I swear to Sasha the authors on this website keep coming up with new ways to have sex

Enjoyed the chapter, but there seems to be an odd formatting issue with some of the text being white, makes it hard to read on a white background.

Hi, I just registered to thank you for your story. It's really great, and It's not a story anymore, but a novel already. I've only about half way through or even less, so I'm expressing my feelings about what I've read and enjoyed so far.  Honestly, there have been very few stories on this site that have truly piqued my interest, and made me want to read them from the beginning to the end. Your work is one of those rare cases.

The setting is really cool, it's the combination of all my favourite interests from this site (which you pointed in the description), mixed with solid and quality described romantic line, flavoured with some mysteries, cruel actions, some extra detailed descriptions which I adore - all these are merged into awesome solid story.  And you also added a moral onto the top this, which I clearly feel and I want to see how it will affect the actions and behavior of the main character(s) in the latter chapters.  

The powers of main heroine allow her to do almost anything she desire with the world, environment and people, so when it comes to deal with her 'problems', I usually expect some "exotic" and "creative" things from her which can give me some shivers. In addition, her ability to read minds allows her to "play" with her victims, showing them their new miserable place in the world of shortly living before dying or staying as a static object forever. So, I find such phycological effect on her victims, when they realize the changes and insignificance of their new being, even more dreadful and shaking, than the moments of actual death. By the way, Sasha initially associates people with insects or bugs, but its's never been said that she turned someone into actual bug, reducing the human mind to the primitive insect., checking with her power that it’s really no more human being.

You also did a wonderful job, describing the development of their relationships. Sasha's ability to read minds is a good helper with this) It all happens gradually, not all at once. The description of the bed and sexual scenes with suffice details, the characters' thoughts, doubts, ideas, frustrations, empathy — all of this very organically complements the whole process and makes it look very natural.

Aside from the fact of Choe’s affection to girls, that can be viewed as the main driver of their relationships (Sasha read and felt it to toward herself), I also have another theory about them. At first, I thought it could have been any other random person Sasha somehow met and started a conversation. But then everything fell into place, at least for me, and I saw a clear connection why Sasha had become attached to this girl.

Sasha is a symbol of the power of destruction, and even her thoughts were set in that direction. A clear example - when Chloe showed her drawing of the galaxy placed in cooped hands, and Sasha had a brief thought about how easy it would be easy eliminated by closing the fingers.

You could say she lacked imagination for anything more. But then again, the most ultimate power in the universe is the power of creation and love. And Chloe, with her imagination that gives birth to her paintings, her thoughts, and her growing inner attachment, developing into love for Sasha, which she wanted to express to her, can be seen as a counterbalance to Sasha's destructive power. In other words, they became like magnets of opposite polarities for each other.

I addition, I'd point out your writing style.Splitting into small chapters  is a good decision, cause it’s easy to recall the scenes and events. Constant switching of the POV provides full deepness of the moments, especially when it comes to sexual, bed and plot-twisting scenes.

I like physics, and the physical/chemical/biological explanations of processes and forces. That' s really cool, that you put the effort to provide some physical or biological details of the processes related to Sasha's powers. No, that's amazing, ‘cause whenever I see another superhero movie with some incredibly idiotic, anti-scientific, and anti-physical power with no single bit of explanation, it just makes me sick and wonder, whether the film makers hired second-graders to write a fiction. 

Btw, your story can be considered as really good base for a movie, at least some scenes I visually played inmy mind. it also has a solid potential to be extended, showing the events of the past, the future, side-stories or spin offs. Like, for instance when Chloe appears  in Appocaliptic world after Sasha's Judgement Day, thinking she lost her - the world full of devastation, desolation, death, terrible creatures of different sizes and small amount of survivors. And then they somehow meet again...

Well, I have some other notes or questions, but I think my comment is already quite vast to add something else...

Oh, wait, one more thing. I've spotted an interesting detail about Sasha's last name. It comes from rare Russian names Bogdan(m)/Bogdana(f) which mean and literally pronounce like "Given by God". Interesting)

It's so rare that I read and like a long-form or slow burn story on this site. Normally I come for the action. But I find myself completely enamoured by the characters and their interactions. The story just gripped me, I read through it in two days.

Absolutely superb work, please keep it up!

Had to make an account just to say this is easily my favorite story! The quality is incredible and the depth to these characters and their interactions is breathtaking. I can't wait to see what else is in store for them! Your hard work is truly appreciated!

Author's Response:

Thank you ♥ I really appreciate all the good feedback on this

'...and then I put her in a kneeling pose, with her hands clasped together, and her head looking straight up. I set her on the ground. I placed my hands on the hips and bent over her, like in Chloe's drawing at school. <*It's you*>. She just now figured that out?

"What do you think?" I asked, "did she get it right?"...'

Why was that so flipping cool hahaha. Love this story OP!

This story is so unique and fantastic!

Author's Response:

Thank you, I appreciate it!

THREE CHAPTERS IN ONE DAY!?

I'm loving the irony and the tension, as usual! 

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're still enjoying it :)

It was perfect.... Perfect 

Everything, down to the last minute details