[Report This]Date: February 15 2024 1:55 AM Title: Disappearing Trick
Cute story, very well written and entertaining; but will there be follow up chapters?
Author's Response:
gonna have to give that a hard maybe. I wrote this story as a one-shot, but if I ever feel there are more ideas I'd like to explore with these characters, I'll happily write another chapter for it. If it's any consolation, my next writing project here should be 2 follow-up chapters to my previous story.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2024 9:43 PM Title: Disappearing Trick
Very cute story. I really liked the relationship dynamic here and how they explored such a kinky magic trick together. I'll admit, I was hoping for an explanation on how he actually escaped from her stomach, but I suppose magicians never tell their secrets lol.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed, especially since the relationship dynamic was something I really enjoyed writing. But yeah, I talk about it below, but I'm realzing an extra scene to explain/hint at how it was done may have been better. Something to learn from I suppose.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2024 9:12 PM Title: Disappearing Trick
Not really a fan of vore, but this was an amusing enough read without getting particularly graphic. I know that they're magicians and all, but I can't help but ponder just how exactly he got out of her gut during their second showing without being vomited up at some point. Only one other possibility comes to mind, and I figure we're all adult enough that I won't spell it out. I suppose it's one of those "forever mysteries" that makes it magical, so to speak.
All things considered, a nice enough one-shot for the vore community while being relatively tame to outside viewers like myself, so kudos.
Author's Response:
If it makes it any better, I originally envisioned it involving a fake swallow and misdirection hiding where he'd exit her mouth. But I cut it because I A) couldn't get the full picture of it in my head, and B) was afraid of getting bogged down in details. In hindsight, I suppose some lines at least hinting at this(or a different method) would have been better. Thank you for the review though.