[Report This]Date: October 08 2024 8:36 AM Title: Up and Down
Thank goodness, too many good stories never get updated and this one is in my top 10 just from the first chapter!
[Report This]Date: October 07 2024 4:28 PM Title: Ships
AAAAAAAA!!! I am just so glad, so happy to see this story being updated! Casimir and Maya are back!! And what a come back! Magically making Casimir kiss her or worship her doesn’t make sense for Maya. Because it isn’t a kiss, it’s her magic. It isn’t Casimir worshiping her feet, it’s herself, her magic and nothing else. More than that, it’s her abusing Casimir… like Olivia… like her mother... What a GREAT CHAPTER! You reinforced Maya’s love for Casimir while showcasing a more mischievous and a more possessive and insecure sides of this same love!
Really, I am so happy! Thank you for continuing this story and charing with us! I am in love with the main characters since day one and I can’t wait to see more! More of Sophie and the hows and whys she came to love Casimir. More about Olivia as I am sure her sadistic nature hides some misplaced desires for Casimir as well… Give up, I already convinced myself of that! LOL.
Please more! Again, thanks for writing and sharing with us! Stay safe!
Author's Response: Thank you for the heartfelt message. This kind of enthusiasm fuels my writing. Stay tuned, and stay safe too.
[Report This]Date: October 07 2024 10:40 AM Title: Ships
This was amazing. I can’t wait for more! I’m also interested in reading some sections from Maya’s perspective.
Author's Response: I am definitely interested in exploring Maya's attitude towards her relationship with her brother. Thank you for the support!
[Report This]Date: September 12 2024 10:35 PM Title: Up and Down
This is really good. I hope we can see more of this
[Report This]Date: August 16 2024 5:21 AM Title: Up and Down
So when is the next chapter? This first chapter was phenomenal and I can't wait for more...
[Report This]Date: May 01 2024 12:53 AM Title: Up and Down
Really like the premise! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am hoping to get back to writing soon — after I finish up my other story.
[Report This]Date: April 07 2024 5:53 AM Title: Up and Down
The main characters (Casimir and Maya), the antagonist (Olivia) and
the enemie (Ms. Rhem) where quickly and well established.
About Maya, let’s not pretend: it’s clear she has had very very strong romantic feelings for Casimir for a long time and now the dam is reaching it’s limits. Also, Casimir and Olivia may have more in common than they
realize – the themes of fulfilling duties within the family and expectation… yes, Olivia was mockering Casimir while also talking about herself. About a desire to lash out just like the one her brother has.
Olivia doesn’t strike me as a villain but as someone who believes that clinging to her mother’s image is the best way to keep things from changing.
The difference, what sets Olivia’s and Casimir desires apart, is this lack of
expectations she used to mock him. Because of this lack, Casimir wants to be useful, and I am not saying this just because of the ritual scene and dialogues: the fact he wanted to work and pay Ms. Rhem shows he is a earnest person and someone who wants to repay every crumble of love and care sent his way.
So I am willing to make a bet here even though it’s just the first chapter: Casimir accepted being sacrificed for Maya’s sake because of the special bound he already felt. It’s exactly because he didn’t wanted but accepted for her well being that makes Maya’s ritual a true sacrifice – different from the others that took places on bases of fear, lust or/and obligation.
That’s my interpretation. Great first chapter. Quick but also efficient. Thanks for writing and sharing! And sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
In my past works, there was typically only a minimal characterization before I went straight into the "action." So in this story, it was my goal to introduce the characters properly before diving into the NSFW stuff. To see that they come across as well-established is very pleasant to hear.
You’ve definitely gotten some stuff in your predictions correct, although I don’t want to reveal what yet.
P.S. Don’t worry about English not being your primary language; I am also not a native speaker. I have not noticed any egregious spelling issues in your text and I was able to understand what you were trying to say.