[Report This]Date: December 19 2009 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
well done Amanda!
Author's Response: Hi girlfood sorry i have not been in contact i have been trying to get my life back into some semblance of order i will contact you when i am at peace with myself again,thanks for not losing faith in me xx.
[Report This]Date: December 17 2009 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
You definitely reached me where I live with this one. Excellent writing from a rich imagination and talent.
Author's Response:
Oooh that sounds sexy i am so glad you liked it.
Amanda.
[Report This]Date: December 10 2009 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Like always i love your writing, a lil different but all around great story so far
Author's Response:
Hello stranger nice to hear from you again as always a nice comment xx keep in touch i don't bite i swallow.
Amanda
Date: December 10 2009 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
We have been conversing in e-mail so you already know I love you stuff. This is my favorite entry so far (number 10). I love your style and what you include. I know my particular tastes in the genre are the minority but you definately know how to write them.
Author's Response:
Yes you do say the nicest things to me i hope my next chapter will give you as plesure as my last xx.
Amanda.
Date: December 10 2009 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 9
Hope it's not a silly question, but I can't tell.
Has she shrunken Matthew or is she eating him full sized?
Author's Response:
She is enjoying her meal full size at the moment,all will be revealed shortly.xx.
Amanda.
Date: December 07 2009 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'd definetely love to write a story with you
Author's Response:
Yes i think that would be a lot of fun lets discuss the details,you have my e-mail looking forward to working with you take care xx.
Amanda.
Date: December 07 2009 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
Is she letting Matthew read her mind's memories of Jonathon's fate?
Author's Response:
Only glimpses to feed her desires after all she is practiced in the hunt,she knows what she wants from her quarry,Mathew must be able to fullfil his destiny to her for to gain pleasures from him before he is................
Amanda.
Date: December 07 2009 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
Of course all your regular fans know where this is going. But I must say the telling is getting better each time.
Author's Response:
Mmmm i have thought about that.
Amanda.
Date: December 07 2009 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
The uncertainties in this chapter, the way Matthew is lost in a world of just him and the girl, and the way she verbally plays with him (like a cat with a mouse) all adds up to a thoroughly captivating chapter. I was so glad you'd already loaded ch5&6 too, after I read this.
Author's Response:
I have deliberately left him in a world of uncertainty the truth still unknown,his future soon to be revealed.
Amanda.
[Report This]Date: December 04 2009 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
Excellent! You have my full attention (in more ways than one).
Author's Response:
Thank you yummy the stories direction is changing constantly i have some many avenues in which i can turn to tease and torment Mathew i am not sure myself wich path i shall take.
Thank you for your kind words xx.
Amanda.
Date: December 03 2009 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
Knowing what I do about Amanda's dietary tastes, the suspense is fantastic.
Your imagery and punctuation is gaining quality in leaps and bounds. This story has me gripping my mouse to see the next bit each time...
Author's Response:
Thank you Timescribe you know me to well, i'm not sure yet how far i shall take this the ideas are flowing in so many directions that its difficult to choose the right path,i shall leave a trail of mysteries to confuse the readers mind...change its direction to and fro until an ending has been found,take care xx.
Amanda.
Date: December 03 2009 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
I think this is your first multi-chapter piece, and I'm glad you continued it as chapter one left some suspenseful unanswered questions.
Going after innocent Matthew sounds like a sexy sequel too....
Author's Response:
Mathew is going to be memorable i hope,it may still leave the reader perplexed i'm afraid...not sure which way my feelings will direct me yet.Thank you for taking time to read and review chapter 2 xx.
Amanda.
Date: December 01 2009 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
like it, a bit different but very good.
waiting for more of your stories, like the way you write :)
Author's Response:
Its a work in progress Daniel i am sure once i have added the more...interesting bits to it you shall like it a lot more,thank you for your kind words xx.
Amanda.
[Report This]Date: November 30 2009 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful beginning. I can't wait for the next addition...
Author's Response:
The words are already forming in my head in readiness to transform it from mediocre to totally sexy.
Amanda.
Date: November 30 2009 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting. And who is Jonathan? And Matthew?
Author's Response:
The story is based partly on a factual event which happened to me on the weekend just past,Jonathon was the name of the pest who hit on me.
Mathew is just a name i grabbed from a book,the story is incomplete i shall continue to add more i just needed to lay down my thoughts whilst the anger was still in my heart.
Amanda.