Reviews For Amy and Jackson
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Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter One - Jackson, meet Amy

Still digging the tone of this story. But two questions: Why are they so calm about being eaten? And who are John and Megan? I thought the story was called "Amy and Jackson."

Reviewer: andymich65 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter One - Jackson, meet Amy

i really like this story. i love the perspective from inside the stomach

Reviewer: Star Sage Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter One - Jackson, meet Amy

Not bad, the original interactive was Shrinking Down to Size on WDC.



Author's Response: Yeah, like I said - I took the sections I originaly wrote, cleaned them up a bit (several years of writing will let you see ALL kinds of flaws) and put them here. I'm taking a couple of my threads from several branches and combining them into one big ol' arc.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter One - Jackson, meet Amy

Interesting start. I like how casual they are about their situation and her having swallowed him alive. It gives this a very different tone from other stories. Curious to see where it goes.

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