[Report This]Date: January 07 2024 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
Let me begin by stating the obvious: your story is amazing! I have yet to catch up with the latest chapters, but I have to say it now: your storytelling is amazing.
As far as I can tell, you are managing to tell a real story around Jake’s size and fetishes. And that is because Jake’s story is not about his lust, but his strugles. His despair after shrinking again… And before that, seeing how Jake lacks space and understanding within the family, his low self esteem, him trying to cause as little trouble as possible… man, that felt real.
Jacob feels like he needs to be accepted inside his own family! As if he was less. Less important to them. Is he? I hope not.
I would like to comment more, but I want to do that when I am all caught up.
Thanks for writing and sharing with us! Your world building reminds me of "Homunculus", a classic from the site. Are you perhaps familiar?
Again: amazing work. Keep it up!!
PS.: Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.
Author's Response:
You seem perfectly fluent to me my friend, and thank you for the kind words. I am doing my best to both tell a story for those who want it, and include the stuff for people who just want the fun steamy moments, so I'm glad to hear that you're appreciative of that. As for 'Homunculus' by Cayce, yes I have, it is one of my main inspirations as well as the first story I read on here when I was well below the age I should have been when interacting with the site and community (haha). Thank you for the review! I hope you continue to enjoy what I have planned!
[Report This]Date: January 06 2024 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh my goodness, this chapter was steamy and absolutely phenomenal. With how you wrote the Jake segment, I am hoping we get to see his other family members tag team Jake with their feet, maybe even all 5 at once although that may break Jake's mind lol. Like the other reviewers have said, I have been checking regularly for any updates. Your work has to be one of my favorite giantess stories I've read so far.
[Report This]Date: January 06 2024 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
Good lord! First half was soooooo freaking good!
[Report This]Date: January 06 2024 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 14
Okay that was very intense chapter first off nice job to Lizzy and Skylar for helping Jake with his reward. The Nine plot is getting really interesting and I can’t wait to see Jake and him meet again another great chapter dude 👍
[Report This]Date: January 04 2024 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
I love that this has more focus on the siblings. Keep it up! I wish there was a version of this series focusing only on Jake and his sisters. I find Chen's parts hot too but those scenarios with Nicky and Skylar were way hotter!
Btw, are you planning on posting this series on your DA too?
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm sorry you don't enjoy the Chen/Innomed side of things though, as for DA, I might, I'm not sure how well the site would support a large story, wasn't aware people did much reading there?
[Report This]Date: January 04 2024 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
Another amazing chapter! I enjoyed the development between Skylar and Lizzie, can't wait to see Jake get his reward from Skylar's feet. Also was not expecting that Dr. Chen plan. I do hope we get to see Jake have steamy feet moments with Jenna and his other sisters before he falls into the clutches of Dr. Chen again though. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thank you! No spoilers here, but, Chens arrival will not be the end of the family moments, so no worries there!
[Report This]Date: January 04 2024 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
Holy smokes I was not expecting that to happen but I love it regardless and the revel of Dr.Cher’s plan was crazy good bro I can’t stress this enough but you are amazing like straight up you might become the best author on the site at this rate
Author's Response:
You're very generous man, thank you, I think I'm quite a ways off, there are some really good stories and writers present here, but if I'm happy if you count me as one of your favorites!
[Report This]Date: January 03 2024 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just wanted to say I've followed you on Deviantart for a while, and had no idea you could write this well. Awesome story. Can't wait for the rest!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah I don't get the opportunity to write a whole bunch there, stuff needs to be condensed down into a single image for the most part, glad you like it!
Date: January 02 2024 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
One of the first stories in a long time that I’ve actually been checking the site throughout the day to see if there is an update it’s that good from the writing to the pacing
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'm trying to keep the chapters coming!
[Report This]Date: January 01 2024 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
Damn Jake about to live his wildest fantasy lol I Already love Lizzy and Skylar tag teaming to give Jake a reward for his struggles and Jake being the semi chad for standing up to Dr. Chen was awesome.
Also how do you pump out this chapters so fast it’s unreal how fast this chapter comes out
[Report This]Date: January 01 2024 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
Omg I love Lizzy so much she already a favorite of my after this chapter just beautiful work dude
Date: January 01 2024 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm still at chapter 8, my suggestion is to shrink him more than 1/8 inch, and the story inevitably goes on as an unaware one (maybe they think, or they are being told that their brother is at the lab). Maybe suggested scene could be an ant walking on the floor, 3 times bigger than him, crushed by one of the sisters, he end up between her toes and survived.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the suggestion, while I don't plan on the story shifting entirely into unaware, there will be unaware and possible bug crush involved!
[Report This]Date: January 01 2024 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
You are doing a great job with the pace of putting these great chapters out! Requests would be: being painted onto a toenail, trapped in the toilet, vacuuming/cleaning. All unaware.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had time off of work and tried to use it to get the ball rolling quickly, and your suggestions are noted and all very possible!
[Report This]Date: January 01 2024 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for the story! I've been enjoying everything immensely so far, and I'm low-key very jealous of how quick you've managed to pump these chapters out haha.
I'm usually not too big a fan of the 'Carelessly cruel' type of interactions where the giants know they should be more careful/a little nicer, and just...aren't. I more often prefer pure unaware or someone being actively cruel instead, but I've been really enjoying it so far in this story. The Chen stuff is great like others have said, but I was honestly waiting for a scene like the movie viewing one where all the women thud their dirty feet up on the counter by Jake, and that scene delivered for me haha.
I usually don't make requests since I know authors have their own plans, but since you asked I'll throw in another vote for Jenna being the one sits on him and buries him beneath her butt. I've also fallen in love with Lizzy embarrassingly quickly (I could have read several more chapters of him being stuck in that shoe lol) and definitely hope that she can ask Skylar to borrow her 'Lucky pebble' again. Or at the very least cheer her up by making her think Jake loves her feet haha.
Thank you for writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, the idea of a family member being so careless with their shrunken son/brother is a difficult sell and I try and back it up as much as I can with a hopefully rational or believable reason why they might act that way. I'm also glad you like Lizzy so much, she seems to be a fan favorite so she will definitely play a significant role! Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: January 01 2024 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
Dude you are killing it with this story is honestly surprising how quickly I got hooked into this story. I already love Lizzy character and Jake being determined to make it back to his family and the Chen story line is so good and I can’t wait to see what her plans are. Overall you are doing great
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the reviews man! I'm glad you're enjoying! And I'll just say, no spoilers of course, that everything you've suggested is easily something I could fit in, if not already planned! So look forward to that!
[Report This]Date: December 31 2023 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Man this has been fantastic!! Love seeing the family go from people who were worried that every little thing could kill Jake, to being even semi casual about his safety now that they know he's very durable. They care but they know they have more leeway with him.
As to what I'd love to see, honestly I'd love to see a full tour chapter where Jenna accidentally eats Jake, probably because she was more careless at dinner, and decides when she realizes that she'll just wait til her son comes out the other end.
Jake needs a good week long vacation back inside the woman who gave birth to him
Author's Response:
Noted friend! While I don't know if I'm gonna sacrifice a whole week of story to dedicate to it, full tour was always on the table, though I haven't decided who should send him on his way, I'll keep the idea in mind! Definitely a fan of the idea of "returning to your roots" inside of a giantess mother though, thank you for the kind words as well!
[Report This]Date: December 31 2023 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
Damn some fun nose action already a 10/10 chapter in my opinion.
can’t wait to see what happens next for Jake and when he reunite with his family I’m already see Jenna showering him with endless kisses when he gets back and the rest of the girls when he is safely home.
As for your comment about what we would like to see although not guaranteed I’ll say.
- more of Jade being gross/tomboyish around Jake with any part of her body.
- Skylar wanting to make it up to Jake by using her feet
- Jenna being a clumsy mom with any part of her body.
and that’s mostly it for now for me personally but great work so dude you are killing it with this story
Date: December 30 2023 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a phenomenal story so far. IMO best on the site in a while. Especially when it comes to you describing in such detail the sense of scale and just how small he is. I can’t imagine what it’d be like to experience a fart at that speck of a size! Please keep going and know that everyone is anxiously awaiting the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you, the scale is super important to me, and though I don't want to spoil anything, I'll simply say that you may get a detailed description of what a fart is like for someone so small sometime soon! ;)
[Report This]Date: December 30 2023 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 8
Dude I love Jake as a character so far and his struggle to keep his horney side from his family but that make so hard is probably my favorite part about this situation lol
as for DR Chen she goes super hard core and I love it and her as well
Author's Response:
The struggle is real! I'm glad you like it! And you can already tell, but you'll have plenty more with Dr Chen soon! Thank you for the review!
Date: December 30 2023 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Gonna be honest, the best parts of this story are the ones with Chen.
The slow, methodical approach with actual purpose is amazing.
The family thing feels 'lol, how random' in comparison, even if it's hot in its own way.
Author's Response:
Yeah it feels that way doesn't it? The family side of the story right now is just your classic horny writing, I'm hoping I can make it more impactful as the two worlds get closer together and eventually merge, I'm glad you're enjoying the Chen side though! I'm putting a lot of thought into it! Or trying to anyway!