Incredible writing.

"Few moments in life can match the uneasiness of a death-defying jump. Everything is gambled on having to strength to complete one motion, hop from one spot, land on the other, and yet the brain stretches out the heartbeat breadth to last an eternity. The gut churns, the wind smacks, arms mimic the motions of a bird - all symptomatic of a man ungracefully sailing through the air."

This has no right to be this good in a segment about swan diving into a woman's asscrack. Bravo. I am astounded by your skill, confused by your application of it but ever grateful nonetheless. You write some damn good smut, but apart from that you write some damn good prose.

Author's Response:

Hi Parmenion,

Thank you for the kind words and for leaving a review.

Whatever ounce of talent or skill I possess comes from learning and reading the greats on this website (VivettaVenray, TaterBotch, Greenanon, Inwiththebooks, plus so many more.)

My writing merely stands upon the shoulders of giants.

-TUD.