Whooooooooo I love it Jada action and spending time with Becca and Jenna being the sexy MILF that she is man I can’t wait to see what the other girls will do now in the pool party 

Still really enjoying this story, I love the characters actually feel like normal people that are fun to be around. I get the feeling Jake may struggle around his moms friends. Look forward to more :) 

I do love how these characters feel like actual characters for the most part. I mean no offense but I fully expected only smut lol no story.

Jada talks about how she pretty much made herself an archetype to stand out as a middle child.

Chen coming to the realization that she relied on having Jake as a malleable and easily manipulated boy toy just as much as he relied on her(rare to see gts stories that actually pay mind to the potential negative effects that owning a specific tiny person would have on the owner. Usually just the tiny is affected)

Jenna's mental gymnastics about her son and just being happy he's back.

Really excited to see where this goes. I have a prediction but it all depends on whether or not all your tags and size roles tell the exact future of the story or some things are left out.

Keep up the good work

Sniff 😢 omg that was beautiful 🥹😭😭😭 this chapter was everything I could have imagined 😭😭😭 thank you for this gift and Finally we get to see Jada greatness as she is officially my favorite sister of the family and it only took her 1 chapter 🤧🤧🤧🤧

here to future interactions of Jake and Jada always being this way and once again thank you 😊 

This might not be the most popular opinion, but I hope Jake grows enough to be heard or at least someone like Nicole gets the devices to comunicate with him. I say someone like Nicole, first because she is my favorite character right now. Jake’s description of her is perfect: a adorable dork. Her interactions with him are by far the most wholesome.

I know most don’t seek this in a story about fetish, but to me it’s important to have a story and character relations backing up the more steamy parts.
Which brings me to the topic of Jake having desires and feelings he shouldn’t have for his family. Desires because he feels some level of arousal – and feelings because he sees his family as a family as monsters while, at the same time, seeking punishment for desires they – his sisters - seem happy to stimulate on him.

Now this is aimportant part most stories on the site gloss over: only the one who is small bears all the moral burden. But Jake’s sisters and even his mother have some sort of connection with him that clearly exceeds the boundaries of fraternal love.

That’s why I said my opinion/sugestion might not be the most popular: to see Jake grow just enough to be heard and seen in some detail. Maybe the size of a bug is enough to play and interact more, especially with Nicole.

Due to having barely meet before, I can see Nicole accidentally developing something towards Jake. Something she shouldn’t and that will leave her feeling guilty, feeling like a degenerate… just like Jake. To feel like he feels – which would lead to a better, more mature, understanding the situation and torments he is currently facing when compared to the rest of the family nucleus.

Jake is always very selfaware, to the point of blaming himself for things he objectively has no control over. Most of all, him trying his best to connect
despite the size difference is endearing to me. And would be interesting to see him strugling with those feelings together with Nicole. They seem, after all, to be very alike in some points.

And because it would be interesting to see how it can affect not only their budding relationship, but also “goddess” Chein indoctrination and plans and the rest of the family. Would Jake say Nicole is wrong for having such feelings and thoughts? Like Jake recognized, he is no angel. But neither are his family and everyone aroud him. What about Jenna? Would she get angry at Jake? Or maybe blame herself and choose to hand Jake back to Innomed as to stop Nick and the others from seeing him?

It’s just an idea that ocurred to me – since Jake’s self loathing steam’s most from his desires being linked to his family… well, what if it happened the other way around too? I mean, one of the sisters developing real feelings and desires linked to him?

Thanks for your kind response before. Let me know what you think or if I am talking nonsense.

Did you already had a number of chapters ready beforehand? I think I've never seen a uploading pace quite like yours (not complaining - I am really glad for that!)

Again, thanks for writng and sharing with us! I hope I will be able to see the end of Jake’s olfactory odyssey.

Can't wait to see Jada have her way with Jake, hopefully we get to see Jake lose control again and give in. The way you write those scenarios with Jake's family is so good, the details of the smells and the huge size difference Jake experiences is so hot. When Jake does shrink again, I hope there's a way for his size to be adjusted still because I find that his family being able to at least see him a little bit makes the scenarios way hotter as opposed to seeing and feeling nothing if Jake becomes microscopic in size. All in all, keep up the great work!

I've been reading along with each chapter as it's come out and finally decided to make a review! This is genuinely one of the best stories I've read on this site. You've been updating it so fast and I appreciate it so much. I love the descriptions of the sizes and smells of everything, it's so well done. I've been waiting for this chapter a while, finally alone with Jada! Hope we get some fart content with this one. Whatever happens I can't wait to read it, thank you for writing!

Author's Response:

I hope it was what you imagined! Thank you!

And once again another perfect chapter like scoring multiple touchdowns in football you just can’t be stopped with this greatness of a story

first - Jake experience with this new view of the world in his size was awesome and very well detailed so nice job there and him making friends with Antonio was great quickly reminded me of Honey I shrunk the kids but hopefully he survives long 

second - I can wait too see more of Ashley she already has my interest in the story 

and the ending of the chapter got me so hyped overall great job

Holy cow I just…. Words can barely describe how good this story is like it’s insane!!!!!!! First of Jake being apart of the love session here was hot as hell and I love Lizzy so much she already my favorite non family character and I can already tell she won’t be the last

second a pool party whaaaaaaaat!!!! Sign me the hell up for this party already 

third noooooo I wanted more Jada moments curse her work life for taking that away from me lol 

lastly Dr.Chen is such a great villain or antagonist in this story like damn she willing to do anything.

overall once again great chapter literal masterpiece 

PS - I kinda hope to see more mouth play with any of the characters, Butt action, and just to be sweet if Jake has to sleep with his mother for a night then she should have him sleep in her bellybutton in my personal opinion but you do you with this amazing story 

Oh my goodness, this chapter was steamy and absolutely phenomenal. With how you wrote the Jake segment, I am hoping we get to see his other family members tag team Jake with their feet, maybe even all 5 at once although that may break Jake's mind lol. Like the other reviewers have said, I have been checking regularly for any updates. Your work has to be one of my favorite giantess stories I've read so far.