Not bad. Keep it up 

Not bad. Keep it up 

I know it's a little silly for me to be putting reviews out there, given that I'm the one who commissioned you for this project, but I decided to do so, both for this chapter and for the broader work itself. I really enjoyed the lemony goodness in this one, given Ruri's "come to momma" vibes she conveys within the original manga. It was amusing for her to essentially give Shizuku a mommy complex when she ended up breastfeeding her after Sota.

I also enjoy it every time when Sota has a massive group romping session in three ways or foursomes with his harem. I basically figured that since Shizuku and Momomi were on the thicker side compared to the other women that they would be the type to "chow down" when it came to getting their freak on with Sota in the bedroom, and you delivered on that idea splendidly, as well as the breast milk scene with Ruri.

All-in-all, a fine addition to the broader story, at least in my opinion. Good stuff!

Very good read. I enjoyed it lots.

Need to have more fun stories like this to read.

Great job. I hope you have more stories like this up your sleeve. 

Thank you 

Great job. I hope you have more stories like this up your sleeve. 

Thank you 

Thank you for putting this chapter out there. I don't know if the manga will ever be concluded or not; I get the feeling that it's gonna remain in perpetual limbo, but that's just my two cents. Anyways, it was nice to see a chapter where Sota and Kaoru work out the sexual angst between the two of them, given their subconscious feelings for one another in the original manga. It was nice to have a hypothetical "what if you're not related" scenario where Kaoru finally has the green light to do what she's wanted to do for quite some time.

I've enjoyed every chapter of this story so far, but this chapter held a particular place for me, since Kaoru always seemed to kind of give off "favorite girl" vibes from Sota's point of view, at least on a subconsciously repressed level, even though he had crush on Ayano, dated Shizuku first, and appeared somewhat committed to being with Sanae for a while. I know the incest angle adds a strong sense of taboo to the whole mix (which some might find kinky), so I wondered on some way that hurdle could be overcome in this fanfiction, and you've delivered on that hypothetical splendidly.

This whole read has been enjoyable for me (for somewhat obvious reasons), and I'm hoping for more in the future. I just wanted to put this review out there to show my appreciation, both for this particular chapter and for the work as a whole.

Not bad keep it up.

I like the story so far. Keep it up 

Loved hiding him in her costume!