Reviewer: It Was Me Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2023 4:19 AM Title: Part 2

That was a nice little twist there at the end. I feel like I should have seen it coming, but I didn't even think about Kyle coming down with the virus too.

Of course, I think that adds some significant weight to Will's question of what all of this means for the three of them going forward. Are Will and Kyle pretty much just going to switch places during Kyle's time with the virus? Would it be weird or even appropriate for Will to be the new benefactor of Sofia's sexual buildup at shrinking someone, this time her actual boyfriend? Will has been in her vagina, but does that mean normal-sized sex between them is cool now? Would Kyle go along with that, and even if he did, what kind of effect would it have on his mental health to see his girlfriend and best friend doing that, even if he's involved too?

And most importantly, what exactly does Sofia have in mind for those weeks when both Will and Kyle are tiny?

You set up a pretty unique dynamic between these three character, which really made me stop and think about these questions after finishing the story. This was really just a romp kind of story without much plot, but you still managed to build these characters up in such a way that the reader almost has to wonder about stuff like that. That's not really a surprise, given your other work that I've read so far, but it's still impressive.

Sofia is a really interesting character. She obviously cares about Will, but sometimes she lets her own fun cloud her judgment both with what she says and what she tries to do (trying to trick the guys into a three way with an unwitting Will in her pussy was a lot meaner and maybe even more dangerous than I think she realized). Still, she means well and shows that she really does care enough that the guys don't hold it against her (and maybe even like her more for it at times). And her finding ways to tease both Will AND Kyle with Will's size is an art form that she has mastered.

I also liked how Kyle continued to try to advocate for Will but also continued to give in to Sofia at times. That struggle made him more interesting for sure. And the way he sometimes joined his girlfriend in teasing Will (apparently a lot about leaving him at that size) was fun but didn't feel like it crossed a line. In a way, that was probably the most normal he could have treated his friend.

And Will's mental state as he ventured into the unknown of shrinking below the average floor was a joy to follow. It was one of those emotional rollercoasters I keep hearing about. His growing fear and depression is nicely conveyed, but it's balanced out with the inevitable three way I mentioned was inevitable (hence the name) in my last review and especially that birthday surprise. It was really touching that at his lowest point, his friends, at their busiest part of the school year, took the time to celebrate his birthday. And that line about the cupcake being the best he's ever had other than the taste was perfect.

Overall, for your first foray into a couples story (or even just as a story in general), this was really good! 

Author's Response:

That awkward conversation Will was going to have is probably still going to happen, just in a different context. I think that whatever they all decide it'll be something they all enjoy, as strange as it is.

Sofia is definitely the driving sexual force of the story, cajoling the boys into her wild fantasies as Will gets smaller. She definitely cares for both of them, which is what keeps her manipulations from going in a darker direction.

Ultimately I wanted them all to remain friends through the shrinking, so a few scenes showing how strong the relationship is were needed. I thought the birthday thing was a nice way to show how much they value their tiny friend, even if he's kind of their pet for a year lol.

Reviewer: amaotoko Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2023 6:28 AM Title: Part 1

Incredible story!!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: It Was Me Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2023 10:40 PM Title: Part 1

So when they say it takes a year for the virus to stabilize, are they talking a year from when you reach your bottom or a year from when you caught the virus? Or is it a year from the diagnosis, with the doctors just using that arbitrary number to cover their asses?

So it seems pretty clear that Sofia and Kyle were aware that Will was attracted to Sofia well before the shrinking virus. Neither of them seemed surprised when she set off his shrinking for the first time. In fact, Kyle seemed almost a tad smug about it. I think Will feeling the way he does about Sofia (being attracted to her but seeing her as off limits) and the couple's knowledge of said feelings (unbeknownst to Will) sets up this odd three-way relationship really well.

Sofia is obviously a lot of fun. I'm guessing by all her intimate touching of Will even before she was trying to shrink him (hugging him tight a couple times and kissing him on the cheek) that she has always liked to tease him a bit. Or maybe she's just the touchy-feely type, or she may even just like the attention Will gives her, but it just seems like getting Will all hot and bothered from time to time would be something that matches her personality.

It was great to see her show some sincerity to Will when he confronted her about the intentional shrinking. She made some great points, too. Getting him to his smallest size quicker, rather than drawing it out, would let him focus on living his life (although his options would be limited, to be sure). Sitting around worrying about it every day for month after month would have likely become torturous after a while. And Sofia's reassurance that Kyle and her would take care of him (I don't think he was necessarily worried that they wouldn't, but it had to be nice to hear out loud, especially from someone who has seemingly been making light of his situation up to that point) was heartwarming, as was her flash of legit happiness once Will came around. Not to mention her acknowledging that Kyle and her were actually worried about him (most likely his mental state, since they could keep him safe physically) is good for him to know, since the couple seemed to bury that worry and focus on the lighter side of the situation.

And the handjob was nice, too, I'm sure.

Then there's Kyle, who's in a pretty weird spot. I think most people would hate the situation he's in. I mean, his girlfriend is getting hot over another guy (I know, I know, it's what's happening to him more than just him, but still!) and his best friend is clearly into his girlfriend. But instead of being upset about the whole thing, he's actually feeding off of their emotions instead, enjoying Sofia's teasing of Will and what it does to her and feeling guilty about what it's doing to his friend. His rationalization is interesting, telling Will that college is about experimenting and approving of his girlfriend's antics as a "reward" for the hardship his friend is going through.

It was also intriguing to see him get a little defensive when Will seemed to feel a little betrayed that Kyle knew what Sofia was doing. That implies that his guilt is legitimate, but his libido is in the driver's seat. That can make things interesting down the road.

And Will, of course, is having to maneuver through all this. He's freaking out that he's going to be tiny, and he's not sure how to react as the people he has trusted seem to be enjoying his condition. Again, I think Sofia talking to him was important, as it reminded him that they were friends and gave him some insight into why the couple was handling things the way they were. Sofia was right, the virus was ruling him, not just in the way he thought about it but in the way that it made him think about his friends as well. Once he realized that they were taking things lightly BECAUSE they knew he was safe and just wanted him to loosen up and get in on the fun, the virus kind of lost its power over him, mentally, at least.

That is, until he dropped below six inches. That's a whole other level of stress, not knowing where that floor really is.

The second half of this looks like it's going to be really fun! It'll be interesting to see how Sofia navigates teasing Will at those smaller sizes. And while I'm not into couples stories generally, the build-up for the inevitable three-way has gotten me kind of into the idea.

I'm just wondering how all of that is going to affect the relationship between the three of them once Will grows back (assuming there aren't any ... complications with that).

Author's Response:

The one year thing is kind of like how a doctor says leave a cast on for X number of weeks, it's just an outside thing to be on the safe side.

I don't usually write giant couple's stuff but I decided to make an exception for this particular commissioner. As far as the relationship between these three goes, it's like Kyle says, it's weird but they all care about each other so they're making it work, for now anyway.

Anyways the second half is going to be fun!

Reviewer: hornet Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2023 8:08 AM Title: Part 1

Your slow shrinking stories really are the best. Can't wait for next part!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I do love some slow shrinking, it allow for more drama I think.