Reviewer: memesRlife Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2025 4:36 AM Title: Theyjust piss me of

This was excellent.

I have enverscne a simple glob of sput treated like a nuclear bomb.

The anticipation and build up to it wa quite good thar's something  that's consistent throughout, you;re good at building up these apocolyptic events like ter inevitable natural distaters gleeful to be set loss and the helpless populous below.

And you describe the impact with so much detail making that buildup feel worth it you don't just say "it's apocolyptic" and leave that there no, you go  into detail on how it has impacted the surrounding buildings, the people and the damge it's causing as well as the emotional turmoil ti's putting the specks through.

I alo really enjoy the way youd descirbe sounds and their effects. I love a good booming of steps but there's more than just that

"The sound of her tight denim shorts stretching under her weight sent fresh waves of terror through the city." I love how such minor actions can cause such fear and hoplessness

Impacts.

I love how devastating even her indirect imapactscan be 

"And when she finally rested her enormous sole flat onto the table, the city trembled. The impact displaced air so violently that shockwaves burst through windows, and several smaller buildings collapsed just from the nearby tremor"

"Her laughter rolled through the air like thunder, shaking the already unstable ruins."

Similarly to the spit I never imagined the simple act of psiing could be so grand you treat it like a plantary weapo has bbeen fired at the world, If the space colony arc canon from Sonic advneture 2  was fired i'd imagine it'd be something like this.

This is a niche fetish butIt's nice to see someone who enjoys Waterworks jsut as much as me.