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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 16 2023 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was pretty well written. Pretty good erotic story, where the young man is entrapped after meeting an attractive nice girl in a coffee shop, not suspecting he was being observed by the girl, who shrinks the guy down and serves him on a platter to the wealthy Lady Vanessa. Good job on the characters here. One can sense the regret in the serving girl.

Reviewer: larogei Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2009 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

I liked the contrast between Eileen's goodness and Vanessas's evil. Add to my favorites.

Author's Response: Thanks for your comment , larogei!!

Reviewer: Right Wing Attack Dog Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2008 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

i hope the "lady" vannessa gets her due. good story

Author's Response: thanks for reading, RWAD!

Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2007 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, dear. An unhappy ending. Oh, well can't win it all the time. And good grammer, with the exception of the times you forgot to put in quotations, but nobody's perfect. good al in all good. respond.

Author's Response: thanks for reading my story and commenting on it, Zalrus!

Reviewer: andy2283 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2006 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this Story. The story contains a lot of moments with anticipation. The power submission is really strong in this story.

Author's Response: Thanks, Andy, glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Vito Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2006 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good story, but has a major tech. error. HIV is transmitted only by direct blood to blood contact. Digestion and absorption preclude that.

Author's Response: thanks Vito! i was actually aware of that fact, but hey, it sounded like plausible drama at the time :-) thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Anonymous starstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2006 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good story Nostromo, with a surprise ending. I guess Vanessa is in for it now, er. I kept hoping Kevin would escape and wondered what power Vanessa had over the woman and her father.

Author's Response: thanks stanley. i was not in a mood for a chapter story so i prefered to just hint at the relationship master/servant rather than try and develop this part.

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