Reviewer: Ten11 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2024 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 23

It’s been a pleasure. Thanks for the story.

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2024 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is an interesting story, but if Lily really wanted to have power over Tom she should try inducing lactation and become his wet nurse.  Making all of Tom's food come from her body-love would do a lot more to tie him to herself.  Narratively speaking if you wanted as the artist you could make it so he after a while he can't eat anything other than her milk making is so that he will forever need to be around Lily otherwise he will starve.  

Reviewer: Ironhide1994 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2024 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Literally made this account just to write this review.

First off, excellent size play stuff, really great. The problem is this story is very different from what the preamble and tags suggest.

Unfortunately, I can't enjoy it. Lily and Tom's relationship just seems so off, and for the last few chapters I've actually felt kind sick after reading. He is miserable, does not feel like himself or like much a person anymore, and they don't have a safeword even though he considered asking for one (and didn't, which is extremely stupid). She manipulates and gaslights him into getting what she wants and making him believe it's for the best and out of love. She doesn't give him much of a say and it all just seems really toxic. Now it is just a fictional story and I don't have to read it, but I went in expecting something very different, something sweet and fun about a loving married couple with some fun, sexy size play content. This story is not that.

I just had to put this in writing and get it off my chest, it's been bugging me for several chapters.

Author's Response:

Really sorry that you haven't been enjoying it! One of the pitfalls of writing and releasing something serially like this is that sometimes the story develops in different directions from what you had in mind at the outset, and I can completely understand if you felt like the early sections of the story were setting up for something different from where I've gone with it. I'll have to give some thought to updating the tags and synopsis to more accurately reflect where this thing goes.

Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2024 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 9

Very good, I hope to see a growing mature woman too

Reviewer: fosmat Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2024 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 8

This is so good man, loving the dynamic you've got going on between Lily and Tom. Can't wait to see where it leads. Also congrats on the marriage! 

Reviewer: Doberri123 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2024 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Simply the Best slow shrink story! 

Reviewer: ShrunkenSlime Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2024 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

this story has been one of my favorites lately and definitely something i look forward to seeing updates for. i love the dynamic between Lily and Tom and how you can tell Lily loves her husband as much as she loves taking his size. not to mention her ideas have just been getting better and better with each chapter.

the only complaint i can make is that the overall idea of each chapter is becoming predictable and arguably a little repetitive (Tom resists, can't, and then Lily takes things a step further). but with how this story has been a super slow burn, i don't really hold that against it. it feels more like you're trying to REALLY drive this dynamic home before some huge bomb drops rather than rehashing the same ideas.

i have some ideas/hopes on where it's heading, but im looking forward to more nonetheless! great job!

Reviewer: randomizetheplot Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2024 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Incredible. You weren’t lying about cooking this one slow and low. Tom and Lily and the readers are better for it. I’m definitely checking every day for new chapters. I hope this one runs for a long, long time!

This next bit isn’t a critique at all. I’m just rambling. This may just be my reading or misreading of the previous chapters, but I personally enjoy the frisson in their relationship that comes from Tom wanting Lily to be more but not necessarily wanting to be less himself. Not totally anyway. I didn’t get the sense earlier that he truly wanted to be small, so to get what they both now seem to want (more Lily) he had to sacrifice. Really I just want the excellent drama aspect of the story to carry on for as long as possible. lol. And it seems like it will! 

I absolutely love the detail about the wedding rings. Great potential there. I also love the texture you’ve given Tom and Lily and hope to see more of it. Stuff like Lily’s job. I hope Lily thinking about booking another gig is a sign that we may get a social situation of some sort down the line. Someone to react to Lily’s new size. 

I could keep going but I’ll stop for now. Thank you for sharing this story with us! These are the types of stories that make me really glad that this is my thing!

 

Reviewer: fosmat Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2024 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

Huge fan of the 'dont talk im on the phone jack off', the dynamic you got going on with Lily and Tom is great and I LOVE when stories go through that typically masculine guy realising he likes being small and you don't often get a good slow burn like this so good stuff man!

I hope my review satiates you, maybe even spurs you onward.  

Reviewer: Greenanon Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2024 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 3

I'm really enjoying this, the moment when Lily decides she wants to keep going is a great and sexy insight into her thoughts and it's clear these two are at a point of no return. Keep up the good work!