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Reviewer: Mbs216 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2024 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - McKayla has a Plan

It was perfect. Wish we could get more- it’s a fun premise for having someone who could keep getting mistaken for a bug



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Reviewer: Zaximus Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2024 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 2 - So much for a plan....

Short little fun story. Great premise, your descriptive imagery and illustrations of scale and danger were on point. Sad it was short but a good read nonetheless.



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Thanks!  I’ve got a bunch of shorter stories in development! 

Reviewer: Gunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2024 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 - So much for a plan....

Pretty good, was hoping her roommate would drop her into one of the terrariums, really put her skills as an entomologist to the test. Could be interesting with different chapters being different terrariums, though I can't imagine anything but bad endings for most of them.


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Reviewer: GuyGoneSmall Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2024 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 2 - So much for a plan....

Good story!    Wish though that Anita would have put her roommate in a separate cage. Then the story could have gone on.  But good Tory though.  

Reviewer: Tiny_T3 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2024 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 - McKayla has a Plan

Great first chapter!! Looking forward to the rest. 


Would also love to see this story in reverse, have the insect loving roommate shrink down and have the model try to smash her under her shoe thinking shes a bug. 



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Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2024 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 1 - McKayla has a Plan

awesome start. can't wait for more.



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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2024 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 - McKayla has a Plan

Definitely looking forward to more.



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Reviewer: GuyGoneSmall Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2024 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 - McKayla has a Plan

Great start!!   loving it!    Keep up the great work!    An idea, Anita mistakes McKayla as a specimen and she puts her in an insect box for a presentation without realizing it.   



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