Reviews For Sibling Rivalry
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: December 02 2013 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
"I felt her finger press against the back of her head" is funny :)
Hope you get back to writing someday
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: December 02 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've been trying not to necropost, but "Her smirk turned in to wide teeth bearing grin" :)
I haven't finished reading this story -- ten stars because I've been enjoying the others without commenting how good they were!