Date: August 24 2016 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 12 The Promise Made
This one sure is controlling!
[Report This]Date: October 13 2012 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
Really, really loved this story, and favorited it. It's a shame you're still not writing new material on here.
Date: August 17 2011 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 12 The Promise Made
Overall a somewhat well written but there where some parts I didn't like, espcially the insect, but that's just me.
Date: August 17 2011 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 10 Life in a Cage
I'm pretty sure the ferrets would eat them, right? Ferrets like to eat rodets after all.
Date: August 17 2011 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 7 Jen Learns a Lesson
Dam, there was no need for punishment here... That's so sad. Insect is gross.
Date: August 17 2011 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 6 Bath Time
Well I guess there was worse people Tim and Jen could be stick with. I hope Tim is alright.
Date: August 17 2011 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 3 Tim's Return
Well tihs chapter happened rather quickly. I hope she doesn't hurt Tim again...
Date: August 17 2011 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 2 Tormenting Tim
The hawk is Tim ticket out of there. Pehaps the hawk should take him to a new home with a different character(s) but I see you have already written the next chapter so it'll be interesting to see.
Date: August 17 2011 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
This is looking good so far. Tim seems like a nice guy though, very polite. I'm eager to see what happens next.
Date: February 10 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
OMG Pamela this stry Is Getting as Hot as In & Out could u do One more show of force here however and put them both into your Mouth together and threatten to swallow them but then let them out; That wouold be so Cool! PammyBaby! oops I'm sorry I used the Pammy word, Sory Goddess won't happen again your Friend
David
Date: January 08 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 10 Life in a Cage
The first half of this chapter had me almost in tears of laughter, a rare treat on a forum which usually effects other parts of me. It reminds me of years ago, when I took my codeine-constipated bowels to the doctor. He said "Your bowel has to move at its natural pace. No amount of grunting and straining can speed things up."
Maybe Jen is of a species with different bowels.
Glad you've gotten in touch with life, but not as our doctors know it. LOL.
Author's Response: Laughter is a good thing! Makes up for the crying in earlier writings. LOL
Date: January 08 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
I think ever time you add a new chapter your have added anotther fan! Pamela! your writing does Rock please let all of your talents Out! don't hold out on us Cause I see a new young star waiting to shine!
Date: January 05 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
Hi, Pamela
Something I really like about giantess Pamela in all the chapters (I hope I can explain this properly)...the way she shows her complete control by never really losing her temper with her pets. She gives an order and either they comply or they face the very creative consequences she comes up with for them. By doing so, she exhibits not only her physical superiority, but also her intellectual superiority. And the way she makes them put on a show for her doing the most demeaning things only serves to highlight their insignificance in her world. Thanks for writing this great story!
Author's Response: Thank you. My D/s background is where I get a lot of inspiration. The mind is the best part of a scene. The body just follows along.
Date: December 28 2009 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
Hi Pamela! I Just wanted to say you Rock! I loved this story from day 1 From your detailed discriptions to your creative twists like saving tim from the Hawk, to the very humiliating but Erotic punishments you make seem so real to reader! please Continue this and all your wonderful Works! And Thank you! for sharing with us all!
David
Author's Response: David, Thanks for the compliment. Erotic punishments are the best, aren't they? I'm glad I can make it real for you.
Date: December 27 2009 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 8 A Lesson in Humilation
This is your best chapter, even surpassing the edible paint gimic in chapter 1
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement. I had some time over the holidays.
[Report This]Date: December 26 2009 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
Hi, Pamela
I've never taken the time to write in response to reading a story before, but I wanted to tell you how much I enjoy this story and hope you continue with it. Pamela is so unbelievably inventive and clever in making her pets helplessly bend to her wishes! I've enjoyed the entire story and how Pamela uses humiliation and shame as training tools. In that vein, I think it would be cool to see how you might write a scene in a future chapter where Pamela moves Tim and his sister into cages and trains them to act like little animals. Whatever you could come up with, I'm sure it would be great and I would look forward to devouring it word-by-word. Thanks so much for your contribution.
Author's Response: Actually, it is funny you say that because I have been working on using my love of my ferrets with my interest in the size-differential writings I have been working on. So yes, you will see them being introduced to my ferret cages. I have recently lost one, and another is quite ill, so instead of five, I will only have three, so adding Tim and Jen to the now-open cage will be a fun way to get over the loss. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me!
Date: December 14 2009 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bath Time
Good story & great writing, but I'm a bit perturbed & upset that I just read this entire story & there was not ONE feet section, as was indicated in the tags for this story! NOT COOL! Gimme some smelly feet...NOW! lol
Author's Response:
Oh my...I guess I was thinking of the other one when I put that... I will have to include feet in the next chapter!! My apologies. I'm glad you put up with the rest of it, though! Remember it was my first time posting to this (or ANY site), so I am a rooky at that, and writing. But I promise to do better! <grin>
[Report This]Date: December 06 2009 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 2 Tormenting Tim
Hi Pamela, I enjoyed this story very much.
I like how creative Pamela is in tormenting and humiliating helpless Tim.
It is really pity the hawk took him. I was hoping the story would continue. Please, save his life and let him drop back into the pool :)
I personally would prefer if there is not any other shrunk woman or man. She could turn him into her small personal servant performing various tasks for her amusement. She would laugh and humiliate him even more. She would deny his orgasms and lock his penis into a chastity belt. He would be very horny but would not be able to have an orgasm until she unlocks the chastity device. And this would be very rarely (once per couple of weeks) after his good performance and his orgasms would be always very humiliating. (then he would go back into the chastity belt) On the other hand Pamela would not restrict herself. Tim would be her sex-toy whenever / wherever / however available for her lust.
Maybe Pamela's mother could come to visit ... as her daughter she would be a natural dome and would enjoy Tim too.Pamela, many thanks for the great story and have nice day.
Author's Response: The reason I haven't written more yet is because I can't decide what to do next! SO many options! But stay tuned. And thanks for your kind words of encouragement.
Date: December 01 2009 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
I would not change the ending of the story at all. It ended as it should have. Again, you might want to expand on the Pamela character's background. Do not change Tim in any way nor give him any background; he is a mystery and that is the way it should be. This story focuses on the Pamela character and that, too, is the way it should be.
Author's Response: So you think I should rewrite some background information about me into the story? Or do another one, with more information in IT? And since I am so new to this genre, I didn't give him much background because I couldn't think of any to give him! I felt like I was cheating, but am glad it did not come across that way. Thanks for the input. -- Pamela
[Report This]Date: December 01 2009 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 Getting Acquainted
(I originally reviewed this story but deleted my review so I could expand on it...)
This story is very very good. In fact, while I am a long-time visitor to this site, I just now registered simply so I could positively review this story.
The narrative is of a considerably higher quality than I have seen in most other stories. If I was a publishing editor and this story was submitted to me, I'd recommend some grammatical tweaks and other minor narration clarifications. (Perhaps write in the 3rd person...?) You might even want to consider expanding it with even more character development for the Pamela character. Pamela, you might even consider submitting this story to a fetish-related magazine.
Something that I very much enjoyed was the apparent ease with which the narration came. It flowed well, was not choppy nor amateurish, and it almost seemed that you enjoyed writing it. I envy that because I would find good narration personally difficult to write.
Overall, though, the story idea itself is excellent and, as a man with the tiny-man fetish, it is much more pleasing coming from a woman; I don't feel like guy is trying to verbally jack me off.
Pamela, you definitely have talent. I'd love to ask you some questions about yourself and this story...
Thanks for posting it! I look forward to reading more of your work.
Author's Response: I started in third person and then switched it. Next time I will do third person and see if that is actually easier. Feel free to email me at pamelapleases@aol.com with any questions or comments. I'd like to learn more about the clarifications and tweaks you mentioned so I can fix them. And I'd consider sending to a magazine if I knew of any! I am too new to know that kind of stuff just now, but am interested in learning more. I did enjoy writing it. My background is more in the BDSM/Dominant/submission world so I think it translated well to a Giantess theme. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement.