Phenomenal, all the way through. Don't get me wrong, I like a good long story as much as anyone else, but this right here is proof that they don't always need a big deep storyline to be a work of art, heh.

I think you did a really good job of painting the whole picture, if that makes sense. Beginning to end, it feels like a very complete, thorough, self-contained, no stone unturned kind of thing. Despite its relatively shorter length. A little bit of background and setup, but just enough without feeling like wasting time. The main show itself. The effects and aftermath. While still leaving it open to a possible continuation. 10/10.

The perspective transitions feel natural and fluid to me, and one thing that stands out to me is how you describe the background noises and actions from the tiny perspective. Good stuff. The varying personalities do a good job of tying it all together, and somehow make it all feel more "real" and believable.

I get that this type of blunt, no-nonsense and to-the-point action wouldn't be practical or sustainable in your longer stories (as much as I'd love to see it more XD), and on a bigger scale would probably just be boring. So this one was a blessing, and I'm going to take the liberty to speak for myself and all the lurkers out there and say that any future additions to this one would be way more than welcome. Yup.

Well now that was an end. Can’t wait to see more in this particular story verse!

Im with everyone else that this is very good!

Adding to what Kathrine could do later from the other reviews, maybe instead of a city or larger summon a house that is not even a cm tall, potently with a woman who also shares her thrill in destroying such populations with ease and pleasurable disregard. Then summon a proper city thats much smaller than the woman who can do her own rampage while Kathrine watches. Or maybe multiple women, with Katherine's own girl friends or female business partners also potently watching and enjoying. Besides summoning more larger small people for longer term service. 

Winder what Kathrine thinks of espadrille wedges (or wedge in general)for these activities, maybe in the Medaterainian or on a beach she summons a city, after carving and appropriate spot in the sand for it too. 

There also summoning them in her heels as insoles, and then have thousand dying over the course of a day at the office, or while on a plane ride. 

Lots to try. 

Well, this was unexpected. These sorts of stories where an entire city, a country, or perhaps even an entire planet, get shrunken down and abducted are my personal favorite. They're also very rare, though not unheard of.

I can understand why you may have wanted to do this story, given the limitations you have with your other one with the tinies in that one being a finite resource. In contrast, in this story Katherine can destroy entire cities with full reckless abandon and without any consequences (to herself) because she can always just conjure more of them, endlessly. This is both a positive, but also I gotta say a negative thing in a way. Since Katherine isn't stuck with just the same amount of tiny cities, she has no reason to hold back with them, and therefore there's no real reason for her to keep them around in the long term. The thing I love about your other story is the nuanced interactions Kristen is able to have with the tinies. It would probably never be the case if they were an infinite resource.

That being said, Katherine COULD keep some of her tiny abductees around over the long term and through two-way communication be able to develop a relationship with some of them similar to what Kristen has done with Justyna, Parker, Elliot, and so on. She just isn't really compelled to do this in the same way Kristen was, though she still could anyway if she chooses to.

I'm not sure if you intend for this to be a long-term story like that one, or just a short thing with just a few chapters. Obviously, with the ability to conjure more cities up infinitely, it has the potential to continue for as long as you care to keep at it. But just insta-destroying cities constantly would get repetitive rather quick. So I'd hope she might keep some around, and maybe do some more nuanced things with them.

As she is very wealthy she could easily do what Kristen has done and have a room, or even multiple rooms, full of abducted cities. As you've written she has employees who've signed a very strict non-disclosure agreements. If necessary, she can assign someone to feed and maintain abducted cities for her so she wouldn't have to bother herself with the mundane chore of it. Not that it would be that demanding, but she is woman of greater power and means than Kristen, so why would she stoop to that level herself? NDA agreement or not, these employees may have an issue with the ethics behind it. The legality of it would also be questionable, but untested. Maybe she would just keep the whole thing to herself for this reason.

How about if she got much more ambitious and decided to shrink not just cities, but whole countries, perhaps continents, or maybe even entire worlds? That could be very fun.

I just hope that this one won't distract you too much from your other one. But then again, if this develops as well as that other one and hooks me into it just as much then I suppose I won't mind too much at all. :)

Love it!

Author's Response:

Thank you!