[Report This]Date: November 14 2009 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
It was a good story, but I felt the ending was a bit of a cop out. Did you grow tired of it and decide to end it off, or was it always intended?
Author's Response: Appreciate your feedback. Not the first time I've heard that my story endings are lacking. I definitely wasn't tired of writing Cherry's tale, and it was the ending I envisioned the whole time. It could have been a bit more fleshed out though.
[Report This]Date: November 14 2009 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Did the Pheromones really need to mutate in order to have that effect? Wouldn't they have become that much more powerful simply by virtue of being much larger? :)
But now I'm wondering what exactly a pheromone actually is. On such an incredibly massive scale, would it be something visible to the naked eye? Hmm....
Author's Response:
Ah yes, Pheromones. Can't say I know much about them. I do love the concept though, and how it can tie in with a giantess. It's one thing for a girl like Cherry to trash a city and its population, but throwing in the ability to automatically enslave the people she's tormenting really appeals to me.
I kind of went with the mutated angle, so that they would spread throughout the world...kind of like a disease of sorts.