[Report This]Date: September 18 2024 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 13: Twisting the Knife
Loving it, hope it continues. Also hope somewhere down the line we get some gentle moments too
Date: September 18 2024 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Great story keep up please
Date: September 18 2024 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Hi, great story. At first I thought it was going to be another classic revenge story but it turned out not to be. Pam is really interesting because she takes revenge in a gentler, more educational way. Despite her desires and anger, you can feel that she has feelings and doesn't really want to hurt him. And it's nice to have Mary who's very excited about her gift but doesn't forget that it's Paul. I hope you'll continue to follow Paul in this exciting new life with Pam and Mary
Author's Response:
I'm still trying to work out Mary's path in this story, but Pam...
She doesn't let go of grudges easily, and even though I'm the one making this up, to me, she is pretty scary with her way of thinking. I will say one thing, she is careful about how she says things (as we have already seen). There is/will be more of that.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2024 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 13: Twisting the Knife
Great story so far, looking forward to what the next chapters hold. Hopefully Pam's desire for dominance will reveal some interesting interests, and hopefully she can get Mary to indulge herself as well.
Author's Response:
I didn't expect to get a response so quickly. Thanks. If I get a few more positive reviews, I'll work on some more chapters.
Date: September 17 2024 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
im still here you fat vicious ugly cunt
Author's Response:
Did I miss something here? I do not understand why you said this.
Date: September 17 2024 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
racism was made for paul