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Reviewer: Storysmith Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2025 5:39 AM Title: The Cunning Hares

Personally, I’d rather see some sons of Calydon stuff



Author's Response:

So many good girls to use from them. With a new one potentially coming in a patch or two lol. I think Piper or Burnice in particular will be fun to write about. But Caesar and Lucy also have a lot of potential. It's rather hard to decide. 

Reviewer: Darkrising Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2025 9:50 PM Title: Nekomata

This was incredibly good, Nekomata was pleasantly dominant, and I can't wait to see what you do with Jane Doe when she gets involved, considering the predatory aura she irradiates. And Miyabi seems like she'll be interesting too, her final words in the chapter sounded... ominously wholesome?



Author's Response:

I hadn't expected to go for ominously wholesome but I'll take it. XD

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. It was a lot of fun to play around with Nekomatas character. I'll have to look into Jane Doe in the future. 

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2025 5:58 PM Title: Nekomata

Nice. I really hope this continues and there are more scenes where Belle is swallowed. Hopefully with greater detail of Belle's experience 



Author's Response:

I imagine there will be now that she knows it's possible. Soukaku comes to mind as a prime suspect, but I won't rule out other characters as well. 

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. 

Reviewer: Kira Dropana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2024 10:08 AM Title: The Cunning Hares

I really really love the dynamic between Nicole, Anby, and Belle!!!! Would love to see a solo chapter with just Nicole one of these days, but moving on to new characters like Ellen or Burnice would also be nice... I wanna see more tiny girls being lovingly bullied by big girls!



Author's Response:

I definitely want to do another chapter featuring Nicole. I don't think she got as much attention. Though I don't know if Abby won't be there or not yet. It's up in the air at the moment. 

If the series continues I'll be using both the Victoria housekeeping girls and the sons of Caledon crew as well. 

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. ^_^ 

Reviewer: Ragader1325 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2024 4:42 AM Title: The Cunning Hares

Great story, hope for more



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. :D

Reviewer: Darkrising Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2024 11:50 PM Title: The Cunning Hares

This story was pretty good! The characters all felt and acted in character, the interactions felt a lot like the ones in the actual game, and the scene between Nicole and Anby was amazing! It would be awesome if this continued, though I do wonder if you'll be keeping the story toned like this with all of them trying to enjoy each other or if you plan to make this as depraved as Return to Normalcy has?



Author's Response:

I do plan to write a follow up for Nekomata next. If I continued after will still largely depend on if people want me to or not. But as for the tone, I think it will probably have similar vibes to Return to normalcy but there won't be the same air of forcefulness since this isn't a commission based series. I want to strive to keep the characters as original to themselves as I can. That said, certain characters will have different experiences using Belle compared to others so it will largely shift around if I had to guess. Not to mention there's always the possibility of Wise joining his sister too adding to future chapters. 


I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you for the review. ^_^ 

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