ofia doesn’t make sense  to me. On the one hand she hasn’t used her powers to shrink others besides theese two because she didn’t find people with mutual interest, and then she treats them like dirt. It would have made more sense to me if she shrunk them the moment she caught them, or if she eased them into it by starting gentle. But the sudden shift from kind to psycopathic is jarring. Is there gping to be character development on her end or is this going to be the running theme?

As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws

how much to kill them off?

This is a good story. I can't wait to see what Sofia does next. when is chapter 4 coming out?