[Report This]Date: April 29 2026 11:31 PM Title: Epilogue - Seeds of a Queen’s Dark Empire
Combining multiple fetishes is a great idea! I remember reading a story on DeviantArt a long time ago about a poor girl who gets a magic book and takes revenge on everyone. It also had a lot of fetishes: absorption, object tf, body part tf, av, unbirth—the combination is fantastic.
Your story, however, felt a bit lacking in plot development; after the chapters with Andrew, everything started happening too quickly.
[Report This]Date: April 29 2026 5:42 PM Title: Epilogue - Seeds of a Queen’s Dark Empire
Amazing story and conclusion. Really liked the body part TF stuff, that was a cool addition. Could have done without the toilet content personally but that's just my preference. And love that she seeded more danger into the world into the end.
As for future ideas, how about things like:
1. A girl turns her boyfriend into panties as part of a playful thing, teases him by leaving him out for the night to wear him the next morning, but then some mix up leads to her roommate or sister putting him on, and now she's just following her roommate/sister around feeling somewhat stressed as they do things like go to a Pilates class or go out dancing or whatever, just waiting for her to take the panties off but not wanting to reveal it's her boyfriend.
2. Maybe some runner realizes that she can compete better with entirely custom clothing tailored to her, starts transforming people against their will to make perfect shorts / sports bra / shoes / etc. Maybe can't turn them back after because it's illegal to use TFed people to get an edge or something.
3. With the body part thing, what if absorbing someone could treat an injury? Like say a woman broke her foot but has an important soccer game or something coming up, and doing that TF absorption thing will heal her foot immediately instead of waiting, though the person who gets absorbed is now trapped as a foot forever.
4. What if a girl who works at a tattoo parlor takes someone she hates and turns them into tattoo ink, resulting in them ending up as a tattooed hear or something on some girl's butt cheek?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the positive review! Totally hear you that not every type of content/theme is for everyone; this story ended up being more of a grab bag of wildly different ideas I find interesting than I originally planned for, so I may experiment with keeping future stuff more focused on specific kinks/areas to avoid that sometime. But glad that some elements of it worked for you either way!
And thanks for those additional ideas, they all sound really interesting and unique to explore. I plan to revisit the world/technology of this story at some point, so hopefully can play around with working some of those concepts into future stories--I truly appreciate your feedback!
[Report This]Date: April 23 2026 12:03 PM Title: The Queen Takes Control of the Board
Loved chapter 5 with her transforming so many people. I could read about her disappearing people all day. I think it would be fun if she made someone into a tooth brush.
She had a lot of fun sentencing people to permanent hell situations, maybe she should try some more temporary ones? Like she turns someone into a snack and eats them or watches someone else eat them, or she turns someone into a tube of lipstick and uses a little bit of them up each day, or same idea with like deodorant or something.
[Report This]Date: April 22 2026 7:46 PM Title: The Queen Takes Control of the Board
Love it!
Author's Response:
Sorry to be so late in responding to this but thank you for the kind words! Glad it was a good read!
[Report This]Date: April 16 2026 6:21 PM Title: The Queen Seeks Out Her Pawn
Great story! Might be fun for her to use her newfound hacked app on some unassuming people. Like would love to see her get her friend a last minute birthday present by transforming some unassuming barista into a yoga mat, or turn an annoying guy or girl at the gym into a new bike seat for the exercise bike
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words! I'm still mulling over where to take this story next and how much remains to be told naturally, but I love your suggestions and I may just use variations of them for inspiration--hope it continues to be a good read.
Date: April 10 2026 5:13 PM Title: The Pawn Offers Himself Up
Loving this story so far!!! Such a good set up! Can’t wait to see how he handles one of her workouts!
Author's Response:
So glad you're enjoying it! That's definitely an area I enjoy focusing on too; hopefully the recent and future content pushes some of those buttons.
[Report This]Date: April 10 2026 5:05 AM Title: The Pawn Offers Himself Up
Thong transformation stories are my favorites, and this is one of the best I've read in years. Thanks for sharing it!
Author's Response:
They've always been a favorite of mine too -- glad it's been a good read!
[Report This]Date: April 09 2026 1:07 PM Title: The Queen Seeks Out Her Pawn
This is amazing. There aren't many stories about this fetish where living panties literally absorb all the secretions and give pleasure to the owner. I hope the transformed people will remain conscious and will describe their suffering. I can't wait for the action to begin!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it! Glad you enjoyed the start.
And I agree, I think it's an underutilized concept even in this genre of stories, really drives home the helplessness, humiliation, and domination of the victim; I always struggle to find stuff that scratches this itch too. So I kinda got fed up and decided to write something from scratch to press those buttons, hah.
Anyhow, I don't want to spoil anything for you, but I am optimistic you won't be too disappointed with where it goes given what you're asking about!