Date: February 12 2012 7:41 PM Title: Prologue – First Encounter
Love the latest chapter and you really should make the epilogue chapters an actual sequel because its long enough to be considered one.
[Report This]Date: January 22 2012 11:22 PM Title: Episode VIII: New Friends?
cant believe this was updated so quickly. this chapter was great. stephanie is finally coming along. an i guess my suspicions were confirmed about jane though. cant say as i blame her though.(just wish she was upfront with jerry about it, an maybe this will bring stephanie an jerry closer)
an it was cool an unexpected that brad would save kelly like that.
well when you post the other chapter i hope to see more of jane.
aaron
ps i guess jerry's finally putting it together about jane as well..
would be cool if instead of carrie escaping or being freed by becca/kelly, that she would be rescued by stephanie(i know its far fetched an unlikely but its a possibility)
Author's Response:
Yeah, It seems like Jane has been MIA for a while, but in story chronological time she hasn't been away from Jerry for that long. In fact, the last seven updates have taken less than a day of in story time. The Jane and Jerry situation could take a couple of routes and as I am making it up on the fly I don't even know how it will come out. This same uncertainty applies everywhere really, but I think it’s a definite possibility that Stephanie will come into contact with our new characters (Becca/Kelly) at some point. Thanks for reading and commenting.
minuss
Date: January 11 2012 7:13 AM Title: Episode VII: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
I'm sure Stephanie is pretty close to the point of no return. Even if Jerry is her step father it has been implied that their relationship goes back more than a few years, giving them time to know each other well. The story just doesn't show the dynamics of their relationship as a whole since Minus is making it up as he goes along and probably didn't expect the epilogue to go on for this long. So from what we do know within the context of the story is that Jerry doesn't let his size be a detimentral factor in his relationship with his wife and step daughter, sometimes to a fault. He is stubborn, hardheaded, and controlling, but he loves his wife and cares about Stephanie's upbringing and seems to want her to be an honest individual. Now the problem is that the story paints Jane and Stephanie in a complete negative light with no redeeming factors. Jane is sexually disatisfied with her diminutive husband and cheats on him frequently to experience real pleasure from relatively normal sized men. She has a very hands off approach with dealing with problems in her family, which fustrates Jerry and is a negative infulence on Stephanie. Divorce is likely due to how strained their relationship appears. And finally, Stephanie is a selfish, self-absorbed, naive individual who doesn't like to own up to her actions and is very insensitive toward people. She has no respect for her step father and treats him as if he's less than a person. From the first chapter she is introduced in up until now as had her actions become more and more spiteful, all because some little people messed with her sex time with Brad and she may or may not have been the cause of a woman getting amnesia. It's not like she can take back the things after the day is done. What kind of relationship can she have with Jerry after this? Even if she wakes up and realizes she acted like a total child, they may never be close again, if they were even close at all. I just hope the resolution to this isn't a copout. I already feel like I put too much thought into this. Most GTS stories barely have a plot to begin with, so when real plot driven stories like this come around, I take 'em seriously.
Date: January 11 2012 1:17 AM Title: Episode VII: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
This epilogue could pretty much be its own story at this point. Regardless, I'm really enjoying it. This chapter was fun with all the characters experiencing perils relative to their particular sizes.
[Report This]Date: January 10 2012 12:11 PM Title: Episode VII: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
its funny that jerry an jane maybe both contemplating a divorce but i dont think that stephanie will allow that to happen because she has become accustomed to a 'privileged lifestyle'
so what im thinking is that something drastic will have to happen for jane an jerry to separate or reconcile, but the only way for that to happen is for jane to put stephanie in her place(which i dont see happening)
an as far as this chapter goes great job. because i dont see stephanie as an overly mean/wicked person just naive an spoiled. which at her size can be a deadly combination. i can only hope that she will see jerry for who he is before its too late an there is no turning back. an as far as jane's apathy is concerned i really hope that she will again find that spark that caused her to fall for jerry. an i hope jerry in turn is willing to do more to please his wife..(maybe he should rent a wet suit an oxygen mask, im just saying that its not all her fault)
well anyways im glad to see this story back an cannot wait to see if kelly an becca will prove to be just curious about carrie's tiny size or dont care about her an shove her tiny body in their pussies' without any thought to her well being. an i cant believe she was so close to finding jane, but it seems that she was only thinking about some fun with this new guy(i migght be wrong about that)
aaron
[Report This]Date: January 10 2012 6:41 AM Title: Prologue – First Encounter
Eh... the story is kind of dragging now, I think. As much as I 'love' to see Stephanie treat her step dad like shit for being a parent, I think something needs to come to a head regarding this.
[Report This]Date: January 10 2012 1:38 AM Title: Episode VII: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
This is already one of my all-time favorites. When I see a pretty girl these days, I think about her as Stephanie!
Date: November 29 2011 2:30 AM Title: Prologue – First Encounter
I'm morbidly amused that Stephanie has trouble believing David can have feelings like love despite how small he is, which is a frightening display of how far her ignorance goes, and makes me wonder how many of the oher Brobdingnagans share bigoted and racist/sizecist beliefs like that. I wonder what Jerry is going to do now that he has lost control of his daughter, he has all the right to be livid after the humilation and outright disrespect he has been put through, his daughter is effectively treating him like an object instead of a person now.
And now we turn to his wife to see if she actually does anything.
[Report This]Date: November 27 2011 9:30 PM Title: Epilogue Scene VI: Together Again
lol. the image of poor jerry trying to get out of stephanie's bra cups is hilarious but incredibly humiliating. well done in capturing that scene perfectly. i only hope that carrie knows what jane looks like, lol that would be just to much to bear. also hope that she isnt in the process of cheating on jerry...
but for reasons that escape me im liking stephanie even more..
an i know i say this an awful lot with your stories but i cant wait for more. this story is just remarkable.
aaron
[Report This]Date: November 08 2011 11:56 AM Title: Epilogue Scene V: Reunion
what an awesome chapter. loved carrie's reaction to seeing david an david'd reaction because they were both so realistic. an the whole jane, jerry, and stephanie thing has got to come to a head at some point an i cant wait.
really hope that jane and jerry will be able to really make their marriage work because he loves her an she just needs to fall in love with him again...lol(could't resist)
as for giantess stephanie i just think it would be cool if she could see the smaller races as equals, or at least her step-father. wish that there could be a situation for stephanie with guiverian's like the one carrie & debra had when carrie first met david.
anyways, great chapter an love the direction this story is going.
aaron
ps love the quick updates.
Date: November 07 2011 9:34 PM Title: Prologue – First Encounter
Once again, you have proven your mastery! I thoroughly enjoy your work and very much look forward to your continued stories.
Thank you so much for writing this!!! :D
Date: November 07 2011 1:50 PM Title: Epilogue Scene V: Reunion
Well this chapter confirmed my previous thoughts and I’m not really surprised. Let’s see…Stephanie has quickly developed from a typical horny bimbo teen that takes no responsibility for her actions to burgeoning “sizecist” bitch. The way she treats her stepfather who supports her and gives a damn about her upbringing just solidifies my dislike for her character, and that dry phony “sorry” she gave to Dave me made roll my eyes. Now that she’s fantasizing about how small the guliverians and lilliputian are compared to her in an erotic fashion, it’s clear that if this mentality continues to develop she’s well on her way to becoming a generic giantess-archetype, whose morals are non-existent when dealing with beings smaller than her. Will she grow up mentally and have a redeeming moment? Part of me hope so, I’d rather not see her go on to victimize smaller people just because she can.
I feel bad Jerry since he really doesn’t deserve the crap he has to put up with. He has a stepdaughter that doesn’t respect him at all despite taking care of her. He has a wife that cheats on him and feels no guilt about it, plus her inaction with Stephanie just makes her an enabler for her callous actions. I feel like she loves him but is not “In love with him”. He may be aggressive because of his small stature, but he’s still more of a parent than his wife. If he ever found out about Jane’s one night stands with other men, that would probably destroy the relationship, and for the better. I guess this goes to show that not all inter-size relationships work out as well as Dave and Carrie.
Dave is in an equally bad spot, I wonder how he’s going to jog Carrie’s memory. Doesn't help that Stephanie and Brad will be a negative infulence.
As for Brad…there isn’t much to say about him. He’s pretty much a non-character that acts as an enabler for Stephanie and is used for fetish purposes.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2011 3:18 PM Title: Prologue – First Encounter
I’m going to take a guess at this, Jerry’s relationship with his wife and step daughter reaches a breaking point and he begins to confide in Carrie and grow closer to her, since she doesn’t remember anything about her husband, she develops feelings for him as well, which causes a whole bunch of problems for David once he frees himself from the two teenagers. I’m am liking this plot so far and really hope Stephanie gets what is coming to her, I hate ignorant pigheaded people like her. And should Jerry actually discover feelings for Carrie, I can’t blame him, since his wife doesn’t seem very supportive.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2011 1:23 PM Title: Epilogue Scene IV: Survival
the plot thickens. an the whole amnesia thing, genius. an i loved janes reation to steph an brad screwing eachother in their suite. this story is getting better an better. cant wait to see how steph reacts when she sees jerry was eavesdropping on her..
aaron
ps glad david isnt dead.
[Report This]Date: October 04 2011 3:26 PM Title: Epilogue Scene III: The Discovery
remarkable chapter, cant wait to see jerry's wife's reaction. an i hope jerry finds david in stephanie's bra...
i just cant believe it, this story is proceeding exactly how i would have hoped. thank you for continuing with this story an i hope that theres more.
aaron
[Report This]Date: September 17 2011 6:43 PM Title: Epilogue Scene II - The Beach
wow.. awesome. really loved this chapter from beginning to end. remarkable job.
aaron
ps an i was hoping that carrie an david could get some marriage counseling(from someone with experience in their kind of relationship) again thanks for bringing this new aspect to this already superb epic tale.
pps hope that david will be able to either wake up carrie or find jerry for assistants with his wife...
well sorry to be rambling but i couldnt help it this story is very exceptional.
well done minuss!
Date: April 16 2011 2:46 PM Title: Prologue – First Encounter
Congratulations on an excellent story!
[Report This]Date: April 16 2011 12:54 PM Title: Epilogue: Scene I – Lover's Quarrel
wow... is there trouble in paradise?(already)
well written an sexy as hell. awesome job. will you be adding to this?
aaron
Author's Response:
I envision some more short self contained scenes like this. I will add them as they come to me.
[Report This]Date: April 16 2011 9:11 AM Title: Prologue – First Encounter
Hello let me say that i loved your story and i hope that you write more. It was great :) The details and everything was excellent :) Hope you do good
[Report This]Date: April 22 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 9 – Honeymoon
very nicely written