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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

P.S.---Excellent job of straightening out the glitch! :-)

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Date: May 06 2010 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 2

Rose seems to be selectively myopic. Didn't the megas of so-called Normal World become micros after their ill-fated war with Sizeloa? Making the female inhabitants of the former shrunken women?

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Date: April 30 2010 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 2

Your computer seems to have developed a glitch in that the second half of chapter 2 became one long indecipherable paragraph. But, if there's a chapter 3 (and it's legible), I assure you I will be here to read it.

:-)

Author's Response: I had no idea that happened to chapther two. I went through and hopefully fixed the probelem. There is no chapther three, but Natalie and freinds might show up in future stories.

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Date: April 30 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent first chapter!

Don't worry, though; I won't plagiar...I mean, "liberally adapt" any of these characters for my pastiche. I've got too many to keep track of now, as it is!!

;-)

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