Date: December 01 2017 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
How was phil not suicidal?
[Report This]Date: August 01 2013 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a very well written story. I especially loved the facesitting part. I kind of sympathise with the character of the boy. He's always embarassed, humiliated infront of everyone on his birthday, his attempts of having a girlfriend ruined by his mother, he was humiliated on television, he fed on his mother's waste. living in her mother's ass the best part was how the mother shrank him and brought him to full size.. These all angles are unique and awesome. I really enjoyed reading them. I personally like the way you described each activity. While reading I sometime had the feeling that I was that boy. Very good and unique story. I hope to read more of it very soon. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story with the world.
Date: July 04 2013 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really love your work!!! I enjoy all the stuffs and the way that phil's mom daominate him.
I red your story for the first time during it progress, and now i'am hoping to see a chapter 18, 19,.....
will you continue it, or do I resign to not see an as well story stop here?
Author's Response:
Thanks, it's nice to hear you enjoyed it.
I actually had one ending planned out and then scrapped it for another, and then life and work got in the way.
I'll try and finish it though.
Date: April 20 2013 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have to say I have been enjoying this story so much.All the stuff is amazing to me, especially drinking butt sweat and toilet stuff. And what turns me on most is the way the mother humiliate her son in words, which sounds sweet but unrejectable.I feel both jealous and sympathy for the hero to have such a mother possessing beauty,power,srrong will and cruelty.What a fantastic stort it is!
However, I think butt sweat isn't enough for the son to drink for life,so what about other liquid,such as .Looking forward to your new work.And I'd like the hero and his mother to be younger next time. Personally I think it is more exciting when a little boy is tutored and loved this way.
[Report This]Date: November 02 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
Glad you made a return to this story. Great chapter
[Report This]Date: August 04 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loving this story. Please keep updating it.
Author's Response:
Aw shucks, thanks.
[Report This]Date: August 01 2012 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love the way this story more or less abandons a plot and snapshots around to different points of their, uh, relationship (for your female character I think of "generic 40 yr old woman" or something). That's kind of the way I read it, skipping around. The vore and scatalogical stuff kind of grosses me out (but so does something minor like chewing with the mouth open), but I love the interesting power dynamic you have going, and most of the sketches.
Author's Response:
I started this story up with the idea of having as lose a plot in mind as possible, and to be honest, beyond setting up a consistent background for Phil's mom to be dominating him it's become something of a hindrance. The time-skip set up allowed me to explore a lot of new ideas that I previously couldn't, but then I still find I have a bunch more for a more grounded mother-and-son-in-the-home scenario. That's part of the reason it took so long for me to get this finished.
Oh and don't worry about the toilet stuff. I never thought it was too bad (though of course it's a polarizing fetish) but it's pretty much gone away now.
Date: April 09 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Will this story end with Phil exacting his revenge? Because that would be amazing!
I await the next update.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 13
This was a great chapter. Makes me wish women could really shrink men and do these things to them. I'd be the first guy to sign up. Not with my mom doing these things to me no. But with my fiancé doing these things to me.
Dave
Author's Response:
That's cool man. I sure don't imagine myself in the role of Phil in this story, which might be a little weird but eh. It's just a fantasy, brought on by reading one-too-many stories and seeing one-too-many Namio Harukawa drawings.
Glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: September 01 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
Just want to say I'm REALLY enjoying this so far! The way you've made the mom a complete dom but also still kinda motherly is REALLY unusual and I LIKE it!!! Also I love all the huge butt stuff so plz keep it up!!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I've got another chapter planned out which should be in a very different style, just to change it up.
[Report This]Date: August 31 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm normally not in to mother son stuff, But I love ass worship and smothering. So I find this story very erotic.
Dave
[Report This]Date: July 06 2011 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter. I had a question though. Phil's mom said he would be living in her butt crack forever. But children usually outlive their parents. Would he have to die with her? Or would his mother leave Phil to his sister so she could continue his torture?
Dave
Author's Response:
I have thought about this, but it's unlikely to get addressed properly in the story. There may be third or fourth options on the table as well as those two, there may not be. Draw whichever conclusions suits your tastes best.
Date: June 24 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
great stuff. love it all
[Report This]Date: June 04 2011 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow that was a fantastic chapter.
Dave
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: May 23 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love ass worship stories and I'm addicted to this story. Great job. Please keep going.
Dave
[Report This]Date: April 19 2011 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
woaw!that's the better story i'd ever read! you have such a good imagination! it would be great if you continue it!
Date: April 13 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm not into face sitting, at all, yet I find myself addicted to this story. I just love the mother son relationship, the whole kind/gentle treatment of Phil, yet it's all very SM. Usually, mother/son stuff is a turn off for me just because of the sexual connotations, but this is different. I love it! And Phil is so willing, but he's not like...obsessed. Idk how to explain how you do it, but keep doing it:)
Author's Response:
I'd actually originally intended for this story to feature more foot stuff because I know that's more popular here, but there's just something about the image of Phil's mom dropping him into her butt that I keep coming back to.
[Report This]Date: April 01 2011 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
Good story even though I'm not in to moms dominating sons, I like girlfriends or wives dominsting men
Author's Response:
Well there's tons of that out there.
[Report This]Date: January 10 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good Story, Very unique. I like how he submits right away. i usually draw it out.
Author's Response:
It's not so much that he's submitting. I'm not entirely set on what I'm going for but we'll see what happens.
Oh and I like your stories on writing.com, so thanks for the kind words!