[Report This]Date: September 26 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
hey i really liked the thing in the middle where the sister gets big... maybe you should try to take it out and complete it_
Date: April 08 2008 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent story, and for once, someone's GTS story has a moral. Shocking to find, but it's a nice touch. Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: June 30 2007 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
tis one of my favorite stories
[Report This]Date: November 21 2006 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a great story and very fun for myself being a voyeur and shrink fan.. I'm not so big on the crush aspect but I enjoyed the story alot. The one thing that did bother me was how often he just happened to lose the gun, even after experiencing real danger from losing it before. I would think a person would be more careful about where it went and keep a close eye on it, but that would of changed the story. Thank you for this!
Author's Response: Hey thanks for the comments Billyevil, I had alot of fun writing this one. I tried to make losing the gun a big part of the story line. It kept the little guys getting in harms way, if you know what I mean. Again thanks for the reveiw.
Date: May 15 2006 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
hey, i definitely second what Asukafan wrote below!
[Report This]Date: April 27 2006 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story, I liked how natural everything felt. Nothing felt like it was forced, it was like reading a actual story. I especially liked the ending, it was fitting. It was nice to see some of the people die as it left you guessing what would happen, but everyone didn't die so it didn't feel cheesy. I can't wait to see what you cook up next. 10 out of 10 on this one rip!
Author's Response: Asukafan, Thank you so much for the comments. I have been a big fan of your writing ever since I discovered GTS on the internet. Your sites are always top notch. I had fun writing "Joey's Clubhouse". I look forward to posting more stories on your great site.