[Report This]Date: April 19 2010 1:10 AM Title: Prologue – First Encounter
I have to agree with the other reviewers. This is one of the most compelling stories I have ever read. The creativity and imagination in creating this world is really what sets this story apart. The Bachelor/Bachlorette party scenes were pure genius. I think that problem with a lot of stories in the gts is that the authors are too eager to get to the sex and in doing so they create two dimensional characters. These kinds of stories read like a bad 80s porno where a shrunk plumber shows up at the door of a beautiful woman and she immediately spreads her legs and inserts him in her pussy! Not so with you. I have enjoyed your other work but I think that you have outdone yourself this time. Every detail draws the reader into this world while at the same time you maintain narrative pacing and smart erotic scenes.
Bravo. I give this story a 10.
[Report This]Date: April 17 2010 1:16 AM Title: Prologue – First Encounter
just finished this story. and eventhough i'm not a fan of the (mega) or the (micro) this story really works, well done. loved the characterization, the dialog, and most of all the story line. the latter is very rare to see that on here, but it was for lack of a better word "seemless".
can only hope that you write more stories about this genre.
aaron
Date: April 16 2010 4:18 PM Title: Prologue – First Encounter
OMG! I haven't enjoyed a story like that in ages!! Fantastic writing!!! It holds everything I love in a giantess story, from size to realistic feelings and situations. You kept be glued throughout!!
Bravo and I WISH and HOPE you will continue doing more of this work!! (maybe even a sequel with these two characters???) ;)
Khaladhen
Date: April 16 2010 4:24 AM Title: Prologue – First Encounter
Wow!!! Just wow!!! Incredible story! It's so realistic, exactly what Ilike to read! Well done!