I almost lost this update! Hate when that happens!

Well, the cat is out of the bag. Or is it? Melanie and Alex are very harsh with each other, aren’t they? But this harshness, dare I say, seems to steam from deep desires for connections. Does she realize that? Does she know to be desperate enough to embarass herself in public while not stoping even once to check… to do what she did with the cashier, a complete stranger and take her mind off the “lump” between her toes. The same lump “Normally she would have flicked it somewhere to be forgotten but something compelled Melanie to look”.

What compelled her? Did she had reason to think Alex could be there? Did she imagined Alex down at her dirty sole? Yes...

Am I saying Melanie wasn’t unaware of her brother? On a conscious level Melanie seems to be unaware of many things regarding her and her brother. Everything is fun and games, just “messing around with Alex giving him much-needed social interaction”. It’s not like she wanted him to
compliment her toes or anything in the second chapter, right? Just… fun and games, like always.

I love when a story makes my imagination run wild. The devil… (or maybe Alex in Melanie’s case) is in the details ;)

Another great chapter! As always, thanks for writing and sharing with us!

 PS.: I will check out the originas story. Thanks for the recommendation. There's just so many things to do and so many stories I want to read at the same time T_T

PS. 2: You say the original story is “miles better”, but I don’t know mate. Your story and main characters are pretty good themselves. Gold material here.

This is just absolutely epic, mate! Sadly, the unaware stuff is about to end. But glad she finally noticed her brother. Cant wait what will happen next. I hope this series mainly focuses on Melanie more. She's perfect!

This is absolutely perfect, mate!

This is a amazing story!

Hope you continue on and can't wait to read more!!

I knew this story was gold since the very first chapter and I was not wrong! The wait paid off. Loved how the siblings were portraided and also the conflict that Alex cares in his heart: he truly loves Melanie, but can never truly express it because he doesn’t want her to hate him. You managed, in a short space, to give a full set up that seems real, that is not over dramatic while being a rollercoaster of emotions. 10 out of 10 so far.

I’ve never read the original story, but I am loving this. Especially the fact Alex choose Melanie sandals first instead of his mother crocs. Why? Well, nothing against Linda and I am sure he has desires for her too, but I think it’s more due to the virus. From my point of view, Alex had strong feelings and desires regarding Melanie before shrinking but, if not infected, he probably would have been able to keep this conflicted feelings inside.

Now this desire is what is tipping the balance towards the truth and more than that: these feelings and desires are not as one sided as Alex believes, Melanie being as conflicted as him in this hole ordeal. Yes, in most stories the titanic sister starts seeing the brother as nothing more: a cute pet, a toy or a pervert, and we see Melanie going for that (wanting to film Alex in his cage and batering him with her toes). But what if that is no different from what Alex did when he was the bigger one in charge? A way to hide her forbidden desires, the fact she sees him as a man. Not just her brother or a cute pet, but, since shrinking, as a man she desires to have by her side (and loving her feet).

I think that would be an interesting different take. As brother and sister discover each other anew, they have to deal with friends and family who might really treat Alex as a freak or a toy to be used.

What you think? Am I on to something? Hope my comment helps in some way.

Also, do you already know how many chapters the story is likely to have or when can we expect the next chapter to come out? No pressure! I just ask because every time I find a really good story on the site, together comes the fear it will not be finished. Please, continue! It’s good, very good!

Oh! And just something that confused me a little: at the end of ch. 2, Alex name suddenly changes to Greg.

Thanks for writing and sharing. And sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.

The second chapter was even better that the first one hope to see more of this amazing story 

Author's Response:

Thank you!

this is a great story. please continue this story with a focus on moms willing and aware big butt. i detect hints of "family fun" and "made for mommy" in this story. awesome story and i hope to read more soon. thanks!

1. really nice. clearly inspired by badguy's "A summer stolen", one of my favorite stories. too bad it was never completed. i hope you write more of this. thx for sharing.

Great start looking forward to it! Love the setting and setup. I was also a huge fan of a Summer Stolen by Badguy and am still thinking of what could have been if that story got continued. But I’m glad to see your story being inspired by it and can’t wait for what’s to come!