[Report This]Date: August 29 2024 9:29 AM Title: Epilogue
Agh, my heart. I have now the strange desire to become a sushi roll on a rapidly-alternating conveyor belt.
If I may, well done. And contratulations on making the Featured list!! :D
[Report This]Date: August 23 2024 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 55
That felt slightly anticlimactic. Somewhat rushed. Still enjoyable though.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I agree with this critique. The average sentence in this story was edited 6 or 7 times. Even so, there's a lot I would have done differently. I guess for me, the real climax is what comes next, in the last two chapters. Though I understand most readers won't experience it that way.
[Report This]Date: July 10 2024 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 35
Impressive stuff. I've been reading this off and on over the past few weeks, and it rarely disappoints.
There's too many parts to praise. I like how the relationships evolve. I like that all the girls seem to like being huge. Eve and Lilith are fun in a genre where the kinda-omnis tend to be boring. Honestly, I like that Lilith isn't piss-evil for the sake of it, just...not caring about others as much as she ought to. She doesn't feel irredeemable, however much she ought to be.
About the only complaint I can give is the abundance of rooms that grow. It's not really giantess sex when the surroundings are also gigantic, you know? Makes sense in an in-world narrative way, but still takes some impact from the scene.
All in all, excellent work.
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it, and that certain parts of the sub-text seem to be hitting for you.
Fair point about the size changing rooms. But we're getting into a part of the story where the girls spend a lot more time outdoors, soo... ^_~
[Report This]Date: June 08 2024 7:19 AM Title: Sunday - Chapter 1
there's more tension than the cables of the golden gate bridge