[Report This]Date: March 05 2013 4:35 PM Title: The Tutoring Continues
This has to be one of the best stories I've read in my entire life!
10 stars!
Author's Response:
10 stars, eh? Haha that's freakin' awesome! Much appreciated!
[Report This]Date: March 04 2013 9:13 PM Title: Epilogue
Excellent work of erotic fantasy! Loved this 'Teacher/Student', Idea.....
The Tantilizingly slow, spread-out, torture, of this poor, shy, student, by the teacher, and the sexy, spoiled rotton girl next door..........Damn, great stuff!!!
I think I had some dreams along this line, at some point while in school,....this brought back memorys, and stirred up emotions that I hadn't felt in a long time.
Really, the part where Brianna has the 'Squishy-Doll-Toy'? That really happened to ME!
A girl in school would tease me, like that(Playing with it in front of me, and putting it in her mouth, and giggling at my awkward reaction!)
Her name was Debbie, I'll never forget THAT!
Great story! Loved it!
Author's Response:
I really appreciate all the positive comments, and I'm glad you could relate. Debbie sounds awesome!
[Report This]Date: March 04 2013 1:49 AM Title: Epilogue
Wonderfull thankyou for the epillogue.
Dave
[Report This]Date: September 09 2011 5:27 AM Title: Daydreaming
This is missing an 'inside the stomach' paragraph.
Also i think Brianna should've had a bigger role after he'd shrunk
Other than that, this story was spectacular.
I am in love with that teacher, i really want to be her student.
[Report This]Date: April 19 2011 12:42 AM Title: Daydreaming
This was a fantastic story. I really enjoyed it very much. Are you still planning an epilogue? I hope so. To me the most interesting character in the story was Brianna. I would love to find out the things she does to her shrunken teacher. Please do your epilogue idea.
[Report This]Date: April 12 2011 1:02 AM Title: Daydreaming
Great story. I hope you are still planning an epilogue. I loved Brianna in this story. I would love to know what she does with her shunken teacher.
[Report This]Date: April 10 2011 9:17 AM Title: The Tutoring Ends
I don't what happened to my original review. So, I'll just have to settle for giving you a hearty "Well-done!"
:-)
[Report This]Date: April 09 2011 7:31 PM Title: The Tutoring Ends
Loved this story and would really appreciate another chapter (or epilogue) on how Mr Anderson is getting along with Brianna!
Date: April 02 2011 12:54 AM Title: The Tutoring Continues
Wow this is fantastic. Please keep the story going.
Author's Response: Only one more chapter left and then the story is finished.
[Report This]Date: April 01 2011 3:26 PM Title: The Tutoring Continues
:-O
[Report This]Date: March 28 2011 11:09 PM Title: New Form of Tutoring
I love the story and this was a great chapter. Will Nick be given to Brianna? I think that could be fun.
Author's Response:
Sorry, but Nick doesn't spend any more time with Brianna. It's Tiffany for the next two chapters, and then the story ends.
[Report This]Date: March 28 2011 9:34 PM Title: New Form of Tutoring
No matter what she does to him, he's going to inevitably, masochistically enjoy it. So, the only way I can see her teaching him to know despair, instead, is to just plain crush him!
The only other option is to abstain from doing _anything_ sexual to him, what-so-ever. But, somehow, I think that that alternative would be much worse for Tiffany. After all; to paraphrase the old saying: "Abstinence makes the part grow harder!"
Date: March 28 2011 8:54 PM Title: New Form of Tutoring
this is really getting good. i almost wish that brianna had gotten some more time with nick, but this is just as good, if not better.
[Report This]Date: March 22 2011 8:20 PM Title: Daydreaming
really liking the story so far. please continue
[Report This]Date: March 20 2011 7:00 PM Title: Finishing What You Started
Double uh-oh!
[Report This]Date: March 20 2011 12:28 AM Title: Daydreaming
Great story. Cant wait to see the situations he's put in to.
[Report This]Date: March 19 2011 10:46 PM Title: Finishing What You Started
now were talking... lol
an will we hear more about this mr. anderson guy an brianna?
Author's Response:
Originally no, but I have been thinking ever since I've started editing this story that there should be an epilogue chapter about Brianna and Mr. Anderson. Haven't decided for sure if I'm going to do it yet though.
Date: March 13 2011 10:02 PM Title: Daydreaming
awesome story....please continue
Author's Response:
The story is actually already finished. I just haven't proof read the rest of it, so don't worry, this won't be an unfinished story.