Just found this story and I'm having a ton of fun!

I like how it's a mixture of a normal sized person being shrunken and a naturally tiny people story, the story takes it's time but once it picks up it's non-stop fun size shenanigans, I also like the lore and charcters, lot of care put into them.

My favorite aspect might be an unxepected one, I love how Jordan doesnt just shrink, he flat out transforms into a tiny, that's a very cool and underrated concept, I also adore how he can't reveal his identity or speak and no one recognizes him as a human, I don't even know why I like this so much, but it's a very inetresting dynamic few size stories go for.

Excited to see where this goes.

Just want to say that this is an excellent story.  Also want to thank you for the consistency of the updates.  Thank you!

This is great so far! Rarely can I find a story with unaware identity as a theme. Hope to see more!

I was almost screaming throughout chapter 10, wanting for Jordan to go to Alice, for Alice to look back just a little! God, I wanted to cry with Jordan at the end! And the scenes with Jordan at Alice’s feet, both scared and mesmerized, and Alice almost finding him, almost touching him without knowing. All the descriptions and feelings. 9 and 10 best chapters!

I hate Leila now! The way she dismisses everything and is só allof towards Jordan gets on my nerves! - It’s marvelous when characters manage to draw these raw emotions from me in such a organic way.

I hate Leila now, but I have a hunch I will come to like her further down the line - as she will come to like Jordan… which is a problem. Since he was human, his family will most likely notify authorities he is missing. And Alice will most likely despair, feeling responsible for dragging Jordan to the park – Emily probably won’t lose the chance of blaming her too… or maybe not. Maybe she will try to help and the two will come back looking for J...

It would be funny for Emily to instantly recognize Jordan. Like, they find him and Alice is all “oh, see this is J…” and Emily is like “Alice… it’s Jordan”.

Let me say this again: your story is darn good. There are many darn good stories on the site, each with it's spins, it's ups and downs. And yours is one of them.

Just a final observation: in chapter 9, whe Leila said “Shrinking a full-grown human down to your size...”, I think you meant her to say down to our size.

As always, thanks for writing and sharing with us. Count on me for following this one until the end.

I know I should not like Emily, but since I know what it’s like to be alone while wanting to be part of something from experience … so yeah. Thumbs up for Alice and her kindness towards Emily. But kindness has it's limits.

It’s obvious Jordan wants things to be back to normal, who wouldn’t? But chapters 7 and 8 gave us a interesting insight as to why: a misture of fear and wanting to go back to how things were… Ah but this is not just the fear of the unknown anymore: it’s a sensation of losing what is known to him. Wouldn’t Jordan want to be by Alice side no matter what? Yes. But would Alice want him even them? Let me explain. Since the begining Jordan is presented as Alice’s rock, someone who accepted and gave protection when no one eles would. Someone who provided. Family, as the title says. Now he is not even human, is he? He can’t provide her with anything, why would she still want to keep this tiny Jordan near?

That’s why he feels as if his sense of self, his place in the world is at stake despite still being the same person. Alice is his rock in the world too.

All this problem comes back to one person – Leila. It’s clear Jordan doesn’t want to risk putting Alice in the same sittuation he is in, but is Leila even capable of reproducing what she did? Why hide instead of just shrinking Alice too? Why not just turn him back to normal and get this over with? Clear there is more about this transformation magic that was cast upon him.

Then we have the other way around: how will Alice react upon learning that Jordan can't be by her side anymore? That her Jordan is going off with some stranger to a world she isn’t allowed… and because of what? Some stupid tiny people, some stupid legend she dragged Jordan to... Yes, before Leila, there was Alice. It's because of her that Jordan is where he is in the first place. Guilty mixed with love.  I know she is a ok. person, but I am willing to bet Alice would rather stomp Leila and let the forest burn before being ok. with that. Yeah... Leila is in trouble.

Again you make a very compelling portrayal of a coming of age love story, making the best of short chapters. It’s incredible. Usually short chapters mean less development, but you make good use of the space for character exposure and build up – and great description of Alice’s footsteps from Jordan and Leila’s perspective at the end of chapter 8, it made the size difference, the danger Alice really is to her friend now more clear.

As always, thanks for writing and sharing with us. And thank you for the quick and constant updates! Did you had then ready beforehand? If so, do you already know how many chapters the story is likely to have? No pressure! I just ask because every time I find a really good story on the site, together comes the fear it will not be finished.

I just ask you to continue. Your story is darn good! Stay safe!

You did a great character presentation with the first three chapters and with how the shrinking sequence unfolded on the fourth. Especially how shrinking is not only shrinking but a full change on Jordan's appearance - if Alice thought her friend was beautiful before… but it’s not just that, it’s a clever way to convey the coming of age, the begining of a budding adulthood (in his body, his features, his voice, but in the body of those around him, Alice now gigantic, terrifying and disgusting in some of it's details but also enticing and beautiful).

It all happened right after the momment each other started realizing “something unspoken, something that was new but somehow familiar”. And right after came Leila, a 'new thing' Jordan found, with her world of magic and it's unknown rules. Powerfull stuff.

I might be reading too much, I have a tendency to do that, but I guess that’s part of the fun for me. Please, keep going. I simply love when things get complicated. I am a sucker for messy romances. 

Was the movie FernGully, perhaps, one of yours inspirations? Man, how I miss classic 2D animation… anyway, sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.