Well, Amanda, I for one rate this yarn very highly. You have that unique style and that captivating quality that sets you apart from the usual string of stories.  As you now know, I've emended and added to it, so if any reader here would care to see it, then let me know and I shall get it posted.    Jolly well done that girl.

Author's Response:

Thank you banfield i do appreciate your comments,i seemed to have upset some authors on this forum? its funny how people react when they can't have thier own way  aaah thier los your gain hehe.

Amanda.