Date: September 19 2020 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hello Bob. Yes, I'm still around and would like to thank you for many of your yarns...which are quite stimulating!
I don't supose you'll reply to this after so long, but, if you do, you'll be so welcomed.
BTW: MY EMAIL ADDRESS IS banfield18@blueyinder.co.uk
Date: December 28 2012 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story, I hope to learn more about Rachel and Marcy.
Date: May 31 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
I say, Bob, it's good to see you are continuing submitting a yarn. However, this one "Dinner for two" seemed to lack any eroticism such as the more revealing description of the two diners. The story simply read like any other yarn - rather mundane and offering no form of excitement. I rather feel that it was a rush job.
One thing I'd like to point out is that the act of swallowing can hardly give the girls the essence/flavour of taste. Perhaps it's me, Bob, having read so many stories of this type. So please forgive my criticisms.
Author's Response:
This was a bit of a rush. Not my best work but I wanted to submit something so I was left with this. Best wishes.