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Reviewer: Giga T-Girl Signed star [Report This]
Date: November 06 2025 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Lacking in flow and readability. Words thrown together in sentences seemingly without care, excusable if the authors native language is not English but still requiring a lot of polish

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