[Report This]Date: February 27 2013 6:59 AM Title: That Body.....
Great story so far, like how he keeps questioning his sexuality. Although I could see some uses in the exercise room, namley that the shrunken people be used in all sort of ways. I cannot wait for the next chapter, I love how cruel the goddesses are.
Date: February 27 2013 6:45 AM Title: That Body.....
Great story so far, like how he keeps questioning his sexuality. Although I could see some uses in the exercise room, namley that the shrunken people be used in all sort of ways. I cannot wait for the next chapter, I love how cruel the goddesses are.
Date: August 31 2011 2:25 PM Title: Arctic's Antics
I have mixed feelings about your story. It's alright even if some bits are rather random.
Author's Response: Thanx for the review. Could you elaborate on what you found random about it?
Date: August 31 2011 2:14 PM Title: To Vore Or Not to Vore.........
I hope Kevin doesn't die. He's a nice guy...sorta, well minus the enjoying seeing Keyaria chomp on a person.
Author's Response: Yeah I'd have to agree. I'm not sure myself whether I'd want him as a friend or not.
Date: August 31 2011 2:07 PM Title: His Savior
Wonder how he got here. So hopefully this new girl is nicer.
Author's Response: I'll probably explain more on that in later chapters. As always thanx for the review :)
Date: August 31 2011 1:57 PM Title: Shower
Ok this is getting weird actually. I'm quite confused now. The chapter seems a bit well I don't know perhaps disorganised but the story as 4.5 stars so I guess I'm in a minority so I don't want to moan too much.
Date: August 31 2011 1:48 PM Title: Sacrifice
The story is looking good and the relationship Kevin is developing with Keyaira is interesting and seems original although you've got capital letters in the middle of setences which is a bit wierd since they should only be at the start of setences.
Date: August 31 2011 1:42 PM Title: Subserviance
It's a nice story although it seems strange how Kevin was in a field and all of a sudden he's somehwere else. It just seems like a big jump and how she found him could have been decribed a bit better. Still, I feel like I want to read the next chapter, so off I go.
Author's Response: All this will be explained in later chapters. If I elaborated on it all now I'd probably get lost in my story line. Sorry for any confusion and thanx for the review. They're always welcome :)
[Report This]Date: August 24 2011 1:44 PM Title: Arctic's Antics
completely forgot about this tale.. im gonna have to refresh my memory of this story.. lol
anyways... i liked her playfulness at first with kevin, but what took me by surprize was her cruelty towards her brothers.. but i loved how kevin had these 'thoughts' of compairing arctic's feet with keyaira
aaron
ps great to see this story again..
Author's Response: Thanx for the review. Yeah I forget about this tale often, hence the sporadic updates :) . And I can see how her actions could take you by surprise, she's actually based on an ex of mine who was particularly exceptive of the uh....more malicious side of my (well our) fetish.
[Report This]Date: October 06 2010 8:02 PM Title: To Vore Or Not to Vore.........
oddly enough i didnt see that comeing... but once i got over the sheer shock of it, this chapter was surprisingly enjoyable.(because im not a fan of vore whatsoever) greatly awaiting your next chapter.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanx. Im not THAT big a fan of vore either. Sometimes Im into it other times its a straight NO My girlfriend will attest to this. :)
[Report This]Date: October 03 2010 10:51 AM Title: His Savior
great story. just found this gem too. my only gripe is that i wish there were somemore foot/toe scenes in it, but other than that its an attention grabbing masterpiece.
aaron
Author's Response: thanx o_O
Author's Response:
:3 YEEEEEAAAAHHHHH REVIIIIEEW!!!!!!
(gains back composure)
thanx o_O
dont worry ther'll be more foot action later on dude....
[Report This]Date: April 25 2010 6:45 PM Title: Shower
Wonderful story.
More cruelty. More intimacy. More humiliation.
Looking forward to this story's continuation.
Author's Response:
thanx :)
i actually forgot all about this story....
Date: April 13 2010 10:36 PM Title: The Start
i'd work on paragraphs, seperate out dialogue. Each new thought needs a new paragraph. Your story, while it looks like it has promise is kind of hard to read in its current format
Author's Response: OKAY