Date: March 26 2011 10:56 PM Title: Hailey takes charge
Great job so far, please keep going! I love foot stuff, so major kudos!
Date: March 26 2011 6:41 AM Title: Hailey takes charge
Great story. I would love more with her torturing her brother even more. Maybe make him a part of her ass or always in her ass crack.
Date: March 25 2011 8:00 PM Title: Rachel's little foot slave
spelling and grammar mistakes get overlooked when the story is this good. cant wait for the next update
Date: March 24 2011 9:30 PM Title: Alone time with Beth (Wink)
very enjoyable story
Date: March 23 2011 11:10 AM Title: The start of a long night
Lovin' the story. Maybe have one of the girls trap him in her boot (uggs?) and play crush him under the sole of the boot and worship it. Either way can't wait for the rest.
Date: March 23 2011 10:28 AM Title: The start of a long night
Liked the story. Especially the last part of Chapter III. Hope there will be more like it in the rest of the story.
Date: March 22 2011 10:48 PM Title: The start of a long night
Good story.
What's a "tree hill girl"?
Author's Response:
One tree hill from the show. The girls on there.
Date: March 22 2011 9:00 PM Title: Alone time with Beth (Wink)
beth surprised me... didnt think that she had it 'in' her. lol
an this story is turning out great. wonder if the other girls will be mean, nice, or will beth try an steal him??
aaron
Date: March 21 2011 10:53 PM Title: Your sister's personal play toy.
sweet... is he gonna try to give beth a pedicure?
love how this story is turning out. an the plot is pretty cool
aaron
ps does the mom come into the story?
Author's Response:
I might have something more special for him for the pedicure. And i don't know maybe later in the night.
Date: March 21 2011 8:41 PM Title: Your sister's personal play toy.
great start so far. looking forward to what happens next
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'll try to post a chapter a day.
Date: March 21 2011 4:54 PM Title: The start of a long night
I belive that this is a very good start to the story.
Date: March 21 2011 3:57 PM Title: The start of a long night
realy i see no problem, now you just got to figure out the concluusion and after that figure out how yoour going to get to the conclusion. every good writer knows therebegining and end before it ever goes down on paper s
p.s. sorry about the spelling iwas typing and on the exercis bike at the same time
Date: March 21 2011 3:47 PM Title: The start of a long night
I LOVE giantess cheerleaders. Can't wait for the next addition.
Date: March 21 2011 8:53 AM Title: The start of a long night
good start.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind review. Like i said it's hard coming up with a starting point.