Date: May 26 2021 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE UMMA SHE was after him for so long and the poor guy knew she would snatch him i just want too ask the author if the guy UMMA caught had started too cry would she have let him go? you are my favorite author please write about UMMA again and im kevin sackett97@gmail.com please let me know more about her on the run was the beststory ive ever read
[Report This]Date: July 18 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very good my favorite story here Umma is a sexy women will she be featured again? i love reading about her stalking, catching and explaining to a man that hes hers forever.
Author's Response:
I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it. I don't have anything planned for Umma but you never know. :)
Date: December 25 2009 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
As said, a good yarn. As I read it and eventually reached the end I felt the urge to write a story on those lines but with a difference. That is, more description of the predator, a piece of sexual activity, the victim given an injection that numbs his body, no shrinking and then eaten alive, so, no pain but the terror of witnessing himself being slowly - very slowly - devoured by that gorgeous predator. Obviously not suitable for this gts site, but, in my mind, far more exciting for some.
BTW: I have lost your email address, but I don't suppose you're bothered - like several other erstwhlie contacts.
Author's Response: I understand. Everyone here has their own flavor of what they would like to see in a story. I try to accommodate readers as best I can. Suggestions never go unnoticed. Good hearing from you again!
[Report This]Date: December 24 2009 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Its great to see you writing again! I really enjoy your stories! The last few you wrote don't seem to be quite as good as your previous ones, in terms of description and a few other aspects. That aside, you are one of the best vore writers around and I would love for you to keep writing.
Author's Response: Thanks Krauser. I appreciate the praise. It's good to be writing. I have a demanding job and it's very hard to make time. Could you please clarify about which descriptions are lacking? Character's appearance, sexual flavor? the digestive process? I look forward to learning from more of your critiques. Thanks again for the praise. I will try to keep working when I can.
Date: December 24 2009 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, girlfood, this was/is a good yarn. It was different because we, the readers, were taken through the process of being both captured, swallowed and digested. Still a pity the chap was so small. Hardly a "snack" but a titbit, a sweet. O well, it's your story. Thanks.