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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2024 8:27 PM Title: The Lost Tour Group (Ch 1)

This is a really good idea, putting the first chapters (essentially teasers) for your stories.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Flagpole_Sitta97 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2024 8:52 PM Title: The Lost Tour Group (Ch 1)

I'm really interesting in what you have next in the upcoming chapters, all these different stories and the like and these different settings and characters as you said a sampler, I thought about doing something like that myself at some point. I wonder if there's any connections between any of the stories that'll be posted.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Generally they'll be totally separate stories as it wouldn't really work to share the first chapters of the sequels (following from the end of other stories as they do). But I do have one or two separate stories in connected series.

Reviewer: Blazingchicken Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2024 5:26 PM Title: The Lost Tour Group (Ch 1)

I like how you wrote about the shrunken victims and introduce Abi in the end. It gives that anticipation and made me curious how playful Abi would be.

Btw, will this story include some aspects of growth? Or will it only involve shrinking?



Author's Response:

Thanks. Slightly spoilery but ... yes I am planning to include growth at the end!

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