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Reviewer: Blackstorm99 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2013 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 Elizabeth's Pains and Demons

Think story is definitely one of the best I have read. This story is one that I hope u complete..

Reviewer: Chozo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2013 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1 Elizabeth's Pains and Demons

I concur with Zephilia. You must finish this!

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2012 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 7 Lizzy & Tae's Games

Love the story, hope you finish it.

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Date: January 21 2011 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 3 Elizabeth's Friend Shawntae

"High cheeks bones and large dimples were the size of a hummer."

 Just want to mention that high cheek bones are a trait of Caucasians and Asians, so since Shawntae is black that would be inaccurate.

Great story though. Sorry to nitpick.



Author's Response: Not exactly, my sister's black and got noticeable cheek bones but hey thanks and its no prob.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 7 Lizzy & Tae's Games

man i wanted her to finger herself or the other girl to throw the other into the clit.great work

Author's Response: well we can't always get what we want but I hope it was enjoyable enough =D

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 7 Lizzy & Tae's Games

great chapter. happy new year

Author's Response: thanks and happy new year to you too

Reviewer: 360fighter Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2010 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 7 Lizzy & Tae's Games

Yes! A new chapter

Author's Response: Yup

Reviewer: 360fighter Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2010 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 Elizabeth's Pains and Demons

I hope you continue to write this story. I really like it

Author's Response: Well sir. Thanks to you I did =D

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 6 Elizabeth's Joy

really loving this tale.

the ending was great as well as the plot. great job.

aaron

Author's Response: thanks =D and I had a feeling that ending chapter 6 that way would help a lot.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 5 Shawntae's Idea

1 down 11 to go... still a very sexy and entertaining story. cant wait to see where you take this.

aaron

ps if 'lizzy' can just grow them by just thinking about it... why doesnt she just grow melany so she can find her? an im glad i got your juices flowing again...

Author's Response: Thanks a lot and I'm pretty sure how this all ends should be quite spectacular. PS. No worries, I had that in mind but the way I'm writing it. Lizzy missed that key fact...for now that is. ^^ And yeah, it was a good boost =D

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 Elizabeth's Pains and Demons

damn... have to ask, is ronnie gonna be the one behind this? or does he get shrunk?:)


this story is finaminal!! loved all the chapters, although chapter 4 is by far my favorite. feel like im beating a dead horse but, the dialog was great, the descriptions were as well, and although i do prefer a 'gentler' type giantess, i for some reason dont mind one bit. lol. hope to see more chapters.

aaron

ps loved the fact that your chapters are 'long'. it very refreshing, this is definetely a tale you can sink your teeth into... well done.

Author's Response: Whoa o.o Well what can I say, thanks and my lips are sealed >=D so you ain't going to know a thing until written ^^ And again thanks, I pride myself on detail and dialog. Even though I wish my diction was a lot better for now my wording is doing the trick. Sadly things are going to get violent before its gentle again. Stick around again thanks this comment gave me enough juice to get started on cap five ^^

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 Elizabeth's Pains and Demons

Very sexy and well written. You're quite descriptive, which is always good in these types of stories. As it goes on, I imagine it'll get more violent than my tastes generally run but for now I'm enjoying it a lot.

Author's Response: Yes, description makes everything ten times better =D Also, yes and I'm sorry it will get cruel and violent from here on out but the ending result is worth it. Trust me.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2010 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 3 Elizabeth's Friend Shawntae

cant wait to see where it goes. hopefully some insertion

Author's Response: Maybe. I'm sure we'll have a little bit of everything.

Reviewer: liplok Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 1 Elizabeth's Pains and Demons

Very well written. Keep those chapters coming !

Author's Response: Thanks and I will =D

Reviewer: 360fighter Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 Elizabeth's Pains and Demons

Wow. That was very good. Looking forward to future chapters

Author's Response: Thanks =D I should be able to put up a new chapter this weekend...or two

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