




Date: March 27 2024 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 13: The Prelude to the Trial
Ooh, are we going to get a little giantess courtroom (or block around the courtroom) drama soon? I love a good fictional legal battle, and it might be fun to see what that silly government will get up to next!
This chapter made me think back to the beginning of the previous one, with Thomas and Jeb sitting at the dinner table (and at breakfast time, no less!). It makes sense to me that Jeb can't see what Trish sees in the former psychologist, not because it's hard to see but rather because I'm not sure Jeb has the emotional capacity to understand it. I think he's a good person who loves his daughter, but he seems a hard man that would struggle to comprehend having to rely on someone emotionally.
I bring this up because I feel like we see in this chapter that value in Thomas that Jeb just can't grasp. As I was reading it, I kept thinking back to how Trish was a couple chapters ago, before making up with Thomas. How would that Trish have handled the government's tactics here? Honestly, I don't know if she ever would have even made it to the courthouse. She would have assumed that everyone saw her as a monster and either have been too embarrassed to show up or, if she did actually make it into town, would have been so emotionally spent, malnourished, and uncoordinated that she would have easily made one of those mistakes the government was hoping she'd make.
But Thomas gives Trish the confidence to be herself, and because of that, kind of like what we saw between Melanie and her, other people are starting to see the real Trish as well. Thomas assured her that people will fall in love with her once they see her for who she is, and Nancy proved him right. That whole interaction between the two women was incredibly sweet, and it was touching to see how grateful Trish was to have earned Nancy's trust, let alone the little (er, normal-sized) woman's support.
As far as shady plans go, the government's wasn't a bad one. The odds were in favor of her getting frustrated and looking scarier than she really is by trying to get into the building. Agent Grisham surely knows enough about Trish by now to know that she's not an actual threat, but he clearly expected her to cause at least some property damage, if not express outright frustration in a way that would terrify the media. Good on Trish for not falling into that trap. Also, I thought it was funny that she actually wanted the judge in company to be at least a little afraid of her (but, of course, wasn't willing to do anything to make them feel that way).
One segment in this chapter that I found particularly well written was the short one in which Trish wakes up Thomas in the middle of the night seeking comfort. I love the fact that she didn't say a single word during that conversation; it conveyed a sense of vulnerability that now line of dialogue could match. It also matches her general meekness, which is part of her charm and sets her apart from pretty much every other giant character written about on this site. She's willing to be assertive and domineering and even enjoy being so because of how happy it makes Thomas, but this quiet, reliant (I like how she matched his deep breathing in order to fall asleep) demeanor is her true nature. It's incredibly cute, too!
After saying that, however, I have to admit I'm loving Trish's evergrowing confidence! Despite her nerves and needing Thomas's support to get over them, the confidence with which she handled the media (especially after seeing that Thomas was right about people liking her) was pretty impressive. Between that and her genuine nature (that "Oh, hi!" she gave to Nancy even made me smile), there was no way the government was going to be able to shape the narrative here.
Like I said before, I'm really curious to see what else the government has up their sleeve. They're playing dirty, and I'm wondering if they might drag in a certain ex-girlfriend to make Trish and/or Thomas look bad (I'm not sure how they would make her seem relevant to the case, but I wouldn't put it past them to find a way). The accommodations made for Trish ought to be pretty interesting as well.





Date: March 23 2024 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Prelude to the Trial
Really good stuff. Enjoying the gentle giantess content as Trish interacts with an ever-shrinking world from her perspective, trying to be as delicate as she can despite the power her larger size gives her. I always find it to be an amusing paradox of sorts where ever-growing women try their hardest to be as gentle and accommodating as they can, sort of like a "bull in a china shop" with a heart of gold, if that makes sense. The overall tone reminds me of stories like "Rowena" by Pixis and "Rise of a Princess" by Jacksmith. Anyways, really good stuff and looking forward to more as Trish ascends to greater and greater heights over time. It'll REALLY be something to see how she interacts with the world once she's 50 feet tall, 100 feet tall, or greater than that even...like a living mountain trying to tiptoe around molehills. It'll be especially amusing if she has to navigate through city streets and among taller buildings, assuming the street widths will be 10-15 feet wide or so.
Anyways, really good stuff! One of the best stories I've come across here in a while. I know I haven't posted reviews for other chapters up to this point, but you've really got interesting character dynamics going on between Thomas, Trish, and some of the other characters. Kind of wondering how things'll pan out with Thomas's ex-girlfriend Melanie. I do feel a little bad for her, given that she seemed to be genuinely interested in Thomas and appeared to be a good person all around. Wondering if she'll make another appearance or if her role in the story is effectively done. If she does make a return in the story, I imagine that she'd be somewhat livid that Thomas strung her along somewhat and toyed with her heartstrings, even if it wasn't intentional. I don't know if she's the type to forgive him or not, but it would be interesting if she pops up somewhere in the storyline.
Anyways, I feel like I'm jabbering on and on at this point. Anyways, really enjoyable stuff!





Date: March 19 2024 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Heart Grows Fonder
I think the biggest thing that stuck out to me in the entire chapter was Trish comparing her game with Thomas with playing with a pet.
Now, at first glance (particularly in stories on this site) that might be looked at as a demeaning thing, like Trish thinks less of him or puts herself above him. And while I do think that Trish's view on humanity as a whole has been changing for a while now, I don't think that's what she means here (at least not entirely).
I think the comparison has more to do with the fact that her enjoyment from playing with Thomas came from knowing how much he loved what she was doing with him and what it made him feel for her. We don't play fetch with our dogs because we just love to throw a ball around; we do it because we love to see how happy it makes them to go fetch it. The same goes for petting a cat; it makes us happy when they purr because we know that means we're doing something that they enjoy.
Trish liked playing with Thomas more than she admitted to him (at least I felt as though her answer to him didn't match the enthusiasm she had for it in the narrative). She probably played it off because she didn't want to give him the wrong idea and make him think she got something sexual out of it, which she didn't. Her fun was based entirely on his pleasure, and once she figured out what he liked, she really got into it, to the point where she wasn't going to stop until he said the safe word (which we know because she wasn't the least bit worried that she had overdone it when he screamed "Jumbo! Jumbo!).
So I think that's what she meant when she compared getting him off to playing with a pet. She had fun because he had fun. If wasn't into it, she would have been bored and probably hated doing it.
Of course, having said all that, Trish's view on humanity has been changing for a while now, so I can't completely discount her starting to view her relationship with Thomas through that lens. She said a while ago that she wasn't really human anymore and even argued when Thomas tried to tell her that she was. She's also commented in the past about how cute everyone is getting as she gets bigger and bigger. What's interesting about this is that it has been viewed as a negative by Trish throughout most of the story (mainly her depression over thinking that everyone thinks she's a monster, even if they like it), but that's starting to change, with this chapter including a big step in that development.
Speaking of said development, I loved the back and forth Trish went through in the first half of this chapter, battling herself over dual feelings of embarrassment and sexiness over her size. The embarrassment has always been there, even with the help of Thomas's confidence building, but we saw her start to feel sexy over her size at the end of the previous chapter, when she compared it to getting her curves in before the other girls. This chapter both built on that and dealt with the head on collision it was bound to have with her natural discomfort over being big very well.
It makes sense that, with a lover who's into it, her wanting to be desired would win out over the awkwardness she feels about the size difference. And the way she went about trying to get more of that feeling, using stuff she read on the forum and slowly building confidence after some direction from Thomas, was as cute as it was erotic, all without her feeling like a different person. I'm really interested to see where this budding confidence in her size goes from here.
Thomas knowing what Trish is into, both when he embarrassed her (I like how she was embarrassed by him knowing about her bondage kink despite her knowing about his much less common and far more embarrassing one) and when he helped her get off. The latter, in particular, was pretty impressive, as he knew just what little things to do to make Trish's fantasy feel more real to her, which I think is why it turned out better than she had expected. Besides, your therapist is going to know about your bondage fetish. I mean, come on.
But I think Thomas's knowledge on how to get Trish going is yet another thing that shows that he loves her as a person and isn't just into her because of his own fetish. He knows her very well, and he uses that knowledge to do everything he can to make her feel as good as possible. Seeing Trish incorporate what he was doing into her fantasy really helped show that he knew what he was doing, too.
Jeb's acceptance of this situation was kind of funny to me, too. I mean, it makes perfect sense, but it's just funny that he had to go from "there's plenty of places to bury a body out here" to giving Thomas a place to stay is pretty funny, especially since he clearly still doesn't very much care for Thomas. He's a good dad, though, and he's just happy to see his daughter happy. We talk a lot about Thomas being the only one that doesn't see Trish as a monster, but I'm pretty sure Jeb still sees her as his little girl. He's just not much for those icky feelings that everyone else has, so it's harder for him to convey that
Looking forward to the next one!





Date: March 13 2024 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 11: Absence
I was about 50-50 on whether we'd see a quick reconciliation between our two protagonists or the issue between them would be stretched out for a while. I could have easily seen a split between Thomas's anguish and the government continuing to fuck with an isolated Trish tormenting us for a few more chapters at least.
I was pretty thrilled to see that it was the former instead. The slow burn that this story has been, with Thomas and Trish finally admitting their feelings near the end of the chapter before everything went to hell, built up enough anticipation for their reunion that it was extremely rewarding without having to draw things out. It legitimately felt good to see her forgive him and apologize for jumping to conclusions herself.
I really like how that confrontation was handled. It was made clear that Trish was really struggling to get over her feelings for Thomas, yet she still held on to that anger when she saw him for the first time in a month (and really talked to him for the first time in three months). In fact, those feelings seemed to motivate that anger, as she felt used and betrayed by the man she loves (and she still loved him through all of that, even if she couldn't admit it until they made up). And while Thomas's honest answer and physical contact certainly helped break through that cloud of anger, it was her own feelings that ultimately led her to forgive him.
When she picked him up and looked at his face, she saw everything she needed to see. It reminded her of why she fell in love with him. After basically being tortured and shown what were most likely the worst aspects of Thomas's fetish (I like that this was confirmed that the agents showed her particular aspects of it, as opposed to just being told that he was into giants; it shows just how manipulative they were) for two months, it was easy to forget that she saw how much he cared for her as much as she heard it from him. This was mentioned multiple times in previous chapters, and it was a nice touch to circle back to that here.
Trish conducting her own "research" was pretty interesting as well. The fact that de facto confirmation that she was "TheRealPatriciaHolsettler" was grouped in with her reflecting back on the agents' showing her things about Thomas's fetish implies that said research was her way of trying to better understand Thomas. Now whether that was in hopes of discovering something that would prove the agents wrong or it had more to do seeking some odd sense of closure, it's tough to say. But I think her last reaction on the site says a lot about a deeper reason why Thomas's "betrayal bothered her so much.
Yeah, obviously her thinking he saw her as a monster bothered her, but I think that the thought of him only wanting her because of something that terrifies her is upsetting as well. She's scared about what's happening to her, and her belief that the only one who ever gave her comfort against that fear was really only ever in love with what was causing it cut deep. I think his admission that he is attracted to that but also that his attraction to her ran deeper, as well as the reaffirmation of his love for her, helped her realize that he can both be into her growth and care about her as a person at the same time. That might actually do more to quell her fear than his previous support, at least in the short term. We kind of saw that when she compared her growth to her curves coming in before all the other girls; she's starting to view it as a positive rather than a negative.
That might not hold up if/when she hits some truly massive sizes, but I feel like we're in for a more confident Trish who's eager to explore Thomas's attraction to her size in the coming chapters. At least, that's the hope!
And I kind of go back to what I said in my last review, that this challenge would ultimately be a good thing for the two of them. In a lot of ways, I feel like they're in a better place now then they were two chapters ago. There's no more need to hide the relationship, no more guilt over cheating, no more hidden fetishes, and I feel like, between the time apart and the fighting, that those unintentional grooming and manipulation concerns are out the window now. Other than Thomas being more or less unemployed (he was suspended without pay and this chapter made a point to note that he had done nothing about that yet, so I suppose he still technically has the job, but he can't go back after all this, right?), things have turned out pretty okay with him. I still do think the whole Melanie thing could come back to bite him in some unexpected way, though.
But overall, it feels like Trish and Thomas have gotten off to a fresh start, which is exactly what they needed if this thing was going to continue long term (or as long as Trish has before she outgrows intimate human contact).
Lastly, I again want to commend you for writing intimate scenes that capture the awkwardness of the size difference between Trish and Thomas without making them feel, well, awkward. That bit about Trish and Thomas trying to French each other perfectly encapsulated that they aren't used to doing stuff like that at Trish's current size, but, at the same time, that didn't take anything away from the passion of the moment either. I feel like that's pretty hard to pull off, so I just wanted to call attention to it again. Great work!
Now, it'll be interesting to see how Jeb reacts to the news that Thomas is moving to the ranch, given the indirect threats he made both with his gun and his own giant daughter.




Date: March 11 2024 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 11: Absence
Not bad





Date: March 09 2024 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Strange Case of Patricia Hostettler
Absolutely brilliant.
Not only does your prose elevate this but the way you've structured the plot and character arcs of Trish and Thomas is simply put - great. The reuniting of the two was adorable and touching and the spice is layered with a self-awareness that I think really does something special in the case of erotica. Trish feels like an average person going through a traumatic ideal which achieves this level of realness in her character and only makes me see her more as a real person who actually grew to be a 'giantess' in both the literal and metaphorical term which our fetish loves to use, it gives her actions more weight in the story and they feel grounded and real and I have to commend you on that, and Thomas in some twisted fate as a fetishist being entangled in it all is great storytelling and you've depicted their relationship in such a genuine way.
I look forward to wherever you take it. GOOD STUFF!!! 10/10!!!





Date: March 04 2024 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 10: Scrutiny
Well, at least the cat (or all the cats, in this case) is out of the bag now, right? Right?!
This chapter was a straight-up gut punch, and that's absolutely a good thing. Looking at some of the other reviews for the chapter, it looks like pretty much everyone feels really bad for Thomas, which is a testament to how well you're writing has us invested in these characters. And this body blow was set up so well, too, given how it came out of seemingly nowhere (this chapter starts with a very different type of tension, which made how things developed especially blindsiding).
As a reader, I've developed so much empathy for Thomas and Trish, that it's easy to forget that the former's actions are ultimately wrong and that a good portion of what's happening to him now has been earned. That's not to say I think Thomas is a bad guy (I mean, I've been making the opposite case in pretty much every other review for this story so far, after all), but, as Thomas himself acknowledged at the start of the chapter, what he's doing to Melanie is terrible, even if his intent isn't malicious. Not to mention that the ethics of his position are in place for a reason, and he himself was concerned that he had inadvertently groomed Trish to love him (which yet again, I don't think is the case). So I say all of that to say this: it's pretty remarkable to create a character that engages in things that, on a surface level, most people would find despicable, yet present him in a way that makes us not only root for him while he's doing said things but want to root for him even more now in this "all is lost" moment and feel his anguish as he endures the consequences of his actions.
Man, I'm still kind of in awe over how masterfully you've incorporated what I think is one of the deepest fears among those who share our fetish. An invasive government pulled out a harmless post from before he even met Trish and exposed his "unique" tastes to all the right people to ruin his life. I'm pretty sure this is why some people (most notably writers) leave our little community and try to delete every trace that they were ever a part of it. There's a paranoia about being exposed and, more importantly, judged by those around us, people we care about or maybe even just have to deal with day-to-day that we're so sure wouldn't understand what this fetish really is and why it is that we're sucked into it. The way all of those fears became reality for Thomas in the worst way (granted there's more to his downfall than that, but we'll get to that in a minute) so quickly plays into real concerns that your audience likely has fantastically.
I also think that's part of what makes this whole thing hit so hard. It would be one thing if Thomas and Trish were caught in the act or an upset Melanie, after learning the truth, pulled the first threat of this grand unraveling in righteous anger, but to have the intrusive power of the federal government capitalize on something so minor, something that actually isn't morally wrong when Thomas has made so many moral misjudgments helps the audience get behind Thomas even more. Despite everything he's done (even if I don't judge him too harshly for his actions up to this point), he's getting screwed over. Like that's what does him in?! Really?! Not to mention just how hard this innocuous thing the Feds have found out has destroyed him so profoundly. I would think even those who might have been thinking that Thomas had most of this coming would have a hard time not getting behind him after this.
I'm also really intrigued by just what it is the government is after here. It may be a bit murky at this point, but it seems to me like they've got a plan in place. Agent Grisham immediately identified Thomas as "the one to talk to" about Trish, only for the government to dig as deep as a post on an internet message board made before he even knew Trish. They were clearly going to great lengths to sever the connection Thomas had with her, even if they didn't know exactly what said connection entailed. Then there's the 60 days of house arrest and trumped up criminal charge. It seems to me that they want Trish feeling all alone and in a less than clear mindset. Now what could the U.S. government possibly want with an ever expanding woman?
And while I feel terrible for Thomas, I feel just as bad for Trish, given the above-mentioned torment she's being put through here. And in addition to all that, she now believes that the one person who actually sees her for who she is rather than how big she is thinks of her the same way that everybody else does, only he's into it, which makes him even worse in her eyes. While everyone else is afraid of her, she thinks Thomas was using her like an object for his own perverse pleasure. So her anchor, the one who she could turn to when she needed somebody the most, is not only no longer there, but all of the support he had given her is now tainted. She can't even think back to the good times they had together anymore. She's truly alone in the world now.
With all of that in mind, I can't really blame Trish for being shitty with Thomas and refusing to hear him out. Not only that, but you also have to consider how she was told about Thomas's fetish. The feds, who I again think did this specifically to drive a wedge between the two of them, surely cherrypicked what they shared with her about it, maybe picked out a few select posts to really make Thomas look bad. Not only that, but Jeb and her lawyer aren't exactly his biggest fans anymore, either, so she's been hearing nothing but negative things about Thomas for two months straight, all while she was left starving, sleep-deprived, underclothed, and unable to stand up properly for at least part of her imprisonment. With all that taken into consideration, I think she handled that confrontation with Thomas about as well as could be expected.
Of course, all of that doesn't make her calling him a creep sting any less. That was brutal.
I do wonder what she'll think about the whole thing once she gets a good night's sleep and a proper meal (assuming the government doesn't having anything else immediately up their collective sleeve). Will she regret not hearing Thomas out, or will she double down on those feelings of betrayal and disgust? Will she regret getting physical with Thomas, or will her growing disconnect with the rest of humanity cause her to give in to that darker impulse she felt when she knocked him over or when she wanted to force him in to sex when she was drunk? Will she think back on those times with Thomas and refuse to believe that the love they shared was a lie, or will those outside influences continue to ruin her vision of him? And even if she does regret what happened, will she be too ashamed of herself or scared that he'll view her the same as everyone else now to try and do something about it?
I'm an optimist, and I think they'll work things out and be better for it. Aside from the obvious, out-of-story reasons to suspect as much, such as the knowledge that we're only about, what, a third of the way through the story and the title of the story itself, I do think that all the groundwork you laid out for this relationship in the first nine chapters built a strong enough foundation that Trish will eventually hear Thomas out and take him at his word (now whether this happens sooner or later, I don't know). Hell, I'd argue that something like this needed to happen at some point, as Trish needed to see Thomas as something other than the strong, confident, and damn near perfect man she had built him up to be in her head (all of the things that made her think that are a part of him, of course, but she needs to see him vulnerable and at his weakest as well to truly accept who he is) and Thomas probably needed something to show that Trish wasn't accidentally brainwashed into loving him (two months away and now seeming to hate him is enough to prove that any grooming that he thinks he incidentally did will have been undone). Now, if they end up back together after this moment, it will feel that much more real than it did before, and each can be more confident in the relationship.
Of course, I admit that things could easily go the other way. We could be in for 20-some chapters of Thomas agonizing over love lost and Trish slowly drifting further and further away from humanity, with another meeting between the two down the road being less than fun for our (probably former) resident psychologist. After all, the story's title could be an ironic one. Given the way the story has gone so far, I don't think we'll be going down a path that dark but not knowing for sure keeps things interesting and makes the prospect of a happier ending (or at least more potential happiness on our way to the ending) that much more rewarding if it comes to fruition.
Melanie is in a really interesting spot here. She could be about to fade away into the background (or "off stage" completely) or possibly be about to expand her role in the story once again. I'm really curious about the contents of all those voicemails. Is sweet understanding Melanie unleashing her vengeful anger on the man who betrayed her trust? Is she just looking for understanding about the situation? Is she, despite what Thomas has done to her, still concerned about him? Or is she looking to relieve a different set of emotions on him entirely? I really don't know, especially since we only got a brief glimpse into her reaction to his infidelity.
I could see Melanie piling on to Thomas's problems (not out of spite, necessarily, but maybe a need to unburden herself of those potentially hostile feelings), or I could see her being more understanding of his situation (despite her obvious hurt feelings). We've only had a small window into her personality so far, so a lot is left open to our speculation, but the impression I've had of her so far has been that she's generally an overly nice and understanding person. I couldn't blame her for bucking that trend in this situation, though.
Either way, I have a feeling that she's going to play a fairly significant part in at least the next chapter or two.
If I may offer a tiny bit of constructive criticism here, I think you put together a really good symbolic dream sequence pretty early in the chapter, but then you explained the symbolism of the dream immediately afterward. This isn't a mistake by any means, nor does it hurt the story (I think you flowed the explanation pretty smoothly into the narrative actually), yet I found myself wishing that you would have trusted that you had conveyed the meaning behind the dream clearly enough that such an explanation wasn't necessary. The dream was straight forward with its intent (especially with Trish's last line of dialogue there), but Thomas recognizing the symbolism of the dream as he decided to act on it and end things with Melanie felt (at least to me) that you were concerned that the reader wouldn't fully understand what it was about the dream that sparked this in Thomas.
This is, again, a very small knit to pick, but it's something that I've seen several writers, both within the sphere of this fetish and outside of it, feel the need to do. It might just be a personal preference thing (and if that's how this comes off, I apologize), but, as a reader, I strongly prefer to be left to interpret the meaning behind things on my own.
But yeah, fantastic chapter overall , and way to build anticipation for the release of the next one!
Author's Response:
Thanks as always for the thorough review! I have to say, I am loving the dramatic irony on my end. Knowing where the story goes from here and seeing you thinking about it is very gratifying as a writer.
On your constructive note: Yeah, I went over that line a few times. Ultimately I left it in not to explain the dream sequence, but to help explain Thomas's complicated feelings about Trish. He has subconsciously mapped his fantasies onto her and that interacts strangely with how he feels about her as a human being and a partner. While he fantasizes about Trish exercising her power over himself and others, that's not how he sees her as a person. I wanted to make that clear throughout the chapter, that he actually views her as sweet and harmless, to make her victimization at the hands of the government and her behavior towards him at the end hit harder.





Date: March 03 2024 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 10: Scrutiny
I'd not read macro stories in absolutely ages, but over the last week or so I belatedly dipped into the Amazon / MiniGTS section and stumbled across this doozy. I devoured Chapters 1-9 in one big go a few days ago, and then caught up on the latest chapter yesterday.
First things first - this is a great read; genuinely excellent. One of my favourite premises (gradual size change), thoughtful characters, punchy dialogue, and strong in-story logic. The last three chapters in particular have seen the ante go through the roof, each one ending in reader elation, trepidation and devastation respectively.
Prior to chapter 8, Thomas could conceivably have stepped away with his reputation in tact, but the cathartic steaminess of finally getting to be with Trish hit so perfectly you simply couldn't blame him for capitulating as he did. Chapter 9 then felt like him crashing through emergency stop barriers blindly hoping to jump the unfinished freeway, before Chapter 10 shows him torpedoing off it into a hole that leads directly to hell. I feel absolutely awful for him; he's one of the best-written macrophile-proxy-characters I've ever encountered so his downfall hits pretty close to home, but it's not like the foreshadowing wasn't there. As inappropriate and unprofessional as it undoubtedly is, you've done an excellent job depicting the desperate, desirous thoughts someone with our kink would almost inevitably wrestle with if faced with such a situation in real life - an almost Icarus-like parable.
Having Trish treat him with such contempt post-downfall is brutal but believable, it just hurts so much after the pair of them shared a real bond. I think this is very much exacerbated by the fact that Trish paved a lot of the path that led to them becoming intimate, from Thomas' perspective it felt like he fought it as long as he could, but when presented with an impossible dream made real, that terrible temptation could not be resisted forever. He was weak, and for that he seemingly pays the ultimate price, but as a reader I am absolutely desperate for him to find a way to explain to Trish how it unfolded from his position, how he truly meant everything he said about seeing her as a human, and how tormented by his feelings he truly was and is.
Whatever unfolds from this point forward, I am fully invested in Thomas' quest to appeal to Trish's sense of empathy, perhaps because it reflects each of our own journeys towards acceptance and being loved for who we are in real life, I just really want Thomas and Trish to arrive at that conclusion together too, even if it takes a particularly long and circuitous route.





Date: March 02 2024 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Strange Case of Patricia Hostettler
Man... This chapter makes me so Sad :(
Date: March 02 2024 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 10: Scrutiny
This was a difficult chapter. Hope things piece back together for Thomas and Trish.





Date: February 25 2024 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 7: In the Spotlight
Real nice flow and plot progression. I can understand Thomas's logic in taking a gamble on revealing Trish to the world, but it is a gamble all the same. Depending on how big Trish ends up becoming (thousands of feet tall or greater), I'd wager that there are those within the national security apparatus who would become paranoid and ruled by fear from the mere potential she'd have as a giantess, no matter how gentle she remained or how much restraint she showed in interacting with the outside world.
If she keeps growing to the point where she starts eclipsing skyscrapers, there might be those in the Pentagon, the NSA, the DHS, or some other bureaucracy who might believe she's too dangerous to be allowed to live and resort to an airstrike to take her out (maybe even go nuclear if she enters mile-high territory). Of course, you could end up having saner, more compassionate individuals running Washington in this story who decide not to be ruled by fear of what she's capable of, but that's your call to make in the end.
One point of note would be that if Trish does grow to the point of skyscraper-level height, both food and water would be a tricky thing to provide for someone of such size. The caloric intake would be astronomical by human standards, along with being able to clothe a human of such size. There's also the matter of finding a place to go to the bathroom, unless her metabolism makes it so that she no longer expels solid or liquid waste as she grows larger (in case you need a little "deus ex machina" to alleviate that kind of a concern). Finding a place to wash or shower would also be tricky once she enters Godzilla territory in the size department. She'd have to be using literal lakes to clean herself (unless she ends up outgrowing even those, then she'd have to turn to the ocean).
Anyways, all these concerns aside, I'm really enjoying the plot progression, as well as Thomas's ability to take command and control of the situation, despite him being so much smaller than her by this point. The chemistry between the two of them is really something.





Date: February 25 2024 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Party
Very steamy scene indeed, especially at the end right before Trish calls it a night. I'm actually surprised Thomas didn't take a cold shower instead, in order to try and snuff out the fiery angst that was no doubt building up within him. If I could summarize this chapter in one sentence, it would be this: "Oh, the temptation!"
Anyways, good stuff!





Date: February 24 2024 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 9: Affair
I think it's good that Thomas is concerned that he may have groomed Trish for a relationship, even though I'm pretty sure he's wrong.
The fact that he's so worried about this is one of the many reasons that his actions haven't groomed her into loving him (the extreme guilt he felt the day after is another). He has constantly put a barrier up between them, keeping things professional despite his feelings, with the Patty Hotcakes incident serving as a prime example. The "grooming" was just them talking and getting to know each other (which, again, you've done a great job of showing throughout this story so far).
I'm of the opinion that Trish would be acting a lot differently if her feelings had been the product of grooming or were really an obsession rather than love. For example, mistake number two started with Trish waiting for Thomas to make the first move because she wanted to gauge how strong his feelings for her were. If she was groomed to love him or obsessed with him, she would be desperate for him to love her instead of giving any thought to what he actually wants.
Also, her writing off the initial mistake as a mistake at all and burying her feelings for Thomas's sake isn't something someone conditioned to love (if you can even call that love) would do. She put his wants and needs (i.e. his job) ahead of what she wanted, which, to me, is a sign of legitimate love.
In fact, Thomas initiated the second mistake because Trish was more in control of her feelings than he was of his at that point. The way I read that passage, it seemed as though she would have been content with that one moment she had with him (that's not to say she wouldn't have been bummed about it, but she was willing to accept that when she didn't know that he felt the same way).
Now, I do think her feelings of isolation played a role in the initial formation of their bond, so his concerns about inadvertently taking advantage of her weak mental state early on make sense. But really, that's less about how he treated her and more about how everyone else treated her. The hospital staff acted like she was a monster to be avoided while he acted like she was just any other patient (even though she was anything but in his mind). That's not his fault, and I think they've laid a more legitimate foundation from the friendship they formed after she got over that and got her confidence back.
I also like how patient Trish was with Thomas admitting his love for her. She knew how he felt (he showed her in the woods, even if he refused to say it), and that was enough for her. She was cool with him keeping up the illusion that each time was the last time because she knew he needed that at first. It took his relationship with Melanie to have her break that illusion for him. She knows she's not really the "other" girl, and I'm sure she feels bad for what they're doing behind the poor girl's back.
It was fitting that she used the power pose to extract that confession out of him. I love that she keeps using the confidence he helped her regain "against" him. I knew that confidence would come back to bite him.
And you raised a good point about how Melanie finds out and what she'll do. I've been so busy feeling bad for her that I didn't give much thought to how she could destroy Thomas's life. Now that it looks like Trish and he have decided that he'll end things with Melanie, he'll have to navigate that breakup real carefully.
Oh, and once again, amazing smut. I can't get enough of the blend of her letting him dictate her movements and her taking complete control by the end of things is intoxicating. Also, this allows each of them to give the other exactly what they want (Trish wants a man to lead and Thomas wants to be dominated).





Date: February 20 2024 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 8: Desire
Okay, so I wasn't completely wrong.
Trish did make the first move, and her increased confidence helped her do it. I think her using the confidence building exercise "against" Thomas was a really nice touch. Not only did that produce a "full-circle" moment with her figuring out for herself how to use what Thomas has been teaching her this whole time, but if you look at the times that she has used it up until now (with Thomas reminding her each previous time), it also shows that she was still nervous and unsure of herself in that moment.
Every time Trish hasn't been sure how to react to something, she has looked to Thomas, and he was signaled to her to keep her chin up and shoulders out, giving her the confidence she needed to get through those awkward situations. So here we see her knowing what she wants and being bold enough to pursue it, but still having doubts. Those doubts are understandable, given her philosophy on relationships (that it's better if the guy is taller), not to mention the concerns that come with having sex with your therapist and having sex with a friend's boyfriend.
But I really like that, while her confidence has grown exponentially throughout the story, she hasn't morphed into a super assertive type. A 180 like that just wouldn't feel natural, and you avoiding that trap shouldn't surprise me, as your handling of her character as she goes through this journey has been masterful.
And, of course, the fact that she had to wait for Thomas to initiate after that first move not only feeds into this, but it also makes both characters feel equally invested in the decision, too. That's important, as there's a lot involved in that decision, including some potentially serious consequences down the road. It's good that they jumped into this together, instead of Trish simply being the aggressor.
I also understand Trish's sense of urgency. While I've been focusing on other things in my reviews, I've also had the thought that she was "on the clock" if she wanted to have any semblance of normal sex with Thomas, and it was great to see her acknowledge that now. Not only does she want to experience that one more time before it's too late, but the man she loves is literally sitting in her bed with her. And then there's that movie that kind of mirrors her situation to motivate her further. There's no way she couldn't make a move!
I absolutely love the sex scenes in this chapter. They were a realistic blend of hot and awkward, which fits the situation perfectly. Trish has never had sex at that size, and Thomas has obviously never fucked someone twice his size before. So it only makes sense that they would have some issues. The part where Trish is trying so hard to push him deeper into her only for him to not be enough to fill her conveyed the size difference swimmingly, and the fact that he simply resorted to using his arm instead of feeling emasculated or inadequate is exactly what I would expect from him. If anything, being too small to satisfy her with his cock alone probably just made him harder, which is a mentality that's pretty much required for any partner Trish will ever have from this point forward. So in an odd way, that bit of awkwardness shows why they go together so well.
The same could be said for the shower scene. I like how you called attention to how difficult it was for Trish to stay so low for that blow job. And that growing confidence of hers allowed her to get past the concern of emasculating Thomas, rightfully realizing that her size hasn't bothered him up to that point, and lifting him up to finish him off. It was also sweet that, even though it's pointed out that Thomas's dick in her mouth didn't exactly fill her mouth, she was still felt so satisfied just by making him feel good.
Backtracking just a bit, I think the way Trish voluntarily let Thomas just move her body around was incredibly hot. There's just something about a woman who has the power to take control not doing so (at least not right away) that's so enthralling. And the thing with him making her keep her arms up and pulling her over with her shirt made it feel as though he was playing with a 12-foot-tall living doll! Not only that, but this made the following part (where Trish's passion takes control) feel so much more intense.
And I do think that Trish is well on the path to figuring out Thomas's little fetish. That he isn't emasculated when she takes control or, again, has to use his arm to please her, as well as the fact that wasn't scared or angry that she had actually hurt him during sex hint at it but likely aren't enough on their own to tip her off. The way he blew his load immediately after being manhandled by her in the shower is something she'll probably look back on the next time something like that happens though. Right now, she knows that he's not intimidated or emasculated by her size at all, but another moment or two like that and I think she'll piece together pretty quickly that he's actually into it.
It's sad that Trish doesn't understand why Thomas feels so guilty about this. She probably thinks he's thinking about Melanie or crossing that ethical barrier between therapist and patient when he smiles at her that way. And while I'm sure those things are either on his mind or will be shortly after he leaves, I think what's making him feel so guilty is that he believes he let Trish down. Up until now, he's been able to push his lust and growing personal feelings for her aside, remaining the professional that he thinks she needs him to be to get her through this. He thinks it was selfish for him to cave into his desires, and he probably believes that Trish will be worse off for it in the long run. So while she thinks he's simply regretting this decision (deterring her from sharing her true feelings at the end of the chapter), it's really his love and compassion for her that's making him feel this way.
In other words, even when you finally give us what we want, you still find a way to make it tantalizing at the same time. That's a great trait for a slow burn story, and I'm incredibly eager to see where things go from here (especially with so much story left).
And lastly, I decided to put the poor Melanie section of this review in the back this week. The three of them hanging out together both builds on her relationship with both of them and highlights how much more compatible Thomas is with Trish than he is with her. And I thought it was really sweet of her to let Thomas off the hook and basically give him her blessing to stay with Trish, despite feeling like the third wheel and obviously wanting something from him. Again, we don't see a ton of Melanie each chapter, but what we do get is someone who's insanely likable and someone who I'm going to feel really bad for once Trish and Thomas's (likely) ongoing affair is found out.
Author's Response:
Now the question is, how does she find out, and what will her reaction be?





Date: February 17 2024 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 8: Desire
This story is FANTASTIC! It's so well thought through and I really love the psychology content. Little touches like the "Patty Hotcakes" quirk really round out her character and the light femdom and love triangle keeps the tension up so well. Also her Dad being a libertarian cattle millionaire Texan is hilarious.





Date: February 11 2024 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 7: In the Spotlight
And Melanie continues to get closer to both of our protagonists. It's impressive how you've shown her relationship with each of them grow and made her so likable while devoting such a small portion of each chapter to her. You really maximize the impact of the scenes with her, yet you do it in a subtle way.
While we're on the subject of Melanie, I thought it was pretty telling that Trish could tell right away that Thomas had bad news while Melanie, his girlfriend, seemingly couldn't. That was a pretty nuanced way to suggest that Trish knows him better and is a better match for Thomas than Melanie.
We kind of saw a similar thing when Thomas realized that Trish was lying about not remembering the previous night. Yeah, her asking if he remembered anything else would make some people question if she was lying, but Thomas knew. He was familiar enough with her to know that she wouldn't have asked that unless she knew more happened that night. It's little things like this that continue to show just how well these two have come to know each other on a relatively short amount of time.
How Trish handled the morning after was certainly interesting. That she didn't just assume that Thomas had no interest in her after that shows that, on some level, she knows that he does. That she couldn't help but probe him about that night shows that she needs to hear him say it to be sure on a conscious level.
Perhaps more importantly on that front, I was surprised to see Trish actually consider allowing the government to take her. I thought she'd feel some guilt for some of those darker thoughts Patty Hotcakes had that night, but I didn't expect it to manifest in that way. I thought that was an incredibly selfless gesture on her part. She recognized what she could have done, even though she didn't do it, and thought about the safety of others before thinking about what was right for her (I'm sure the fact that it was Thomas she thought about taking advantage of really drove that point home for her).
But just the fact that she even had that thought in the first place shows that she's not going to abuse the power she has over people.
Thankfully, Thomas is there to save her from her own selflessness. And I like that it's emphasized multiple times that Trish wasn't sure about his plan and that she could have easily stopped him from pulling her along at any time. Despite that, she doesn't even try to stop him. She trusts him implicitly. That trust seems to supercede the doctor-patient relationship and her being a type-1 patient. She genuinely trusts that he cares enough about her to not lead her wrong.
We see just how far that trust goes later on when she realizes that she would do anything Thomas asked of her. Admittedly, this could be taken as a firm of obsession or dependence, but I don't think Trish's other actions back up those assertions. I really think it's just a high level of trust developed through the bond they share as friends (and the fact that they both want something more).
Thomas's actions also show that this trust isn't misplaced. He's not his usual, calm self. He doesn't even tell her to come with him when he pulls her to follow him. This had nothing to do with her being his patient or even his attraction to her size; he just didn't want something bad to happen to her. Despite him being pushy, I found that to be really sweet.
Trish trying to be strong to show Thomas that she's all better mentally so they can date was kind of cute and sad at the same time. I think it also shows that she isn't entirely reliant on him, since her own motivation kept her from falling to pieces immediately after hearing the bad news. I'm glad he got her to show her true feelings and let Melanie and him confirm her. Trish leans on Thomas a lit, bit, again, not in the way a therapist's patient usual does. She doesn't want to disappoint him, she wants him to be proud of her, and she just plain wants him. When she starts to doubt herself, she comes back to him. Like I said above, this toes the line between love and dependence, but I think we've seen enough at this point to know that her feelings for him are real.
Lastly, even though Dr. Vale went about things the wrong way and rightfully got knocked the fuck out for it, he does have a point. Threat to humanity isn't the right phrasing, I think, since, contrary to what Vale may think, Trish is still human, but there are some serious sustainability questions if her growth continues fir a couple years. The placement of his breakdown was good, as it reminds the reader that what qualified as a happy ending for this story is still pretty murky.
Is it Trish finding a cure and living g happily ever after with Thomas? Is it her growth tapering off at some semi-reasonable point and becoming Thomas's perfect fantasy? Or maybe it's as simple as finding a way for a miles-tall Trish to co-exist with the rest of humanity somehow. Will she even let herself grow that big, though? I think we're still pretty early in on this story, so there's still plenty of time to ponder that, but with everything that's been going on these last few chapters, it's good to be reminded of the long term stakes.
Anyway, excellent work as usually. I look forward to seeing which endorsement deals Trish takes on.





Date: February 06 2024 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Party
I think this chapter, while seeming mostly to be a fun, humorous one, is actually an extremely important one.
The dynamic between Thomas and Trish is an especially complex one, and that's even before considering the "love triangle" (I'm not quite sure that fits here with Melanie, given how there's a clear choice for Thomas once he gets past those other barriers) attached to it. Given the doctor-patient relationship shared by our two protagonists, it would be really easy to have (and difficult to avoid) this story turn into a case of a psychologist taking advantage of his patient and that patient falling in love because of her fragile psyche and loneliness.
While this story has been gradually moving away from that scenario, this chapter, in particular, sets the two of them up for a more legitimate-feeling relationship down the road.
Thomas's dedication to do what's right for Trish makes him extremely likable. The man had his fantasy dangled in front of him in maybe the most appealing manner, aside from if Trish knew about his fetish and acted on it, of course. Him conquering that temptation and remaining professional shows the reader that he isn't the kind of man to abuse the trust his patients put in him, which means that when he most assuredly breaks down and gives in in a future chapter, that decision probably won't be looked on as harshly as it would have if he had made a move on Trish in one of the previous chapters.
Also, the fact that his motivation for denying Trish's advances and keeping things professional is that, as he put it, Trish needed him shows both how much he legitimately cares about her and that he's putting her needs above his own. Extremely admirable.
I also noticed that thoughts of remaining loyal to Melanie never came up when he was fighting Trish's temptations. While not terribly surprising based on what we've seen so far, I thought it was pretty noteworthy that he didn't once think, "I can't do this. I have a girlfriend."
As for Trish, I think the fact that she's starting to involve more people in her life that really care about her really helps to build on her strengthening mental state, complimenting her returning confidence quite well. Not only did she have a group of old friends accept and treat her the same her despite her condition, but it seems she's gotten tight with Melanie pretty quickly too. Having more people than just Thomas to lean on, even if she doesn't actually take advantage of it, makes her feel less isolated and dependent on Thomas. That alone makes her feel less like a potential victim should she start fucking her psychologist.
But maybe more importantly, that Thomas rejected her efforts to bed him will make her feelings feel more real than desperate when they finally get together. There's a lot of ways she could feel about this the next morning: guilty, depressed, angry, embarrassed, maybe even more turned on (if she still thinks Thomas likes her but is resisting her, rather than straight up rejecting her). But regardless of those feelings, I can only see her thinking that Thomas is off limits in the immediate future. For whatever reason, he could have had her and he didn't even show a visible sign of being tempted (even though we know that he most definitely was). That has to be discouraging for her, and she's most likely going to try to bury her feelings for him.
The fact that she likely won't be able to for very long will, again, legitimize them. She's not just some lovesick patient crushing on the man who is helping her through the most difficult time of her life. She actually likes him, and the fact that he happens to be her psychologist is really just an unfortunate coincidence.
Speaking of Trish's attraction to Thomas being legit, you yet again did a great job of displaying in a subtle way exactly what it is she sees in him after he found her in her drunken state. Thomas makes clear that he's afraid of Trish like this, not because of what she'll knowingly do but because she has less control of her body and could hurt him on accident. Yet he handles that fear by taking control of the situation (and the fact that she's a Type 1 patient; I really like how that was established early on and keeps being used without direct reference).
Trish likes strong men, and not just in the physical sense. I found myself wondering how she would react if she were to discover that she scared the one person who has never been afraid of her up until that point, let alone the man she wants to be with. I think guilt and sadness would be the primary feelings running through her, but just beneath that, I think she would be extremely turned on. That he could put his fear aside and come off as commanding and in charge as he did, something she found sexy without knowing about his fear, is something that she would no doubt find to be incredibly hot.
Going back to Melanie, she helps make this slow burn story all the more unique. With each passing chapter, I find myself wanting Trish and Thomas to act on their feelings for each other all the more, only for this to be dragged out at a delightfully agonizing pace. However, at the same time, that train wreck that is Melanie's relationship with Thomas being destroyed in the process keeps building, giving me that "cover my eyes but look through the cracks" feeling. And now Trish is building a friendship with her, which is going to make things even worse when everything comes crashing down. The mix of anticipation and dread is as intriguing as it is addicting.
Finally, I'm doubling down on my earlier prediction that Trish is going to figure out Thomas's fetish and use it to finally break through that pesky ethical barrier keeping them apart. Thomas was able to resist his dream girl coming on to him in a (mostly) normal way, but once she finally uses her size to her advantage with him, it's over. That little reimagining in the shower of his encounter with her pretty much confirms that. If she hadn't let him go when he gave her that look, he probably would have given in.
At some point, Thomas is going to say or do something. It's going to be a small thing. Something that most people wouldn't catch. But Trish, having gotten so close to him all this time, is going to catch it. And she's going to use it to figure out that he likes her big (maybe she won't know how big he wants her right away, but she'll figure out that she's exactly what he wants). That will be a fun chapter, I think (assuming I'm right, of course).
What makes this particularly interesting is Trish's belief that it's "better" if the man is bigger in a relationship. Her wording implies that it's not that she isn't attracted to people shorter than her but rather that relationships with shorter men haven't ended well for her. In other words, it's a mentality that developed over time rather than a preference. So it'll be hard for her to get used to the fact that Thomas wants to be treated like the smaller one, and that will make all that stuff I said above that much harder for her, too.
But yeah, fantastic chapter. Like I said, aside from everything else, this was also a pretty fun chapter, and drunk Trish was hilarious. Where we go from here should be pretty interesting!





Date: February 01 2024 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 5: Moving Out
What sticks out to me the most in this chapter is the growing confidence is Trish. I mean, going up to Melanie unprompted (and even discouraged!) to invite her to her house warming party, politely demanding that the staff figure out a way for her to have her outdoor times, and even the way she reacts to Thomas blurting out this was his job are all things I could have never seen her doing even in the previous chapter.
With the Thomas situation in particular, I feel like she would have crumbled and reverted back to trying to shrink herself in a ball if this had happened earlier in the story. She would have been devastated by this, and he would have lost her trust forever. To see her go from that fragile state to handling those difficult feelings with passive aggressive anger, actually processing her feelings, and apologizing the next day shows a lot of growth, I think.
So Trish's character development is already so rewarding, and it sounds like we're not even that far into the story yet. I'm looking forward to her continuing to open up as her confidence returns.
Poor Melanie. There's nothing bad happening to her yet, but you know that the closer she gets to Thomas, the more she's going to get hurt when Thomas and Trish eventually and inevitably stop fighting against what they really want. We haven't seen a ton of Melanie yet, but she seems really nice, and the fact that she seems to have more sympathy than fear of Trish makes her pretty likable early on. Every time I see her flirting with Thomas, there's a small pit in my stomach because I know how this ends (not literally, of course, but in a figurative sense). This is great writing, and I love how the story can make me feel this way about her, especially when she hasn't had a lot of "screen time" as of yet.
And the fact that Trish, in an effort to accept that Thomas is off-limits and move past her feelings, actually helped advance the relationship between Thomas and Melanie just adds to the whole thing. It was an innocent thing for Trish to do, but again, it's like seeing a train wreck coming from a mile away and not being able to do a thing about it.
As for Trish trying to move past those feelings, I think that was handled really well here. We've focused mostly on Thomas's efforts to do that so far, so with Trish starting to have romantic fantasies about him last chapter, it was a nice parallel to see her going through the same thing he is. This could have easily been a story about a moral, but fetish-obsessed therapist accidentally taking advantage of a lonely, lovesick patient (which is the ethical concern Thomas has, of course), but Trish coming into her own and fighting against her feelings gives them a more legitimate feel, if that makes sense. It doesn't feel like she's falling for him just because he was there at a time in which she was emotionally fragile. She seems to actually like him for who he is, and he just happens to be her therapist who has helped her through a really tough time in her life, too.
Also feeding into that feeling are the interactions between the two as the story progresses. I mentioned this last chapter, but I feel like it was more prominent here (and probably will be going forward, surely). You've written two characters that mesh, and it's easy to believe that they like each other. Their banter is a lot of fun without being over the top. Like I said before, Trish's reaction to Thomas's mistake didn't seem exaggerated. And the way they apologized to each other was cute and endearing without being overly dramatic. These characters feel real, as does the progression of their relationship with one another.
So great work once again! This story has been extremely enjoyable so far, and I look forward to seeing where you've taken it in the chapters ahead!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for these reviews, you don't know how helpful they've been as I've gone back to do my weekly edits.




Date: January 27 2024 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 5: Moving Out
So I just read all the chapters. So far definitely like the story.
Can't wait to read more.





Date: January 22 2024 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 4: Boyfriend
Well that went even worse than I thought it would!
I mean, I figured the odds that Jake would end up being the understanding type were pretty low, but there was a small chance (in my mind, at least) that he would at least try, which would have muddied things up with poor Dr. Black. But man, Jake turned out to be an even bigger asshole than I thought he was probably going to be.
I thought you did a nice job of selling us on the idea that Jake was a douche right from the start, when he was actually trying to be nice. The way he casually insulted the town without even realizing it and how he shrugged off doing the exercise telegraphed right away that this wasn't going to go well.
Trish's reaction to Jake's arrival made a lot of sense, too. Obviously there's her need to take out her anger at Jake rejecting her (especially since she wasn't ready to accept that yet). But even beyond her scapegoating the hospital staff and even Thomas himself for having "tricked her to being okay with this," I think the way she responded to Jake fits Thomas's initial conclusion that she's a "type 1" patient.
Trish has so far relied on the firm direction of Dr. Black to deal with this difficult time in her life. Taking so much of the immense pressure off of her by telling her what to do, even though he makes it clear that he isn't (and can't) actually make her do anything. That authoritative direction is exactly what the confused and scared woman needs right now to gain some semblance of order within herself, although I do think she's going to outgrow (Yeah, it's a pun, what about it?) this as the story progresses and the good doctor helps her build her confidence (I'm of the impression that this is going to be a 180-degree improvement).
But, for now, Jake stepped in and, due entirely to his previous role in Trish's life, took that role of authoritative guide away from Thomas, his voice instead directing her to lash out at the people who, in his mind, weren't working hard enough on his girlfriend's problem (with zero knowledge of what has actually been done). So it makes sense that Trish would become so adversarial, and it also makes sense that Jake's guidance would lead to her falling into maybe a worse mental state than when she first arrived at the hospital.
I'm also pretty sure this is the reason why Thomas was able to pick up where he left off so easily. With Jake out of the picture, she responded to his gentle commanding quite well (I thought him turning the doorknob to signal he was coming in and simply waiting for her to move was a nice touch). In this depressing ordeal, she trusted him to assume control of the situation, and he, in turn, showed that her trust was well placed, not only by helping her cope with Jake's betrayal, but doing the same with the much worse news about her growing prospects.
Maybe more importantly, I think that this whole thing is starting to teach her to rethink her situation. That line about not wanting to see a hypothetically apologetic Jake shows a shift in her mentality. While she still hates what's happening to her, she's starting to care less about the people who are having a negative influence on her mood and focusing more on what makes her happy (which is why hearing that Dr. Black is dating made her feel like shit again, for a completely different reason).
To me, this is what her imagining of her growth within the hospital and, later on, her fantasy about Dr. Black is all about. Breaking through the hospital entryway with a "fuck it" is a sort of liberation and her envisioning him at knee height when talking to him was a symbol of the comfort she finds in knowing that he'll accept her like that. And her fantasizing about him coming onto her at the same size when she was 30 feet tall moments before further hits that point home, among other, more obvious things.
But in short, I would be surprised if we saw Trish squeeze herself into a ball again. This whole thing will help her truly build her confidence, I think.
While Jake certainly isn't going to be muddying things up for Thomas like I thought he might, it looks like Melanie will be taking on that role instead, and in a completely different way, too. Having him be the one with feelings for two people probably makes more sense storywise anyway, particularly given the moral quandary him being in a relationship with Trish presents. I kind of expect him to lean into that connection he was starting to feel for Melanie in an effort to stave off his feelings for Trish, which isn't going to end well for Melanie. It's really only a matter of how far along they take things and how much she's going to get hurt. Well, nobody said stepping out of the background to become a major character was easy.
By the way, I also really like that Thomas is actually starting to feel something for Melanie, instead of just running into a relationship to stop thinking about Trish. I also like that it was noted that he's found common ground with Trish through their similar sense of humor. It would have been pretty easy to just focus on Trish's size and to use Melanie as a prop to add drama to the story, but these little details make them feel more human and the story easier to invest myself in. Again, these are small things, but they're appreciated.
Finally, I'm starting to change how I think how Thomas's secret getting revealed to Trish is going to go down. Up until this chapter, I kind of figured that he would either confess out of guilt or slip up and say something accidentally. Now, given her reaction to his erection jabbing her stomach and subsequent thoughts afterward, I'm thinking she might figure it out on her own and use the thing she's hated this whole time to win over the man she's infatuated with. It would be pretty rewarding to see her go from not wanting to stand up when he's looking at her to having the confidence to use her size to make a move on him. Anything's still possible at this point, obviously, but this chapter got my imagination moving in a different direction for some reason.
But yeah, if it wasn't obvious already, I was a big fan of this chapter. Awesome work!
Author's Response:
Thank you once again for a very thorough write up! I hope you enjoy the next chapter.