[Report This]Date: February 12 2025 7:58 PM Title: Disappearing Trick
Okay, so, magicians never reveal their secret and blah, blah, blah. But how'd he do it! How'd he escape all three times! I sense misdirection being used here, haha. Or maybe something with mirrors.
Y'know, I googled Safest way to do vore and the results were ... meh. But in a world with mixed-sized people, the results aughta be pretty cool. I imagine a bunch of wiki how-to guides and YouTube shorts describing the process. I wonder if Max used any of those guides for science.
I love vore, and lately I've been getting into these gentle stories. So seeing you mix both gentle and vore together was hot. I know if I was a tiny, I'd be pestering my wife about this all the time. I don't know if Max and Wendy are romantically involved, but I adore the relationship they have in the story. A big playfully indulging in their tiny's request is so charming to me. Especially something like vore that can kill the tiny.
The mouthplay scene was great. I love it when the bigs taste their tinies and remark on the flavors and stuff. Wendy instinctually swallowing Max was my favorite part. Her eyes widening and talking to him through her stomach is a favorite scenario of mine. Lastly, this might be the first story I've read that mixed magicians and size-difference. There's an untapped potential here ...
Anyway, it was a sweet, charming story. A slice of life that delves into a couple that respect each other with a big indulging in their partner's kink. I loved it. Great job!
Author's Response: Im glad you enjoyed. Everyone wants to know the secret lol. Being honest, I never fully planned out the trick when writing, but I had an idea it would have involved Wendy false swallowing while Max hid in a different part of her mouth(maybe pressed into her cheek). N e way, I'm glad you enjoyed their dynamic, I liked the idea of Wendy being enthusiastic and on stage while Max is more meek, and then their dynamic switching in private, so it was really fun to write. One day, I think I'd like to return to these characters with a longer story maybe on how they met and got to where they are.
[Report This]Date: February 15 2024 1:55 AM Title: Disappearing Trick
Cute story, very well written and entertaining; but will there be follow up chapters?
Author's Response:
gonna have to give that a hard maybe. I wrote this story as a one-shot, but if I ever feel there are more ideas I'd like to explore with these characters, I'll happily write another chapter for it. If it's any consolation, my next writing project here should be 2 follow-up chapters to my previous story.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2024 9:43 PM Title: Disappearing Trick
Very cute story. I really liked the relationship dynamic here and how they explored such a kinky magic trick together. I'll admit, I was hoping for an explanation on how he actually escaped from her stomach, but I suppose magicians never tell their secrets lol.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed, especially since the relationship dynamic was something I really enjoyed writing. But yeah, I talk about it below, but I'm realzing an extra scene to explain/hint at how it was done may have been better. Something to learn from I suppose.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2024 9:12 PM Title: Disappearing Trick
Not really a fan of vore, but this was an amusing enough read without getting particularly graphic. I know that they're magicians and all, but I can't help but ponder just how exactly he got out of her gut during their second showing without being vomited up at some point. Only one other possibility comes to mind, and I figure we're all adult enough that I won't spell it out. I suppose it's one of those "forever mysteries" that makes it magical, so to speak.
All things considered, a nice enough one-shot for the vore community while being relatively tame to outside viewers like myself, so kudos.
Author's Response:
If it makes it any better, I originally envisioned it involving a fake swallow and misdirection hiding where he'd exit her mouth. But I cut it because I A) couldn't get the full picture of it in my head, and B) was afraid of getting bogged down in details. In hindsight, I suppose some lines at least hinting at this(or a different method) would have been better. Thank you for the review though.