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Reviewer: Certamen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2012 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

 

i really liked this story. It had most of the stuff I fantasize about, and the writing was pretty good.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2011 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, and if this site permitted the awarding of a sixth star, you would most definitely have it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2011 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Actually, dude, you did better than I did with the opening chapter of _my_ very first gts-story!

No misspellings that I could detect. And, your omniscient author narration is flawlessly separate from the direct quotes of your characters. So, for those two reasons alone, I will most definitely be here for chapter 2.

Welcome to the club!

Author's Response: Well this isn't my first story. I started by writing a little story that I intended to be just about vore. I have a sequel planned and eventually will run a miny series just satisfying lust. Thanks for the kind words of encouragement.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

hope to see more from you...


aaron

Author's Response: Thanks I'll try not to disappoint. I have more stories available on deviant art under the same name.

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