It Begins
This was a very good intro, I love the conflict quickly pre-established and the shrinking teaser reached by the end. I do like the description of the sister (spoken as a breast man :P) though as someone mentioned would like a little more context, such as age, but I understand you will provide.
I can't wait to read on about how his sister treats him!
Date: July 10 2011 9:58 AM Title: It Begins
I liked the begining, can't wait for the next chapters
good job