Date: December 31 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
This story is pretty neat. It says you've completed it but each chapter has "to continued..." at the end. Though I have read the end of the thrid one (the last one) and it says "the end for now" so I can only assume you will continue it in the future.
Could do with a little more description to help the reader vizualize but I don't think that much more is needed.
Date: October 05 2010 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
LOL! Great ending. And, not a bad way to rejoin the club, either.
Welcome home, Mr_G! It's been too long.
Date: October 05 2010 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
They should have hired Ray Venn to investigate these strange rooming arrangements. But, then again; if they had, we wouldn't have this fine new story. Now, would we? ;-)
Date: October 05 2010 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have a feeling Anne would have decided to lie to her bosses, on her own, if Buck hadn't chosen to be so peremptory (always wanted to use that word!) with her. What shrinks--psychiatrists, that is--call "natural-born counter-punchers."